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Posted: 22 December 2011 at 3:41pm | IP Logged
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EPISODE 3

 

Scene 1:

[Maneet's room: Baby sleeping in the cradle...Maan enters...taking off his tie and waist coat...Geet is standing in the balcony lost in thoughts...Maan first goes to the cradle, kisses his baby and then walks to Geet.]

"Maan! Aap aa gaye..."

But before she could ask anything else, he pulls her into a tight hug like if he wouldn't hold on to her tightly he'd lose her...

"Geet, I love you...tum mujhse kabhi door mat jaana..."

"Maan..." she places her palm on his face, "Main apse door kyun jaoongi...Aap mujhse kuch chupa rahein hai?"

He realised that in his concern he almost lost control over his reason and was about to disclose the news about Brij's release.

"Geet...aisi koi baat nahi hai? I was just missing you terribly...tum dono ke bina ab mera mann kahin lagta hi nahin."

"Maan...I love you."

And they hug...Geet is completely unaware of the storm that was going to enter her life. Maan on the other hand was determined that he'd never allow any such storm to enter their life, he also knew he would protect Geet and Baby till his last breath.

"Maan aap change kar lijiye main khaana lagwati hoon."

!!!!!

 

Scene 2:

Devini's room

Nandini is on phone and looks really excited...Dev looks at her apprehensively and walks to her.

"Nandini!"

She is off the phone and turns to him...

"Haan Dev, Aap kahin jaa rahein hai?" she asks finding him all ready to leave.

"Haan...Main London jaa raha hoon...I'll be back in one week. I have to attend an International Business Conference there since Bro can't leave Geet and Baby alone at this moment."

"Dev...you don't have to give explanation...I totally understand you...Aap apna khayal rakhiyega...aur yahan ki chinta bilkul mat kijiyega..."

"Oh Nandini aap kitni understanding hai...I'd have loved to stay here for your surprise par kya karein..."

"Yeah...Dadima aa rahi hai...and I have also called Geet didi's family here. Woh kitna khush hongi..."

"Wow...Nandini, mujhe bilkul pata nahin tha aap itna badiya surprise plan kar rahi thi..."

"Dadima aapko miss karengi...but I'll tell her if it wasn't urgent you would have stayed back."

"Main jaldi wapis aa jaaoonga..."

He leaves but he was no longer the same Dev, he had an evil twinkle in his eyes and it was foreboding.

 

Scene 3:

Lunch table

Geet serves him rice and other things...then comes and sits next to him smiling at him.

"Geet tumne kha liya?"

"Haan...maine aur Nandini ne kab ka kha liya."

"Aur medicine le liya na tumne..."

"Haan Maan...aap ne toh mujhe baccha bana diya hai."

She laughs...

Maan looks really in a dilemma and finally decides to tell her,

"Geet...Main bahut thakh gaya hoon...kya hum aaj ke long drive ka plan phir kabhi karein...?"

"Kya hua Maan? Jab se aap office se jaldi aaye hain tab se kuch pareshaan lag rahein hain...Aap zaroor mujhse kuch chupa rahein hain...Please batayiye naa."

He suddenly changes topic...

"Geet...koi problem nahin hai...I've told you...bas kuch office main problem ho gayi thi..."

"Office main? I knew it...kuch toh baat thi jo aap ko pareshaan kar rahi thi..."

"Geet...shaant ho jao...it was a small problem and I've solved it...Main bas aaj ghar main rehna chahta hoon."

Geet was still not convinced but she didn't want to trouble him more so she kept quiet...

 

Scene 4:

Evening

Nandini persuades Maan and Geet to come down to the hall all dressed up for a party she had organised for them and the Baby...

Geet takes out a beautiful maroon and gold silk saree from her wardrobe and begins to change...Baby is playing on the bed...

"Baby aap ke Pappa ghar main hai phir bhi unka poora dhyaan office main laga rahta hai...Dekhiye abhi bhi Adi Sir se baat karne gaye hai balcony main..."

Baby chuckles...and Geet smiles at him lovingly...

"Mamma abhi aati hain aapke paas..."

She wraps the sari around her and looks into the mirror, and sees Maan behind her completely mesmerised in her beauty...

MAHI MAHI

They are lost in each other's eyes...Maan approaches a nervously smiling Geet and was lifts his hand to hold her face...

Baby cries and they fumble looking away from each other...

She goes and picks up baby, Maan looks at them and says,

"Geet Baby ko main sambhaal loonga, tum jaldi se tayyar ho jao..."

He takes Baby from her hand and starts playing with him. Geet becomes emotional seeing them together, wipes her tears and starts getting ready for the party.

 

Scene 5:

 

Maan holding Baby, and Geet holding his hand walk down the stairs to the deserted and dark hall.

They look around but there was no one in there...

"Kahan hai everyone? Nandini??" she calls...

Suddenly...

 

"SURPRISE!!!!!"

Dadi Maa comes forward and surprises them...

"Dadi maa..." cries Geet and hugs her...

"Geet beta maine aap logon ko kitna miss kiya...aur sabse pehle toh main apne parpote ko dekhna chahti hoon...Jaante hai jabse mujhe Baby ke aane ki news mili hai main jaldi se ghar aa jaana chahti thi...aur jaise hi yaatra khatam hui main bhaagi bhaagi aa gayi apne bachon ke paas...Maan beta?" she sees him holding the Baby. Tears fill her eyes and she rushes to him...and takes the Baby from his hand and starts loving him like mad...She is so overwhelmed with joy and couldn't control her emotions with her great grandson smiling in her lap.

Nandini too comes and announces, "Geet didi aapke liye ek aur surprise hain..."

