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@pj2012

Goldie

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

PART I

Scene 1:

Early morning

Baby yawns and snuggles upto Geet, Maan next to them still asleep...🥱
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Geet is awake and looks lovingly at the two joys of her life...😳

"Bilkul apne Pappa pe gaya hai..." she says first caressing baby and then Maan.😳

She slowly gets up from the bed, takes a bath, changes and comes back into the room...

Baby and Pappa still asleep, baby now snuggled upto Pappa😳😳 She smiles at her angels and then remembers that she has to go to the kitchen and make black coffee for her DD😆😆( not Dusht Danav gals😆😆😆 Dearest Darling😳)

But before she could leave baby stirs😳 and is awake. She slowly walks to the bed and tries to put him back to sleep by slowly patting him on his teeny weeny shoulders😳😳😳but the baby was adamant and won't go back to sleep😆 he was hungry. Baby pouts and quivers and tears flood his big bunny eyes😳. He was about to cry his tiny tonsils out when Geet takes him into her lap and feeds him- baby pacified...PHEW!!😆 and Maan still sound asleep.🥱.

She didn't want to wake up Maan because he didn't sleep at all in the night. The baby woke up after every half an hour and cried and he had to pick him up and pacify him... He wouldn't allow Geet to get up since the Doc had advised her to take bed rest for a few days till her body had healed completely and was strong again.

She looks at their baby who was peacefully lying in her lap...

"Mamma ka baby ab kya karega...?"😳

Baby smiles😳 pulling at her mangal sutra...

"Accha Mamma ke saath aayega...chalo phir hum chalte hain kitchen, Pappa ke liye coffee banane...hmmm...😳😳😳"

She bends over Maan, kisses on his forehead, pulls up the blanket...and leaves the room with BSK.

Scene 2: Kitchen

Nakul and Nandini are already there...

"Good morning" greets Geet.

"Good morning Madam," says Nakul.

"Good morning Geet didi...and awww😳good morning my cute bunny..."😳😳 lisps Nandini to MSK junior😆😆😆

She takes Baby from Geet's hand and starts playing with him, while Geet goes to make coffee with her usual non-stop Hoshiarpur Express chattering😆😆😆

"Nandini, yeh Maan bhi na kabhi meri baat nahi manenge...Kal poori raat jage rahe Baby ke saath...and ab uthenge toh seedhe office jaane lagenge..."😕😕😕

Nandini smiles and winks at baby😉

"Nandini kya hua?😕 Tum sun rahi ho naa??"

"Haan haan bilkul didi...😆aap kah rahi thi Jijaji office jaane wale hain par aap chahti ho ki woh naa jaye aur poora time apki ankhon main khoye rahein..."😆

"Haan...aur kya chahoongi main..."😕 suddenly she stops😕... realising what she has said😕, turns to Nandini thrusting the coffee mug angrily onto the tray😡, "Nandini...😡 tum mera mazzaak uda rahi ho naa?? Huh!!" 😡😡😡 she ties her hand in anger and looks away angrily😡. Nakul gulps😆😆😆 and escapes before he too comes under her wrath😆😆😆 He also takes the baby with him...

Nandini comes from behind and hugs her...

"Didi O meri pyaari didi😳...aapke or Jijaji ki yeh nok-jhok hi toh aap dono ke pyaar ko intna special bana deti hain...Didi??"

"Haan"

"Jaldi jayiye before the coffe gets cold and Jijaji gets hot..." 😆

"Arre haan...main bhi na baton main bhool gayi...main abhi jaldi jaakar Maan ko coffee de kar aati hoon."

"Jaldi se kyun...take your time..." she smiles naughtily😆

Geet blushes☺️ and asks... "Nandini baby kahan hai??"

"Baby toh Nakul ke paas hai..."

"Nandini Baby ka khayal rakhna, main abhi aati hoon..."😊

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POOJA

@pj2012

Goldie

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

PART II

Scene 3:

Devini's room

Dev comes out of the room and sees Nakul and other servants playing with the Baby. He adjusts his specs uneasily and calls Nakul...🤓

"Nakul, Geet and Bro kahan hai?"

"Chote saab...woh dono toh apne room main hai."

"Theekh hai...aur baby...ek kaam karo Baby ko mujhe de do, aur Nandini ko jaake kaho ki mere liye chai bhijwa de."

"Ji"

Scene 4:

Dev takes the Baby into his room and closes the door behind him.

"Baby...aap kitne lucky hain...aapke Mummy Pappa apko kitna pyaar kartein hain...aur main...pata hai main kaun hoon😃...Main apka chacha hoon😳 aur main apki..." he stops, his smile fading into a stern look,😳

"...aapki Mamma se..."

