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Finally Finally Finall.ly i read it

and here my view

First ofall...after reading the first part...i got a heart attack...

seriously...because this was a  concept for my another os...like the raji one which i wrote for the new year.

and after coming to the second part..i got super happy

becaue ur story turned differently than mine...i am relieved

U made me so happy with the story and with the characterization too,.

Hmm i loved when gopi decided to take matter in her hands..u could have prolonged it.but u ended so soon,.😭

seriously a very good no great way to end the story  and of all the parts i like it where gopi tells ahem that she is most suited in sarees..super👏

and i loved it when gopi started to beat him...should have bet him first and then hugged him...😉

at a point i thought gopi was preggy and was totally ready to bash ahem for leaving her.but it turned out differnt..happy for ahem lovers sad for me.

all in all a great ss..nd a apt title.

well done. dear..really good.👏

Originally posted by: shaina.sharma

Finally Finally Finall.ly i read it

and here my view

First ofall...after reading the first part...i got a heart attack...

seriously...because this was a  concept for my another os...like the raji one which i wrote for the new year.

and after coming to the second part..i got super happy

becaue ur story turned differently than mine...i am relieved

U made me so happy with the story and with the characterization too,.

Hmm i loved when gopi decided to take matter in her hands..u could have prolonged it.but u ended so soon,.😭

seriously a very good no great way to end the story  and of all the parts i like it where gopi tells ahem that she is most suited in sarees..super👏

and i loved it when gopi started to beat him...should have bet him first and then hugged him...😉

at a point i thought gopi was preggy and was totally ready to bash ahem for leaving her.but it turned out differnt..happy for ahem lovers sad for me.

all in all a great ss..nd a apt title.

well done. dear..really good.👏

Originally posted by: Xarina

I have such a smile on my face.😊  That was a good update.  👏

X xx

Originally posted by: famzii05

it was a pleasure to read!! loved it!! loved the ending!!  👏...