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VirMan Suhaag Raat (2 part story) (Page 2)

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Posted: 20 December 2011 at 1:58pm | IP Logged
Hey guys Thank You for all positive answers. This is the last part of this story ENJOYSmile

PART 2:

  After manvi came back from the bathroon, wearing a beautiful red salwar suit, she didnt see chep anywhere and just turned around. As she turned aroung a she felt a force pull her towards him by her waste.
Manvi: Chep, Koi a jayenge
Virat: Anne do, waise tumhe nehi lagta ki humari suhaag raat bohat chota tha.
(Manvi blushes after hearing about their suhaag raat)
Virat: Oye hoye mera bandaria sharmana bhi janta hai
Manvi: Choro mujhe (she said while blushing)
then as she was going away virat pulled her over and cornerd her against the wall.
Virat: Tum jaante ho ki kall raat mera sab se suraat raat tha
Manvi looks at him with a smile; she tries to push virat away but virat doesnt let her go.
Then virat takes her dupatta away from her neck and replaces it with thousands of kisses
Manvi tries to get away but he was holding her too tight and just as virat was aiming for a kiss and he was just centimeter away.
He was interrupted by Jeevika and chachi.
Virat: Arre mera family mujhe akela nahi sor sakti kya
Manvi laughs
Jeevika: Darwaza khulo raat me soye nehi kya
Chachi: ha jeevika such kaharahi hai shararat kiya kya
Manvi: Dekha kaha na koi ajenge
Virat: sad ko bahar rehene do kuch aur shararat karti hai
Manvi pushes virat and oppens the door
Jeevika: itni der kyun lagayi
chachi: aur ab bi shararat karrahi thi kya
Manvi: nahi
Jeevika: toh tumhari dupatta kha hai
Then both jeevika and chachi look at virat and sees he has her dupatta.
Jeevika: dever ji tumhara raat aur subah kaisa tha
Virat(thinks to himself): abhi tak to thik thi par aplok to disturb kiya.
Then they both leave after telling virat and manvi to hurry up and come downstairs
while manvi was getting ready she could not tie her dori so virat came bahind her and tied it for her and also kissed the bare back
and then he put the sindoor and the mangalsutra on her.
Then both of them went downstairs holding eachothers hands and after their family saw them they started teasing them about their first night together and all that.


That is it for the story sorry guys i know the ending was terrible, it's just that i ran out of ideas and PLEASE comment and press the like button if you thought it was OKBig smile




Edited by virmanforever - 20 December 2011 at 4:14pm

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Posted: 20 December 2011 at 3:28pm | IP Logged
It has a very cute ending sweetheart! It was amazing
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Posted: 20 December 2011 at 4:13pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by thesh

It has a very cute ending sweetheart! It was amazing



Thank you
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Posted: 20 December 2011 at 4:42pm | IP Logged
It waaas awosmee!! Naaaw!! :D 
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Posted: 20 December 2011 at 5:57pm | IP Logged
that was really amazing
Plz pm me for your future events:)
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Posted: 20 December 2011 at 9:33pm | IP Logged
It was very cute and romantic ending. 
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Posted: 20 December 2011 at 10:45pm | IP Logged
Very nice ending... thanks for the PM..
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Originally posted by preethis

Very nice ending... thanks for the PM..

You are welcome

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