Suddenly the door opens and Nandini comes in...Dev looks shocked😲

"Dev garama garam chai...arre Baby yahan hai😳 aapke paas..."

She gives the tea to him and takes BSK from his arms.😳😳😳

Dev is lost in his thoughts and Nandini was unaware of his intensions...😕😕😕

"Mausi ka Baby kya kar raha hai??? Aaj hum aapke Mummy-Pappa ko bahut bada surprise dene waale hain..."😃

"Surprise??" suddenly Dev looks surprised...😕

"Haan Dev...and it'll be a surprise for you as well..."

"Nandini aap mujhe toh bata sakti hai..."

"Nope...bilkul nahi😆😆😆...it is top secret...Baby aur Mausi ka top secret...hain na mere cute bunny..."😳

Dev is curious about the surprise but he had other things simmering in his mind

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Edited by pj2012 - 12 years ago

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POOJA

@pj2012

Goldie

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

PART III

Scene 5:

Maneet's room

Geet enters with coffee, but she doesn't find Maan on the bed...

"Maan kahan hai aap??"😕

"Geet main yahan hoon, tumhare kareeb..." and he hugs her from behind.😳😳😳

"Maan aapko subah subah shararatein soojh rahi hain😳😳...Chaliye ab jaldi se coffee pee lijiye...Mujhe Baby ko nahalana hai...aur bhi bahut saare kaam hai."

"Geet...tumhe Doc ne rest karne ko kaha hai naa phir tum..."

"Arre agar main bina hile dule bed par hi padi rahoongi toh main zaroor bimar ho jaaoongi...humare Baby ko main ek pal ke liye bhi apne se door nahi kar sakti...uska poora kaam main khud hi karna chahti hoon...usme jo sukh ek Ma ko milta hai woh kisi main bhi nahi"😳😳

"Acchaa...par kahan hai mera Junior??"😳😳

"Nandini ke paas hai..."

"Hmmm...😳😳😳Matlab...abhi hum dono bilkul akele hain😉😳😳😳"

"Maan☺️😡..." she slaps him on his arms around her waist...

"Maan aap please office chale jaayiye...That'll be better for me.😕😕"

"YES!!😃" he cries in triumph and suddenly goes silent judging by the angry look on Geet's face.

"What?"😲😡 She turns and sees him all dressed up for office...😲

"Maan...😡 accha...toh yeh sab isliye tha ki main khud hi aapko office bhej doon...HUH!!😡😡" she jerks him away and angrily says, "Theekh hai...jaayiye...main aur Baby aapke bina hi poora din guzaar lenge😭😭😭...waise bhi aapke liye toh office zyaada zaroori hai naa..."😡

"Geet...please samjho naa😕...It's important. Agar zaroori nahi hota toh main kabhi tum dono ko chod kar nahi jaata...Mere liye tum dono se zyaada kuch important nahi...aur agar tum chahti ho to theekh hai main nahi jaoonga..."😕😕

"Maine aisa toh nahi kaha"😕

"Please Geet...I promise shaam ko jaldi wapis aaoonga aur tumhe or Baby ko ek lambi drive pe le jaaoonga..."😃

He turns her towards him, lifts her chin and makes a requesting face...she laughs😆

"Promise😳"

"Pakka promise😃"

They hug...

😳MAHI MAHI😳

They both walk together to the balcony holding on to one another😳 They sit on the swing. Maan sips his coffee and Geet rests her head on his shoulder, her arms around him😳😳...

MSK's mob. rings😆😆😆(Kabab main haddi)

"Adi?"😕

Geet snatches his mob😡.

"Adi Sir aap baad main phone karna...Okay...Bye" she cuts the call...😆😆😆

"Geet? Yeh kya kiya...kuch important baat hogi..."😕😕

"Mujhse bhi zyaada😕"

He stops and says, "Geet...nahin tumse zyaada nahin...arre tum toh Hoshiarpur ki The Geet Handa ho...tumhare naam se toh poora Hoshiarpur kampta hai...phir tumhare saamne main kya cheez hoon..."😆

"Maan aap mera mazaak uda rahe hai naa😡😭...par yaad rakhna shaam ko agar aap time par nahi aaye toh phir dekh lena yeh Hoshiarpur ki Geet aapki kya haalta karti hai..."

