Ballroom dance:Ashutosh-Nidhi OS

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Posted: 12 years ago
Dr.Nidhi loved the middle aged Dr.Ashuthosh.Dr.Ashuthosh also had feelings for her.But he never realized it.Dr.Mallika who loved Dr.Ashuthosh became insecure with their growing relationship.So she made him understand that he was doing a big mistake by loving a young girl like Nidhi.Dr.Ashuthosh realized his love for Dr.Nidhi and so he dismissed Dr.Nidhi from the hospital.The separation was unbearable for both of them.

Nidhi and Ashutosh met each other accidently during a medical convention.
After the convention got over a ballroom dance party was organized for the Doctors.
Nidhi entered the hall in a beautiful white gown.
She looked like an Angel.Ashutosh could not take his eyes off her.
Nidhi saw Ashutosh.

But she avoided him purposefully.
The anchor announced,"I am going to announce the names of the couples who are going to dance".
All were eager to hear the names.
She announced,"Dr.Ashutosh's partner is Dr.Nidhi".
Ashutosh and Nidhi were shocked.


She announced the names of other couples also.All other couples started dancing.
Ashutosh and Nidhi simply stood watching others dance.
The anchor went towards them.
"Why you both are not dancing?"
"Actually i don't know to dance.I have never danced at parties".
The anchor laughed,"So what?Why don't you dance here for the first time?After all you got a beautiful partner.Who can resist dancing with a beautiful girl.Dr.Ashutosh...you are lucky to have Dr.Nidhi as your partner".
Ashutosh and Nidhi looked at each other.
The anchor smiled,"Come on guys..go and dance.."
She pushed them to the dance floor.Nidhi lost her balance and she was about to fall down.Ashutosh held her around her waist.They both are lost in each others' eyes.
The song was going on depicting their feelings for each other.
"Thode bheege bheege se thode nam hai hum,
Kal se soye voye bhi to kam hai hum.

Thode bheege bheege se thode nam hai hum,
Kal se soye voye bhi to kam hai hum.
Dil ne kaisi harkat ki hai,
Pehli baar mohabbat ki hai,
Aakhiri baar mohabbat ki hai,
Pehli baar mohabbat ki hai,
Aakhiri baar mohabbat ki hai'"{Kaminey}.
Slowly Ashutosh took off his hand from her waist.
"I am sorry,suddenly when i saw you falling down...I.."
"Thank you Dr.Ashutosh for preventing me from falling".
Slowly he smiled.But she did not smile back.Ashutosh was gloomy seeing her not smiling back.
The anchor was staring at them.Nidhi noticed it.She put her arms on his shoulder.He was shocked.
"That lady will again come towards us.She will force us to dance.I don't want to hear her irritating talk.That's why i took the initiative to dance".
"It is ok Dr.Nidhi".
Slowly he held her.She felt his soft touch.But she hid her feelings.
They both look at each other emotionally.
"Aankhein doobi doobi si surmayee madham,
Jheelen paani paani hai bass tum aur hum,
Hmmm baat badi hairat ki hai,
Pehli baar mohabbat ki hai,
Aakhiri baar mohabbat ki hai' 2 times".
Nidhi could not control anymore.She remembered how Ashitosh dismissed her from the hospital.She was really hurt.She moved away from him.Ashutosh did not expect it.Automatically he held her hand.She could not believe that he held her hand.
She looked at him unbelievingly.

He was really emotional.
"Please don't go Dr.Nidhi".
Nidhi could not believe his pleading tone.
"Why?You only sent me away.Now why are you asking me not to leave?"
Ashutosh was silent.

"Tell Dr.Ashutosh".
"I am sorry Dr.Nidhi.I made a big mistake by sending you away.I should not have sent you away.I felt that my heart was losing control seeing you.I did not want it to happen.That is why i did it".
Nidhi was shocked.Because she always thought that he had no feelings for her.
"The song which is played now is apt for my condition Dr.Nidhi.Pehli baar mohabbat ki hai..I fell in love for the first time.You are my first love.
Aakhiri baar mohabbat ki hai..This is my last love.You are my last love also".
Nidhi was numb.

"After you left i went crazy.I realized how difficult life is without seeing you.But luckily destiny brought you to me again.If i had'nt confessed my feelings now i would have gone completely mad".
There was pain clearly evident in Nidhi's eyes.

Ashutosh suppressed his pain feeling her pain.
"Dr.Nidhi...sorry if i have hurt you.I am not forcing you to have the same feelings for me.I just confessed my feelings".

Nidhi's eyes poured tears down.
"I was hurt when i felt that you had no feelings for me.But now since you showed your heart which was filled up with love how will i be hurt?"
Ashutosh looked at her eyes.
"You are my first and last love Dr.Ashutosh".
He was surprised.He extended his arms.She ran to his arms.
They both wiped each others tears.Then they smiled.
Slowly he held her hand and looked at her face to see her reaction.She smiled.He was relieved.She put her arms on his shoulders.He smiled.
Then they swayed themselves to the romantic music.
"Hmmm khawab ke bhoj se, kapkapati hui,
Halki palkein teri yaad aata hai sab,
Tujhe gudgudana' satana yuhi sote hue,
Gaal pe teepna' meechna bewajah besabab.

Yaad hai peepal ke jiske ghane saaye the,
Hum ne gilehri jhoothe matter khaaye the,
Yeh barqat unn hazrat ki hai.

[Pehli baar mohabbat ki hai,
Aakhiri baar mohabbat ki hai] ' 2 times".
They were lost completely in each other.

The end

Edited by jasminerahul - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
wow...good one..๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ..hope this was hown in d episode...everybdy wud hav loved it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
You made my day with this!! I was expecting a dance atleast in the episode today and was completly disaapinted( Shattered to be sounding like Nidhi's Baba) when nothing such is showed in the episode. But feeling happy after reading this..Thank u
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Posted: 12 years ago
Gorgeous yaara.. gorgeous ๐Ÿ‘

This is called creativity...! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ  Those dumbos sitting in th CVs.. shld learn from fans..what its called to make a LOVE STORY look like one! โค๏ธ
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow it left me all dreamy
I always felt we at IF & FB can make this show better than the CVs

Thanks dear for such a nice OS.
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg that was brilliant๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great job - lovely piece on how it could have played out :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
very nice i like it       ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