VirMan Suhaag Raat (2 part story)

Posted: 12 years ago
INDEX:
Part 2- Page 2

Hey guys i just made up a story about manvi and virat's suhaag raat and i wanted to share it but ia m not a big fan it so you guys have to rate and comment on this hope you enjoy😊

<font color="#0000FF">PART 1:</font>

It was after bidaai and after the ring ceremony, Jeevika took manvi virat/manvi's room.
Jeevika: Meri mannu bohat bara ho gayi hai (with tears in her eyes)
Manvi: Arre di ap ro q rahi hai, main to ap ki pass hi hu.

On the other side virat has been trying to go to his/manvi's room but viren and the rest of the family keeps interrupting him.
Viren: Oye tu itni jaldi mein kyun hai, apni bivi se sararat karni hai kya.
Virat: bhai ap shuru maat hona PLEASE.
Chachi: Hai mein marjawa yeh dono to Kabhi Khushi Kabhi Gam ki shaurk aor hritrick ki tara act kar raha hai.
Viren: Waise tu ne to yeh sara ka sara mujhse kaha mera shaadi ke din.
Virat: Mein to bacha tha
Viren: woh last month tha
Virat: exactly
Chacu: arre usse akela chordo, Jao virat beta abni patni ke pas jao

Then he finally gets away and goes to his room. He sees manvi alone sitting in his bed looking beautiful as ever. Virat ignores her and goes to drink the milk...
Manvi (thinking to herself): Arre yeh chep mujhe ignore kaise kar sakta hai
Then she slaps virat in his neck
Virat: Tumhe sharam nahi ati tumhari patti ko mara
Virat: waise tum bohat sundar lag rahiho
Manvi: Tumhe kaise patta, tum to meri ghungat hii nehi khola
Virat then takes her ghungat off and just keeps staring
Manvi: Mujhe aise kyun dekh rahi ho
Virat: Tum bohaat sundar ho
Manvi blushes and then virat tries to go for a kiss
Manvi: Tum kya kar rahi ho
Virat: Shhh
Then instead of kissing her lips he tilts his head and presses his mouth against her neck. He searches for her dori and then unties it, and lays manvi down.
Virat: I love you manvi
Manvi: I love you too virat
And then he goes for the lips and kisses her. Virat kisses manvi all over her face and then again her neck as the night passes on they make love together.

THE MORNING AFTER SUHAAG RAAT:
Manvi wakes up and notices virat's hand raped around her bair waste, and she gently removes it and kisses his forhead and goes to change. After Manvi comes out of the bathroom she doesnt see her chep any where...

<font color="#0000FF">To be Continued...</font>



Edited by virmanforever - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome sweety cont soon plz n pm me
Posted: 12 years ago
Nice, Please PM me when you continue.
Posted: 12 years ago
very nice...cont soon..<3
Posted: 12 years ago
Nice...Plz PM me whn u update

Posted: 12 years ago
Nice... PM Me when you update...
Posted: 12 years ago
that was so sweet plz can u pm me for de nxt part
thanks
Posted: 12 years ago
y did u make it underage one...we are adults out here...(jus joking)
it was good...cont and pm me...
Posted: 12 years ago
Hey guys Thank You for all positive answers. This is the last part of this story ENJOY😊

PART 2:

  After manvi came back from the bathroon, wearing a beautiful red salwar suit, she didnt see chep anywhere and just turned around. As she turned aroung a she felt a force pull her towards him by her waste.
Manvi: Chep, Koi a jayenge
Virat: Anne do, waise tumhe nehi lagta ki humari suhaag raat bohat chota tha.
(Manvi blushes after hearing about their suhaag raat)
Virat: Oye hoye mera bandaria sharmana bhi janta hai
Manvi: Choro mujhe (she said while blushing)
then as she was going away virat pulled her over and cornerd her against the wall.
Virat: Tum jaante ho ki kall raat mera sab se suraat raat tha
Manvi looks at him with a smile; she tries to push virat away but virat doesnt let her go.
Then virat takes her dupatta away from her neck and replaces it with thousands of kisses
Manvi tries to get away but he was holding her too tight and just as virat was aiming for a kiss and he was just centimeter away.
He was interrupted by Jeevika and chachi.
Virat: Arre mera family mujhe akela nahi sor sakti kya
Manvi laughs
Jeevika: Darwaza khulo raat me soye nehi kya
Chachi: ha jeevika such kaharahi hai shararat kiya kya
Manvi: Dekha kaha na koi ajenge
Virat: sad ko bahar rehene do kuch aur shararat karti hai
Manvi pushes virat and oppens the door
Jeevika: itni der kyun lagayi
chachi: aur ab bi shararat karrahi thi kya
Manvi: nahi
Jeevika: toh tumhari dupatta kha hai
Then both jeevika and chachi look at virat and sees he has her dupatta.
Jeevika: dever ji tumhara raat aur subah kaisa tha
Virat(thinks to himself): abhi tak to thik thi par aplok to disturb kiya.
Then they both leave after telling virat and manvi to hurry up and come downstairs
while manvi was getting ready she could not tie her dori so virat came bahind her and tied it for her and also kissed the bare back
and then he put the sindoor and the mangalsutra on her.
Then both of them went downstairs holding eachothers hands and after their family saw them they started teasing them about their first night together and all that.


That is it for the story sorry guys i know the ending was terrible, it's just that i ran out of ideas and PLEASE comment and press the like button if you thought it was OK😃


Edited by virmanforever - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
It has a very cute ending sweetheart! It was amazing

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