And Geet wonders what it is...when one by one her entire family gathers in front of her. She is shocked to see them all and just couldn't believe her eyes...She runs to her parents and cries aloud holding on to them...They too ask her forgiveness for not being with her when she wanted them the most...

The reconciliation was very emotional...they all thank Maan for looking after their daughter and giving her all the happiness that they never gave her. They all meet the baby and all of them wanted to hold him in their hands...

Geet thanks Nandini...who tells her that it was all Jijaji's plan and that he wanted you to have all the happiness that you had lost...

"Maan ne kiya yeh sab..." she looks around but doesn't find him anywhere...

Maan is in the garden and he's talking to Adi on phone...

"Adi uss Brij ka kuch pata chala..."

"Nahi Sir...woh jail se choothte hi kahin gayab ho gaya...par Sir mujhe pata chala hai ki Dev Sir aaj uss Police station main gaye the..."

"Dev? But why?" he sees Geet coming towards him and he tells Adi to find more about it and cuts the call...

She comes near him and looks into his eyes lovingly...and then she hugs him and Maan hugs back...

"Maan thank you...aapne mujhe itni saari khushiyaan de di..."

"Geet tum khush ho mujhe aur kya chahiye..."

Nandini comes out and calls them in...

"Geet didi...Jijaji andar chaliye...Pandit ji aa gaye hain...Baby ke namkaran ceremony ka muhurat ho gaya hai..."

Geet looks at him still in his arms and says, "Chale Mr Maan Singh Khuraana..."

"Yes Mrs Geet Singh Khurana...chaliye...waise aap ne humare bete ka koi naam socha hai..."

Suddenly they both realise that they haven't still thought of a name...

 

Scene 6:

The ceremony begins...

Pandit ji chants the mantras and asks Maan to sit down with the baby in his lap...and then the Pandit tells him to hold the betel leaf to the baby's ear and whisper his name into his ears. He looks at Geet, who walks to Dadi ma and asks her to suggest a name...

Dadi suggests the name "Aditya Singh Khurana..." Aditya was the name of her late husband and Geet and Maan loves the name.

The baby is named Aditya and soon after the ceremony the party begins...

 

Scene 7:

Slow ball room dance

"Geet, tum itni door kyun khadi ho?"

"Door Maan? Yeh door hai?"

He pulls her closer and says, "Haan ab theekh hai..."

She frowns at him, "Maan sab dekh rahein hai...chodiye mujhe..."

The music begins...

[Jab koi baat bigad jaaye, jab koi mushkil pad jaaye, tum dena saath mera...Oh hum nava...]

They dance like two people who are truly and divinely in love with eachother, lost in each other's eyes...magical and heavenly...

After the dance...Geet asks for the Baby...

Dadi maa tells her Baby was with Nandini...but looking everywhere the baby is not found to be with anyone...Geet is desperate and frantically runs around asking everyone where her baby was...Maan and everyone else present there search for the baby but he was gone...Geet faints crying for her baby...Maan takes her to their room and comes down...

Maan's mobile rings...

"Maan Singh Khurana?"

"Brij?" he utters, his face losing all it's life...

"Kaise he aap...aur meri behen Geet?? Arre main toh bhool hi gaya aap ko mubarakbaad dene ke kiye...Main bahut khush hoon...Mama jo ban gaya hoon...Mera bhanja..."

"Shut up you filthy coward...Mera beta kahan hai??? Agar usse kuch bhi hua toh main tumhe zinda nahi chodoonga..."

"Chillayiye mat Khurana saab...aap apne bete ki jaan khatre main daal rahein hain..."

"Brij...tum aisa kuch nahi karoge...Main tumhare aage haath jodta hoon...please usse kuch mat karna, tum jo kahoge main woh karoonga bas usse lauta do..."

Brij laughs like a crazy maniac and cuts the call...Maan falls down completely broken...

Everyone comes to him and asks him who it was...and Geet's family understands it's Brij, Geet's own brother who has kidnapped their son...They are completely shocked and ashamed and Daar ji angrily takes out his sword and swears to kill Brij...

!!!!!!

Precap: Police is informed about the kidnapping...Geet is still unconscious. Maan takes his jeep and goes out in search of their child. Nandini tries to contact Dev but his phone is unreachable. Adi is at KM and he is trying hard to contact Maan but his phone too is unreachable...




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~Episode 4~

Scene 1:

Maneet's room

Everyone's gathered around the bed where Geet is lying unconscious...Geet's mum and Dadi ma are sitting next to her and the Doc is examining her.

Maan's in complete shock and wonders why happiness doesn't lasts long in their life...His geet was unconscious and their one week old baby was kidanapped...his brain was going numb but he couldn't give up...He had to find their baby at any cost and he was not going to spare Brij and who so ever was supporting him this timeAngryAngryAngry...they had gone too far this time...

He barges out of the room completely unaware of things happening around him...Daar ji and Geet's dad follow him but he won't even stop for them...He gets into the jeep and drives away...