"Geet...mujhe darr lag raha hai...😆😆😆...mujhe lagta hai ki main naa Joru ka Ghulam ho gaya hoon...😆😆😆"

"Maan...I am sorry😭😭😭...mera iraada aap par hukum chalane ka nahi tha...Main kuch zyaada hi bol gayi...Aapko aisa lagta hai ki main aap par...😭😭😭...Hey Babaji yeh mujhse kya ho gaya...😭😭😭"

Maan could no longer control his laughter and goes into a fits holding his tummy😆

"Geet apna mooh toh dekho...kaise peela pad gaya hai...jaise tum ne kisi ka murder kiya ho😆😆😆"

"MAAN😡" she growls in anger...

"Wow...your anger turns me on...😆😆😆"

"Maan I'll kill you."😡😡😡

He runs and she chases him😆😆😆...Her joothi slips from her leg and she falls on the carpet, Maan tries to hold her but he couldn't and himself falls on her...😆

MAHI MAHI...INTENSE EYELOCK!!!😳😳

"Maan...please uthiye, mujhe jaane dijiye...😡"

"Babaji😆 aap meri Mishty ko kahiye ki woh gusse main aur zyaada khoobsoorat lagti hain...aur main usse aise hi dekhta rahoonga😳...Office jaana cancel😆😆😆" he bends low on her😳

"What office nahi jaana?😕 Chliye uthiye...aap aaj office jaayenge..." she pushes him.😡

"No...aaj main poora din apni Mishty ki aankhon main dooba rehna chata hoon..."😳

Geet remembers her conversation with Nandini in the kitchen and looks nervously at him😳😳Right then someone knocks at the door and the door opens. It is Nandini with Baby...and she sees them on the carpet...All of them look embarrassed😆...She turns away...

"Sorry...Main woh baad main aati hoon..."😆

Geet looks at Maan furiously😡 and gestures to him to get up😆. He gets up and extends his hand to her...She pushes away his hand and gets up on her own, her ceeks red with anger and embarrassment😆.

She motions to him to speak something and break the silence😕😕😕

He speaks...😆😆😆

"Geet dekh kar chala karo...Tumhe lag jaati toh...mujhe bhi gira diya😆"

Geet's jaw dropped😲 and her nostrils flared in anger😡😡😡

"Didi...main baad main aati hoon😆😆😆"

"Nandini...Baby ko mujhe de do...he must be hungry...usse nahalana bhi hai..."😳

"Haan haan chalo chalo...😃" says Maan eagerly.

Geet looks at him furiously...

"Aap kahan aa rahe hain??😡" she speaks with clenched teeth and putting on a fake smile... "Aap office ke liye late ho rahe hain na...toh jaayiye naa...😕😆"

"Okay...😕" He kisses Baby on his softy cheeks and then kisses Geet on hers', not realising Nandini was still there😆😆😆 to which Geet became more angry and frowns at him...😡

"Oh Sorry...Bye...Main jaata hoon...Bye Nandini..."😕😕😕

He slaps his head and goes out...

Nandini bursts into laughter looking at Geet's blushing face and says, "Baby apki Mamma toh bahut smart nikli😆😆😆...aapke Pappa ko jo apne nainon main ghooma diya...😆😆😆"

Geet blushes and she too laughs😳

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Edited by pj2012 - 12 years ago

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POOJA

@pj2012

Goldie

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

PART IV

Scene 6:

KM hall

Dev sees Maan walking towards the hall...He stops him...

"Bro...aap office jaa rahe hain...?"

"Haan...Are you not coming?😕"

"Nahi Bro...mujhe kuch aur kaam hai...Main baad main milta hoon apse..."

"Alright Dev😊." He leaves.

Dev is brooding again, his eyes narrowed😈🤓...he didn't seem normal at all. Something was going inside his mind...

Scene 7:

Khurana Constructions Office

Pinki is slumped into the office sofa...munching lazily on to her favourite chips😆😆😆 from the umpteenth pack.

"Geet kitni lucky hai ki use DD jaisa husband mila...DD usse kitna pyaar karte hain...And look at me...kha kha kar moti hoti jaa rahi hoo...Kaash mujhe bhi koi DD jaisa...😍..."

Precisely at that moment Adi Sir comes stammering, quivering and stumbling and "DHADAAM!!!"

He hits the table, his specs fly away😆😆😆and he lands right on Pinki...her chips thrown in air that falls on them like showering flowers😆😆😆

Violins play...dreamy ambience😆😆😆 Adi Sir lost in her eyes and Pinki wondering whatz wrong with him...or was that the effect of excessive intake of Carbohydrates and fats😆😆😆

"Adi Sir??😲😕"

"Haan...😲" he screws his eyes and Maneesh.a.a.a hands over his specs to him and says😳😳😳...

