Kagaz ki Kashthi-Love tht Sacrifies Life MG ss pt2 - Page 4

Originally posted by: music_girl

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wow... so many twists in the character sketch itself 😆

Waiting for Maan & Geet's interactions 😆

seems interesting 😆

what will Sujal and Sameera do?

How will Maan & Geet do? 😃

nice

❤️

Frankie

 

glad u like it sweety,,, hmm now what will they do, we have to wait for that,, i said we as i myself don't know,, what n what will they do as my khurafati dimag is roaming around all over..😆😆

Originally posted by: valli22

   nice dear...different start..
   something bad is going 2 happen..
   then only maneet can come closer..
   omg..maan ithna rude...he didnt stop the car 2 c even the girl is alive or not..

don't know in further track how many color he will show😲

Originally posted by: punam2712

GREAT UPDATE

MAAN IS SO RUDE AND IN LOVE WITH SAMEERA

AND GEET LOVES SUJAL

MAAN SOUNDS LIKE A DEVIL AND I LOVE DEVILS

devil will show his true color😃

awesum yaar...
maan s so rude..

Great concept
Gud Start
Wow... an awesome update
Amazing
Fabulous

Luved it.
Keep writing.

i love ur title👏 reminds me of a ghazal kagaz ki kashti barish ka pani😳

congrats on new SS...
prologue
interesting...
Geet is married to Maan...
and Maan forced her...
pm me...

character sketch
wow interesting...
OMG my jaanu Rajeev Khandelwal is as Sujal Khandelwal...
awesome...
so Sujal and Geet love each other...
and Maan and Sameera love each other...
then how come Maan married Geet...

part 1
nice part...
Sujal and Geet scenes were so nice...
OMG that was Maan?
thats so rude of him...
not having a good opinion for this Maan...
precap
is it Maan behaving like that with Geet?
cont soon and PM me...

hey dear...
i wud like to advise u to post this story in GHSP forum...that way u will be getting many readers for ur story...it looks promising...

hope u get success with it😛