Scene 2:

Railway Station

A woman wrapped in a shawl, covering her head and face walks towards the railway bridge. She was carrying something in her hand. Only her eyes were visible and they were full of fearShocked...She appeared to be looking for someone and also seemed to be in a hurry. Halfway the bridge, she halts between platform four and five, and turns to a man who was waiting for her. The man was none other than BrijAngryAngryAngry

"Kisi ko tum pe koi shak toh nahi hua na...Angry"

She speaks with fear,

"Nahi ji...aap ne jaisa kaha tha maine waise hi kiya...par yeh bahut chota haiCry...yeh apni Maa ke bina kaise rahega...Cry"

"Bacche ko idhar lao...tum bas apne kaam se matlab rakho...iss bacche ki fikar karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai..."AngryAngryAngry and he snatches the baby from her hand...Angry

The baby wakes upCry and not finding his mother he begins crying in hunger.Confused Brij is annoyed by the baby's crying and shushes the baby...but the baby won't stop. Brij nervously looks around to check whether someone was watching them or notConfusedAngry He angrily scolds the baby and jerks the poor child. The woman stops him and asks,

"Yeh aap kya kar rahein haiShocked...yeh ek chota baby hai..."Cry

"CHUPAngry...Badi aayi hai iski fikar karne waaliAngry...Main iska Mama hoon aur joh fikar mujhe nahi woh tumhe kyun ho rahi hai...Yeh pakad apne paise..."Angry he throws the money on her faceConfused, "aur daffa ho yahan se..."

Cry She began to leave half-heartedlyCry looking at the tired and hungry babyCryCry wriggling in Brij's hard handsCryCryCry

"Aur sunAngry" she stops, "iss baare main kisi ko pata nahi chalna chahiye...agar teri zubaan khuli...toh main tera woh hashar karoongaAngryAngryAngry samajh gayi naa...ab chal yahan se..." he drives her away...

She gulps in fear and silently walks away. Brij looks at the baby in his hands and his diabolic eyes widens with hatred and his heart fills with a malign satisfaction.AngryAngryAngry

"Bhaanje janta hai main kaun hoon? Main tera Mama hoon... aur tuAngryAngryAngry uss Geet aur Maan ki nishaani hai jinhone mujhe jail bhijwaya aur mujhe mere pariwaar se alag kar diya...GeetAngry tujhe toh main baad main dekh loonga...par Maan joh tune mere saath kiya hai uska badla main tujhse zaroor loongaAngryAngryAngry," he looks at the baby and then staright ahead, "Ab tujhe mujh se koi nahi bacha sakta..."Angry

His mob. rings...it's Dev.

"Haan bolo..."

"Baby kahan hai..."

"Mere paas hai...jabse aaya hai...tabse gala phad kar roye hi jaa raha hai...kya karoon main ab iska..."

"Suno usse kuch mat karna...tum mera wait karo...main abhi aata hoon."Evil SmileGeek


Scene 3:

Police Station

Maan is very furious and yells at the Inspector...

"Aapne usse jaane kyun diya...I want to know where he went...Agar mere bacche ko kuch huaAngry toh main kisi ko nahi chodoonga...aapko bhi nahi...Angry"

"Mr Khurana shaant ho jaayiye...dekhiye humne poore city main police force ko alert kar diya hai...aapka baby jald hi mil jayega."

Maan was not going to sit idle taking the inspector's words for an answer. He had to find his son on his own...While coming out of the station one of the constables stops him from behind and informs him, nervously looking aroundConfused, that Brij had gone to KM after his release and that a man had come looking for him after he left the station.

He couldn't undestand why Dev had come to meet Brij...but at that moment he was more worried about finding his child.

Adi calls him...

"Sir, I've found some information about a woman who might have taken the baby out of KM. She lives in the slum area near the railway station. Her name is Shanta."

"Adi I'm going to that place right now..."

"Okay Sir...I'll call you as soon as I get any new information."

"Adi...wait...Geet ko hosh aaya?"

"No SirConfused abhi tak behosh hai Geet, par aap fikar mat kijiye...hum sab hain na yahan pe uski dekhbaal karne ke liye...aap bas baby ka pata lagayiye..."

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Scene 4:

Maan reaches the slum and enquires about the woman called Shanta...After asking a lot of people he finally finds her home. She sees him coming and runs out of the back door. Maan chases her and catches her...

"Kahan hai mera baccha? Tum hi usse uttha kar le gayi thi naa?"

"Saab please mujhe kuch mat kariye...main toh bas paise ke liye...mujhe maaf kar dijiye...Cry"

"Dekho main tumhe kuch nahi karoonga...bas mujhe mera baccha kahan hai bata do..."

"Woh baby toh uske paas hai..." she shivers with fear.Confused

He understands immediately it's Brij and asks her, "Kahan hai woh? Take me to him."

She takes him to the bridge, but Brij was gone with the baby already.

The police comes and takes away the woman...and Maan breaks down not knowing where to find his child...Cry

Outside the railway station he sees Dev's car zooming out of the stationShocked...he chases it but loses track of it in the heavy traffic of the city.

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Scene 5:

He's frustratedAngry, heart broken and desperate to find his baby. He stops his jeep near a temple and gets down from the jeep. He sees a mother and father going into the temple with their new born baby. He imagines Geet and himself holding their baby in their place, and tears fill his heart. He climbs the temple steps and reaches the temple...prays to God with all his heart.CryCryCry

"Bhagwaan apne mujhe aur Geet ko itni badi khushi di...aur phir apne usse humse door kar diya...kyun Bhagwaan?CryCryCry Please aap mujhe saza de dijiye par mera baccha woh toh bahut chota hai...aur pata nahin woh kahan hai...please usse lauta dijiye...Bhagwaan please humein humara baccha wapis lauta dijiye..."Cry

His mob. rings...he comes out and wipes his tears...he takes the call...

"Sir, Geet ko hosh aa gaya hai...woh baby ke liye pooch rahi hai...Aap please ghar aa jayiye..."