"Yeh aapke specs...😆😆😆" and holds his hand to which Adi perspirates and stammers...Manish...shaa leaves.

"Pinki...sorry...woh mera pair takrra gaya tha...😕"

"Adi Sir??"

"Pinki..." he says dreamily😍...😆😆😆

"Maan Sir😕😕😕" she gulps...

"Kya...kahan???😲"

"Apke peeche..."😕

Adi is petrified and faints😆😆😆

Pinki holds him and sprinkles water on him😆😆😆

He regains consciousness and the moment he sees Maan...he goes into his stammer attack mode...😕😕😕

"ADI😡😡" shouts MSK.

"Y..y..yy...yes Sir😕😕😕"

"Yeh kya ho raha hai...ek din main office kya nahi aata...tum log yahan Circus shuru kar dete ho..."😡

"S..ss...soorrryyy Sir..."😕😕😕

Before Adi could complete his sentence...there came like a crashing train with three bogies...Romeo, Pandey ji and Manish..aa...They crash into one another almost falling on MSK.😆😆😆(OH NO!! Khallaas😆😆😆)

"Oh aaa gaye Circus ke teen bandar😡...aayiye aayiye aap hi ka intezaar tha..."

Pandey ji is pushed to the front...

"Manyavar...hum toh apna karya poori shraddha se poorna kar rahe the...parantu aap ke aagman par humein yahan aane ke liye Romeo ji aur Manish...Manisha..ji ne vyavash kiya..."

"Heh!!😲...Pandey ji jayiye apna kaam kariye...😡" he fumes, "Iss office main kya koi hai jo normal hai...??"

Sasha and Tasha 😈 viewing everything from a distance...

Tasha fiddling with her hair as usual...

"Sasha...I mean ma'am...ab aap kya karne wali hain...?"

"Just watch and learn..."

They approach MSK...

"MK...😕 aap aa gaye...the clients are waiting for you in the conference hall..." she informs.

"Thanks Sasha...tum chalo main abhi aata hoon" he then walks to his cabin.

Sasha gives her wicked look and looks at others with disgust.

Adi goes to MSK's cabin...but he's already leaving for the meeting...

"Sir, aapko kuch batana hai..."

"Not now Adi...I'm already late...These clients are important...We'll talk later." He leaves and Adi looks on completely disappointed.😔

He slams his fist into his hand...It seemed really urgent...

Scene 8:

KM

Nandini and Geet are in the kitchen...

"Didi aaj aapka koi plan toh nahi hai naa?"

"Hmmm...shaam ko Maan mujhe aur Baby ko drive pe leke jaa rahe hain..."

Nandini thinks in her mind...

"Jab raat ko wapis aayenge tab doongi Surprise.."😃

"Kya baat hai Nandini?"

"Kuch nahi...Jijaji kitna pyaar karte hain aapse...aur ek Dev hain...mujhe yahan akele chod kar Pune gaye hain..."

"Nandini, aisa nahin hai...kuch zaroori kaam hoga...😳"

Baby cries...

"Lagta hai...Baby jaag gaya...Main dekh kar aati hoon."

Scene 9:

Dev parks his car outside a Police Station...goes inside.

"Inspector...Where is he?"

"He's left...He told me he'll meet you at Khurana Mansion..."

"Kya??😲 Woh KM gaya hai??😲"

"Aisa hi bol raha tha..."

"Okay..Thank you Inspector."

He hurries back to his car and drives back to KM.

Scene 10:

Office

Meeting is over...and the deal is finalised.

MSK comes out with the clients and sees them off.

Adi rushes to him and this time before MSK could stop him he spoke, "Sir...Brij is out of jail...Woh choot gaya hai..."

MSK is shocked😲

Scene 11:

Office Reception

Phone rings...

Pinki picks it up

"Hello Khurana Constructins"

"Pinki...Main Geet bol rahi hoon"

"Arre Geet...kaisi hai...Baby kaisa hai...meri taraf se lots of kisses to him...aur jab main agli baar aaoongi baby se milne toh uske liye mere favourite chips laaoongi..."

"Pinki...Baby sirf one week old hai...😆😆😆Woh chips nahi sirf doodh peeta hai...😆"

"Oh Sorry yaar...main bhi na... khaane ke alawa kuch soojhta hi nahi...accha bata phone kis liye kia?"

"Woh...Maan ka mobile lag hi nahi raha...toh socha office main hi phone karke dekhti hoon...Waise kahan hai woh...?"

"Woh Sir toh clients ke saath the..."

Suddenly someone snatches the phone...It is Sasha...

"Pinki tumhe phone pe gappe marne ki salary nahi milti...now get going...kaam karo..."

