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love the sari more than the dress love the update please pm 

Hey chika

thanks for the pm..wonderful OS..i read the whole in a complete go and what is aham doing here ?
😡
But i liked the last part...Gopi as strong and determined girl..I am sure she will win this fight..(please update soon..)

Loved the update Chika. I can't wait for the next part. pm me when you have updated. xx

Amazing Update Chika Loved it  Edited by Bloem123 - 12 years ago

amazing update and i just started reading this OS and it was great

your are truly talented👏

That was great Chika!!! Ahem is such an idiot, if he wasn't sure about his feeling why go for a divorce. You sure made him a dumbo Chika 😆

that was lovely!! aww, ahem said she's beautiful! luving this OS!! continue soon...she looks reeli nice and better, different from the other women in the sari, my choice! 😃 continue soon!!

Originally posted by: famzii05

should she make them longer?? like our posts one the spell of insanity??😆

Exactly like that 😆 one update should be 150 pages long ! I demand it Chika ! 😡😆

Finally ! A determined and strong Gopi ! 😆 Hate Ahem here ..Atleast he is still confused on who to pick..Talk about predictability though when our strong Gopi is out on the loose..it is sure that he will pick her 😆 Amazing update ! Can't wait for more. 😳 Edited by GohamHungry - 12 years ago

amazing update chika...loved it
omg cant wait to read the next part...
update soon