Maan rushes to his jeep, he didn't wanted to lose Geet aswell.Cry There a Fakir Baba stops him and says,

"Baccha...upar wale pe bharosa rakh...woh kabhi apne bachon ka haath nahi chodta..." and he blesses him.Embarrassed

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Scene 6:

A lonely dilapidated house on the outskirts of the city

 Baby is crying breathlessly on seeing only Brij who was being cruel to the childCryCryCry...he is hungry and wants to be in his mamma's comforting arms...CryCryCry

Brij is very irritated and pours some water into the baby's tiny mouth. Baby chokes and cries even louder...gasping for breath...Cry


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Scene 7:

KM

Geet wakes up with a start screaming...

"Mera baccha!!!"Shocked

She springs out of the bed, pushes everyone aside and runs out of her room crying,

"Mera baccha...woh ro raha hai...mujhe uske paas jaana hai..." CryCryCry

She runs down the stairs and in the doorway runs into Maan...She falls into his arms crying...Cry

"Maan humaara baccha...mujhe uske paas le chaliye...woh kahan hai...woh bhooka hogaCryCry...Maan...please kuch kijiye...mujhe baby ke paas le chaliyeCryCryCry Main uske bina mar jaoongiCry" she cries almost losing her senses and becomes lifeless after crying.Cry

Maan could no longer tolerate to watch Geet in such a pathetic state...Cry

"Geet humare Baby ko kuch nahi hoga...I promise you, main Baby ko tumhare paas wapis le aoonga...Nadini," he turns to Nandini holding Geet in his arms, "tum Geet ko andar le jao...main baby ko dhoondne jaa raha hoon..."

"Nahi Maan...please mujhe bhi apne saath le chaliye...mujhe chod kar mat jayiye..." she was really broken...and was afraid to lose him also.CryCryCry

She wouldn't let go off him, holding on to him tightly. He decides to take her along, fearing her health to worsen with all the crying and worrying.

Before they leave, he again turns to Nandini and asks her,

"Nandini, Dev ka koi message aaya?"OuchOuch

"Nahi...Jijaji...kya baat hai?"Confused

"Kuch nahi...tum please Dadi maa ke saath rehna...unka khayal rakhna..."

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Scene 8:

In the jeep

Geet is completely broken and rests her head on Maan's shoulder. Maan looks at her and then tells himself...he has to find their Baby at any cost...


PRECAP:

Dev enters the house where Brij was hiding the Baby

Baby is silent...Sleepy tears dried at the corners of his tiny eye lashes.CryCrySleepy

"Kya hua? Baby chup kyun hai...ShockedShockedShockedkahin tumne isko?"

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~*~CHAPTER 5~*~

 

Scene 1:

 

It was StarChristmas eveStar...a time of the year when people come together and celebrate the spirit of joy, love and benevolence...a time when happiness fills every heart, every molecule in this wonderful universe.Big smile

But for Maan and Geet, the day was dismal and the most traumaticCry, for they had lost the very reason to be happy...and they were searching like mad for their childCry.

The streets were crowded with revellers and floats.Party And it was difficult to drive in such congested streetsConfused. While driving through the market road, Maan suddenly stops the car when a woman in rags holding a baby crosses the jeep in haste. Geet sees her and cries, "BABY!ShockedShockedShocked"

Maan looks at her and then at the woman...he gets down and hurries to the woman, Geet behind himCry.

"Rukiye!Confused"

She turns in surpriseShocked, with the baby in her hand. Geet soon realises it's not their baby...Maan apologises to her for stopping her like that and tells the woman about their missing baby...Geet sees the smiling baby in the woman's hand and remembers her own child...CryCry

She kisses the baby and says, "Bahut pyaara hai apka baby..."Cry

"Madam ji...Aap bilkul pareshaan mat hoyiye...Main bhi ek Ma hoon aur main Bhagwaan se prarthana karoongi ki woh aapke baby ko jaldi se lauta de...Aap dheeraj rakhiye...Smile"

Geet could not control her pain and runs away from thereCryCryCry. Maan sighs and controls his tears...He again apologises and places in her hand all the money he had, and he tells her to take good care of the baby.

 

 

Scene 2:

Dev is really shocked to see the motionless figure of the child on the table...

"What did you do? What's wrong with the child...kahin tumne usse...ShockedShockedShocked" he gasps in horror.

"Maine kuch nahi kiya...yeh toh khud hi bhookh se ro ro kar so gaya. Mera sar kha gaya ro ro kar...kuch peetha hi nahi..."AngryAngryAngry

"Ab humein jaldi hi kuch karna hoga...hum Baby ko zyaada din Geet se door nahi rakh payenge...yeh abhi bahut chota hai and he needs mother's milk...agar isse kuch ho gaya toh phir main...Geet ko kaise apna banaoonga. Yeh baby hi toh mujhe meri Geet se milayega."

Brij grimaces as if he didn't careAngryAngry

"Marne do isse bhookh se...Mujhe toh bas MAANAngry aur uss GEET...Angry" he clenches his teeth and fist in anger.

Dev looks at him sternly and says, "Geet? Tumko maine samjhaya tha na ki tum Geet ko kuch nahi karoge...Tumhe sirf Bro ko rasste sai hatana hai...Tum sirf wahi karo jiske liye tumhe maine jail se chudwaya hai...SAMJHE!!AngryAngryAngry" he yells.

Brij wanted to destroy the entire Khurana family especially Maan and Geet whom he blames for his doom. But he had made a deal with Dev in return for his freedom...that he'd spare Geet's life...

"Main...woh...gusse main...AngryConfused"


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Posted: 27 December 2011 at 6:27am | IP Logged

~*~EPISODE 6~*~


First the recap of Epi 5Big smile

(It was Christmas eve...a time of the year when people come together and celebrate the spirit of joy, love and benevolence...a time when happiness fills every heart, every molecule in this wonderful universe.

But for Maan and Geet, the day was dismal and the most traumatic, for they had lost the very reason to be happy...and they were searching like mad for their child.

The streets were crowded with revellers and floats. And it was difficult to drive in such congested streets. While driving through the market road, Maan suddenly stops the car when a woman in rags holding a baby crosses the jeep in haste. Geet sees her and cries, "BABY!"

Maan looks at her and then at the woman...he gets down and hurries to the woman, Geet behind him.

"Rukiye!"

She turns in surprise, with the baby in her hand. Geet soon realises it's not their baby...Maan apologises to her for stopping her like that and tells the woman about their missing baby...Geet sees the smiling baby in the woman's hand and remembers her own child...

She kisses the baby and says, "Bahut pyaara hai apka baby..."

"Madam ji...Aap bilkul pareshaan mat hoyiye...Main bhi ek Ma hoon aur main aapka dard samajh sakiti hoon...Main Bhagwaan se prarthana karoongi ki woh aapke baby ko jaldi se aapko lauta de...Aap dheeraj rakhiye..."

Geet could not control her pain and runs away from there. Maan sighs and controls his tears...He again apologises to the poor woman. He places in her hand all the money he had, and he tells her to take good care of the baby. The woman looks at him leaving and prays to God that such big-hearted people should not be made to suffer...

"May they find their child soon!"

 

 

Scene 2:

Dev is really shocked to see the motionless figure of the child on the table...

"What did you do? What's wrong with the child? Kahin tumne usse..." he gasps in horror.

"Maine kuch nahi kiya...yeh toh khud hi bhookh se ro ro kar so gaya. Mera sar kha gaya ro ro kar...kuch peetha hi nahi..."

Dev examines the baby's pulse and makes sure that he's alive... He wipes the sweat trickling down his temple and turns to Brij.

"Ab humein jald hi kuch karna hoga...hum Baby ko zyaada din Geet se door nahi rakh payenge...yeh abhi bahut chota hai and he needs mother's milk...agar isse kuch ho gaya toh phir main...Geet ko kaise apna banaoonga. Yeh baby hi toh mujhe meri Geet se milayega." (Sicko Dev)

Brij grimaces as if he didn't care about Geet or her baby...

"Marne do isse bhookh se...Mujhe toh bas MAAN aur uss GEET..." he clenches his teeth and fist in anger.

Dev looks at him sternly and says, "Geet? Tumko maine samjhaya tha na ki tum Geet ko kuch nahi karoge...Tumhe sirf Bro ko rasste sai hatana hai...Tum sirf wahi karo jiske liye tumhe maine jail se nikalwaya hai...SAMJHE!!" he yells.

Brij wanted to destroy the entire Khurana family especially Maan and Geet whom he blamed for his doom. But he had made a deal with Dev in return for his freedom...that he'd spare Geet's life...which seemed really doubtful, remembering the past atrocities committed by him on Geet. Anyway, this time he seemed more under control, and he wanted to make reason to Dev...so he cleared himself,

"Main...woh...gusse main...kah gaya...")


~~~~~~


Episode 6 begins hereBig smile


Scene 1:

 Dev is angry at Brij and warns him...Angry

"Aaj kaha hai...Phir kabhi aisa sochna bhi mat...Yeh sab main sirf Geet ko pane ke liye hi to kar raha hoon...warna tum jaiso ko to main apne aas paaas bhi nahi..." he looks at Brij in disgust and jerks his head in angerAngry.

Brij wanted to retort but he knew he had no choice this time but to heed to him and to accept his humiliation silentlyAngryBig smile.

"Theek hai...galti ho gayi...Ab aage ka kya plan hai?"Confused

"Plan?...ha! Plan toh bahut simple hai...Bro ko phone karo aur yahan bula lo...AKELE!" he stresses on those last syllables, "and then you know what to do with him..." he had a nasty satisfaction in his eyes, "Phir mere aur Geet ke beech main koi nahi aayega," he utters dreamily.

At that moment the baby stirs back to consciousness and starts crying again...

"Yeh baccha? Yeh bahut badi rukawat hai...Ek baar main aur Geet ek ho jaaye phir isse bhi dekh loonga. Abhi toh mujhe iski zaroorat hai kyunki Maan ke jaane ke baad yehi toh mujhe Geet se milwayega."

He picks up the tiny baby and holds him in front of him, the baby writhing in pain screaming for his MammaCry.

!!!!~~~~!!!!

Scene 2:

 

Geet stops in her steps and suddenly holds her heart feeling her child in pain,

"BABY!" she gasps in horror. Maan sees her and runs to her in time to save her from a speeding bike.

They fall on the side of the road...Maan checks her to see if she was hurt but Geet is lost in shock and agony...

He jerks her and asks, "Geet?? Tum theekh ho na?" and he pulls her into a tight hug of relief.

"Maan...humara baby...Woh ro raha hai...woh takleef main hai...I can feel it...Humara baccha ro raha hai Maan...woh ro raha hai..." she breaks down, and falls at his feet crying. Maan never felt more helpless and so powerless, but he knew it was not the time to be weak but to be strong.

Geet absent-mindedly gets up and hurries out of sight, vaguely walking through the street, her hand extended out as if reaching her baby, her eyes without blinking, and her mother's heart bleeding with her child's suffering.

Maan runs behind her, calling out her name, pleading to her to stop...but she just won't...she just wanted to see her child...that's all.

Her body begins to feel the pressure, and slowly she starts to lose her consciousness...but she won't stop...and her body finally gives up under the physical and emotional stress...

Her body sways unable to stand any longer, she holds her head and faints...Maan catches her at the right moment before hitting the road and picks her up in his arms. He carries her to the jeep and gets in. Just when he starts the jeep, his mobile rings and it is Brij...

"Maan Singh Khurana...Mujhe pata hai tu bahut tadap raha hoga apne bachhe se milne ke liye..."

"Brij...Kahan hai mera baccha...Main tujhe nahi chodoonga..." he screams...

"Sshshhh...tera aise chilanna tere bachhe ke liye theekh nahi hoga...Bichaara jab se aaya hai roye hi jar aha hai...he's not even had one drop of milk..." Maan's heart stops beating, "Aur agar tu usse wapis sahi salamat chahta hai toh...chup chap iss pate pea a jaana..."

"Main aaoonga...par tum Baby ko kuch mat karna"

"Nahi karoonga...par yaad rahe akele aana, bilkul akele..."

"Geet bhi hai mere saath...woh behosh hai...Main usse akele nahi chod sakta..."

"GEET...woh bhi hai...theekh hai...par tum dono ke alawa aur koi bhi hoga toh bhool jao apne bacche ke baare main..."

"Nahi...sirf hum dono hi hai..."

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Scene 3:

 

Dev is angry at Brij for allowing him to bring Geet as well...

"Agar Geet ko pata chal gaya ki main hoon iss sab ke peeche toh?"

"Nahi pata chalega, woh behosh hai...aur uske hosh main aane se pehle hi main uss Maan Singh Khurana ko khatam kar doonga."

Dev is stressed and he looks at his mobile, there were more than ten missed calls...all from Nandini.

"Nandini?" he looks surprisingly.

Brij looks at him in anger, but turns away before saying anything.

"Isse kahin shak toh nahi hua? Oh no...I'll have to call her."

He calls her...

"Dev...aap India main hai?"

"Woh...Nandini ji...hua yoon ki Flight cancel ho gayi aur main jaa nahi paaya."

"Aapne mujhe bataya kyun nahi...Pata hai yahan kitni badi problem ho gayi hai...Baby ko Brij Veerji ne kidnap kar liya hai...aur Maan jijaji aur Didi usse dhoondhne gaye hai...Aap please kuch keejiye...Yahan sab bahut pareshaan hai."

Dev feigns innocence..."Oh God...yeh sab kya ho gaya...aap bilkul chinta mat kijiye...Main abhi Bro ko contact karta hoon..."

He disconnects the call and breathes a sigh of relief.

"Thank God...Nandini ko mujh par koi shak nahi hai..." he turns to Brij and tells him to finish Maan off and then call him. He then calls Maan, but he is not answering the call.

He tries again, this time Maan answers...

"Dev? Tum kahan ho?"

"Bro...main airport main hoon...meri filght cancel ho gayi hai...Nandini ne bataya ki Baby ko Brij ne kidnap kar liya hai...Bro aap kahan hai...main bhi wahi aata hoon..."

"Nahi koi zaroorat nahi hai...tum ghar jao...Dadi ma, Nandini aur baki sab ghar walein bahut pareshaan honge...tum unke paas raho..."

"Aur Geet bro?"

"Geet mere saath hai...main tumhe aur kuch nahi bata sakta...Ab woh Brij mujhse nahi bachega...aur kuch hi der main uss aadmi ka bhi pata chal jayega jisne Brij ko jail se chudaya hai..."

Dev's face goes pale, and he asks nervously, "Aapko pata chal gaya woh kaun hai?"

"Abhi nahi Dev? But his identity will be revealed soon..."

He cuts the call and Dev keeps wondering what Maan knew...

"Damn!! Now what??  I can't stay here...but before that iss Brij ka bhi kuch bandobast karna padega...I don't trust him even a bit."

He then calls someone and tells them to finish off Brij and show it as a suicide...

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

Scene 4:

Maan reaches the deserted wasteland outside the city...and there stood a derelict and isolated building completely wrecked. The darkness was foreboding and the silence even more so. The building had no light and Maan wondered whether it was the right place...

And then he got down and walked towards the crumbled place...the sounds of the rustling leaves drowned only by the brisk wind blowing in the air.

He enters and screws his eyes to look around...With great difficulty he sees a door...but there was no one inside it...He decides to call out Brij's name...

"BRIJ??"

The echo booms around...and then comes the reply...

"Main yahan hoon..."

Maan looks up and sees him, Brij standing on the terrace, holding the baby, who is unconscious.

"Brij...Kya hua mere bacche ko?"

"Woh abhi tak toh theekh hai par agar tumne koi bhi chalaki karne ki koshish ki toh...main isko neeche phenk doonga..."

"Nahi...dekho maine kisi ko bhi nahi bataya ki main yahan aa raha hoon...Geet gadi main hai...aur woh behosh hai...Tumhe jo kuch bhi chahiye main de doonga...par please mere bacche ko chod do..."

"Gidgidao...ha ha ha" he laughs like a crazy man, and then says, "Theekh hai main itna bhi bura nahi hoon ki marne se pehle ek baap ko uske bete se aakhri baar na milaoon...tere bete ko lekar neeche aata hoon..."

They come face to face...Maan desperate to take the baby from that animal's hand.

But he won't give up like that...he throws a gun at Maan and asks him to pick it up...

"Utthaoo gun...ab iss bache ki zindagi tumhare haath main hai...Gun utthaoo aur chalaoo apne pe...aur main tumhare bacche ko sahi salamat Geet tak pahucha doonga..."

Maan sees the cunningness behind Brij's plan to kill him, then also the baby and Geet. He had to think fast and also to spill out the other person's name from him...

"Main aisa nahi karoonga...mujhe tum par bilkul vishwaas nahi hai...Pehle tum Baby ko Geet ke pass chod do...phir  jaisa tum chahoge main waisa hi karoonga..."

Brij agrees thinking he can always overpower the meek and frail Geet.

"Theekh hai..."

They both walk towards the jeep, Brij taking the gun from Maan's hand and pointing it at the baby...He keeps the baby down on the seat and points the gun at Maan, and motions him to walk away with him. Maan looks at his wife and his baby one last time...and then determinedly walks with Brij into the building.

 

On the terrace...

Brij points to him the gun and says,

"Jump!"

Maan looks at him in shock and says, "Brij...tum aisa kyun kar rahe ho...Geet tumhari behen hai aur..."

"Chup bilkul chup..." he walks to him angrily...and this was what Maan needed, he jumps on to him and grabs his gun but he won't let go off the gun. A tussle broke out between them and they were on the verge of the terrace...They move back and forth and fall down the stairs...they tumble down the stairs still struggling to snatch the gun, into the darkness of the buiding.

Dev was watching all this from a distance and was waiting for the right time to enter.

The baby wakes up recognising the presence of his mother. The cry of her child brings Geet back to her senses...and she is overwhelmed with emotions to see her child on the seat...She picks him up and kisses him all over...and holds him close to her heart breaking into tears...She is completely unaware of the situation inside and she's lost in her child...

She sees the scars on his tiny hands and body and her heart weeps...she caresses those scars that makes the baby shiver...she then feeds the baby and realises for the first time that Maan was not there.

She gets down keeping the baby safely on the seat, and looks around with whatever strength was left in her...

"TISHKIYAON...TISHKIYAON!!!!" she hears two bullet shots and then followed by Maan's scream, her heart goes numb. The sound has come from the building, she runs towards it screaming,

"MAAN!!!"

But before that Dev seizes her and stops her...

"Dev...Maan andar hai...maine unki aawaz suni...Aur woh goliyon ki aawaz...Mujhe chodo...mujhe abhi unke paas jaana hai..."

"Geet sambhalo apne apko... tum jeep main jaakar baitho...Main andar jaa kar dekhta hoon..."

"Nahi...Mujhe abhi Maan ke paas jaana hai..." she demands trying to break herself free from Dev's grip...

She manages to free herself and runs inside...and there in a pool of blood was lying her Maan...She stops dead in her path and she falls down next to his lifeless body...She shakes him...

"Maan...Maan" then turns to Dev "Dev call the ambulance...tum mera mooh kya dekh rahe ho...jaldi call the ambulance...MAAN ...MAAN...aankhein kholiye..."

Dev had to prove his innocence to her so he called the ambulance, and also the police so that no one points a finger at him.

Maan is not responding to her sound, his body was cold and Geet kept shaking him...she hugged his body and was unable to breathe...screaming out in pain.

Dev tried to pull her apart from Maan but she wouldn't let go off Maan's body...

"Geet...wake up...Bro humein chod kar jaa chuke hain...he's dead."

She gets up and there was disbelief in her angry eyes, "Kya kahan tumne...KYA KAHA TUMNE???Angry" she slaps him again and again... "Maan mujhe chod kar kahin nahi jaa sakte...samjhe...jab tak meri saansein chal rahi hai, tab tak unhe kuch nahi ho sakta...Samjhe tum..." she tells him angrily refusing to believe her Maan is no more...She sits next to his body, caressing his bloody face, wiping the blood of his face and neck, she unbuttons his blood soaked shirt, bends low on his face and kisses him, her tears washing away the blood on his face...and slowly faints on him...Dev realises it's the right time and takes her to the jeep...He comes back into the buiding and sees another pool of blood in which laid Brij...

"Accha hua dono mere raaste se hatt gaye...mujhe zyaada mehnat bhi nahi karni padi..."

He then walks to the bodies to check their wounds...his mobile rings, it's the contract killers...

"Dono hi mar chuke hain...police ke aane se pehle yahan ke saare sabooth mita dena...Zyaada waqt nahi hai humare paas..."

He then leaves the bodies inside and walk to the jeep...He drives out of the wasteland satisfied that he had finished off Maan and that Geet was now going to be his. Finally his wish of having her was going to come true and he was on cloud nine. (RASCAL!!!Censored)

 

The building is set on fire by the goons and the bodies burn away in the fire...Maan was gone and how was Geet going to face this reality...CryCryCry

The police discovers the charred bodies and identifies them as that of Maan and Brij...ConfusedConfusedConfused



Precap: Geet is not ready to accept his Maan is no more...Dadi ma and everyone else can't tolerate to see her in that condition...she's not even aware of her baby. Dev on the othere hand is acting all sad and teary eyed tries to console Geet...to which she slaps him again. Dev controls himself saying, he'll have to bear it if he wants her in his life...

"Bas thode dino ki hi toh baat hai...phir Geet meri hogi..."

The entire office staff gathers in KM...Adi is completely broken...and Dev goes into a hysteria crying his eyes out...screaming,

"Bro aap humein chod ke nahi jaa sakte!!!"

 

 

 Confused

 



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HiSmileSmileSmileI'm sally and I've always been a silent admirer of ur writingsSmileSmileSmile
 
 
Sach kahoon toh..U r awesomeStarStarStarStarStar
 
This was an awesome piece of writingClapClapClapClapClapClap
 
 
I strongly hope that Maan is not deadCryCryCryCryCry
 
 
That Dev bas****,I hate himAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngry
 
 
Thank God Brij's deadLOLLOLLOLLOL
 
 
Please cont soon and add me 2 ur PM listSmileSmileSmileSmile
 
 
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HiSmileSmileSmileI'm sally and I've always been a silent admirer of ur writingsSmileSmileSmile
 Glad...really glad to hear thatBig smileBig smileBig smileBig smileBig smile
 
Sach kahoon toh..U r awesomeStar

I'm floatingLOLLOLLOL
 
This was an awesome piece of writingClap
 
 
I strongly hope that Maan is not deadCry
 
 
That Dev bas****,I hate himAngry
 
 
Thank God Brij's deadLOL
 
 
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Khurana Mansion


Dev walks in with Geet and the babyCry...Everyone is happy to see the babyBig smile...They rush to Geet and babyBig smile in excitement.

Daadi notices that Geet is unconscious...

"Dev, Geet ko kya hua?Confused"

"Woh Dadi...OuchCry"

"Accha...pehle usse andar le jao...Nandini please take her in.Confused"

Geet's mum and aunt also go with them...

She then takes the baby from Dev's hand and kisses himEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed.

"Aditya...aapke bina hum ab ek pal ke liye nahi rah sakte...kitna pareshaan ho gaye hum sab...Bhagwan ki kripa se aap humein wapis mil gaye...CryEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed" she thanks God...Daar ji too comes and shows his love for the baby. Suddenly Dadi realises that Maan was not with them...

"Dev...Maan kahan hai? Woh aapke saath nahi aaye...Confused"

"Dadi...Bro...woh..." he fills his bespectacled eyes with croc. tearsCryCryCryCryCry.

"Kya hua Dev...Maan theekh toh hai naa...aap itne pareshaan kyun hai...Confused sab theekh hai naaConfusedConfusedConfused" she asks restlessly.

"Dadi...Bro humein chod kar chale gaye...Uss Brij ne unhe maar diya...he's dead," and he breaks down cryingCryCryCryCryCryCry.

"DEADShocked! Nahin...humare Maan humein chod kar nahi jaa sakte...ShockedCryCryCry"

"Dadi this is the truth, he's no more...CryCry"

Dadi gets a heart attack and is taken to the hospitalShocked...

 

Scene 2:

 

Maan and Geet's room...


Geet is lying unconscious on the bedCry...

Geet's mum is taking care of the baby and they all are in Nandini's roomConfused...

"MAAN!ShockedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed" she wakes up crying out his name. She looks around desperately to find himShockedConfusedConfused, but he's not there.

Hearing her scream everyone comes to her room...ConfusedConfusedConfused

"Maan...woh yahin theConfused...maine unhe mehsoos kiya haiEmbarrassed...Maan aap kahan haiConfused...please saamne aa jayiye...mujhe pareshaan mat kijiyeConfused..."

Geet's mum holds her and jerks herCryCryCry,

"Geet puttar, hosh main aaCry...Maan ab kabhi nahi aayega...Cry"

"Ma...yeh aap kya kah rahin haiConfused...Woh zaroor aayengeConfusedEmbarrassed...Mujhe aur baby ko chod kar woh kahin nahi jayengeEmbarrassed...Maan??" she continues looking for himConfusedConfused.

Her mum cries and looks at her in grief...CryCryCry

"Babaji...kya aapne meri bacchii  ke kismet main khushiyan likhi hi nahi???CryCryCry Ab main iss pagli ko kaise samjhaoon iska Maan ab kabhi wapis nahi aayega.CryCryCryCry"

Geet picks up her baby and smiles at him...EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

"Appke Pappa abhi aate hi hongeEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed...woh bas humein tang kar rahe hainConfusedConfusedConfused...Dekhna jab woh aayenge toh hum dono unse bilkul baat nahi karengeAngry..." she puts the baby on her shoulder and shakes him lightly to sleep, singing the lullaby which Maan always sang to him.

"Aa ri aa aaja...nindiyan tu le chal kahin...udann khatole main...eee...door door door...yahan se door..."


~~~~~


Dev is in the hospital with Dadi...Adi comes there looking in complete shock...

"Dev Sir...Shocked Maan sir kya..."

"Haan Adi...I couldn't save him...ab Geet aur Baby ka kya hoga..." he wipes his tears, "Jab tak main hoon tab tak unhe kabhi koi pareshaani nahi hogi..."

"Adi looks at him in shock and...says,

"Maine Maan sir se baat ki thi...aur unhone bataya ki unhe Brij aur uss aadmi ka pata chal gaya hai...aur woh jald hi Geet aur baby ko lekar wapis aa jayenge...phir..."

"Kya matlab hai tumharaAngry...Main jhooth bol raha hoon...Police ko poori tarah se burnt bodies mil chuke hai...And I've seen Bro. lying dead in a pool of blood, with my own eyes. Geet bhi thi mere saath...Confused"

"You saw the body in a pool of blood...then who burnt the whole place down...I mean...Did you see anyone?"

"Nahi...Geet was really not well and I thought I'll bring them home first...And tum mujhse aise questions kyun pooch rahe ho...tum apni aukath main raho samjhe...I've lost my brother and I am in no position to satisfy your curiosity now..."AngryAngryAngryAngry

"Arre Sir...aap gussa mat hoyiye...Main toh bass...Mujhe bilkul vishwaas hi nahi ho raha that Maan Sir humein chod kar chale gaye..."

Adi then leaves...and Dev is suspicious of Adi now...

"Why was he asking me those weird questions? And Bro. ke jaane ka toh isse kuch zyaada gham bhi nahi hua hai...Kahin??ShockedConfusedConfused"

~~~~~

Precap: It's suspense!!!Wink

 

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