"Hello"

"Pinki is gone...woh iss office main kaam karne aati hai...Office time pe call karke disturb mat kia karo..."

"Hello...Sasha...Pinki ko phone do...😡"

Sasha understood it's Geet...

"Oh Geet...I mean Geet ma'am😕😕😕...I'll give the phone to Pinki."

She thrusts the receiver back into Pinki's hand and leaves angrily...Tasha imitates her😆😆😆

"Kya bura time chal raha ha...Uss LS behenji...Miss Hoshiarpur ko tak Ma'am kahana pad raha hai...Pata nahi ussne Mk par kya jadoo chalaya hai..."😕

"Poor Sasha...I mean Ma'am...Aap yeh job chod kyun nahi deti..."

She frowns at Tasha as if she asked her to kill herself...

"Accha aur doosra job tum mujhe dogi...and MK ko chod kar main kaheen nahi jaoongi samjhi...😡...Nonsense...now get lost...Naukri chod doon...huh!!"😡😡

Office Reception

"Geet...Wow...Dono Sasha-Tasha lal peele ho kar gaye yahan se...mazza aa gaya"😆😆😆

"Accha Pinki...Maan ko bula dena please..."

"Sir yahin par hai...main abhi deti hoon..."

"Sir Geet ka phone hai."

"Geet? Woh theekh toh hai naa?" he is really worried after hearing the news of Brij's exit.😲😲

He takes the receiver...

"Geet tum theekh ho naa...and Baby?"

"Haan Maan mujhe kya hoga...Main aur Baby bilkul theekh hain aur apko miss kar rahein hai😳"

Maan sighed and thanked God...

"Geet main abhi ghar aa raha hoon"

"Abhi?"

He cuts the call and rushes out of the office...

Scene 12:

KM

Nandini is pleasantly surprised to see Dev back...
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"Aap wapis aa gaye...aap toh Pune jaane wale the naa."

"Meeting cancel ho gayi...Nandini yahan koi mujhse milne aaya tha kya?"

"Yahan aapse...nahi toh...why?? Are you expecting some one?"

"No...koi nahi...Main bahut thak gaya hoon...I'm going to the room..."

"Theekh hai main khana room main hi lekar aati hoon..."

"Nahi😲, I've had lunch...I just need some rest..."

Geet comes there with the baby and sees Dev going inside his room...She asks Nandini...

"Dev kab wapis aaya? Any problem??"

"Pata nahi didi...he didn't tell me anything."

"Maan bhi ghar wapis aa rahein hai...woh bhi pareshaan lag rahe the...kuch toh baat hai..."😕😕

Scene 13:

Dev's room

His mobile rings...

He nervously picks it up...

"Dev...main bol raha hoon.."

"Brij?" his eyes widens with fear😕

"Tumne meri zammanat karwayi, mera itna khayal rakha...toh mera bhi farz banta hai ki main tumhara shukriya ada karoon..."

"Tum abhi kahan ho??"😲

"KM main...terrace pe aa jaao...wahin miloonga"

😲😲😲

Scene 13:

Terrace

They come face to face

"Brij tumhe kisi ne dekha to nahi...😕"

"Nahi...kisi ne bhi nahi..."

"Good..."

"Ab aage ka kya plan hai?"

"Plan simple hai..." Dev gives an evil grin, "Bro ko apne raaste se hatana hai taaki Geet meri ho jaaye...😈"

(DEV 🤬...u've shown ur real self😡😡😡)

"Maan Singh Khurana...usne mujhe jail bhijwaya...Mujhe mere parivar walon se alag karva diye...Daar ji mujhse nafrat kartein hai...uski wajah se...aur uss Geet ko apnaya...😡...Main usse khatam kar doonga."

"Kuch bhi karo, I want him out of my way...Bachpan se leke aaj tak usne mujhse mera sab kuch cheena hai...aur ab Geet ko bhi😡...Ab main Geet se aur door nahi rah sakta...Bahut ho gaya...Uska Kissa hi khatam kar do."

"Geet ko bhi khatam kar doonga...😡"

"Nahi Brij...Geet ko kuch mat karna...usse kuch bhi hua toh main tumhe zinda nahin chodoonga. Maan chala jaayega toh...kuch din royegi, phir usse mere paas hi aana padega.😈"

"Ab tum jao yahan se isse pehle ki koi tumhe dekh le...baaki plan baad main decide karenge...

Dev gives his evil grin...😈

He remembers the past events one by one...

Seeing Geet in Hoshiarpur

Cheating her

Leaving her at the airport

Returning back and seeing her again

Wants her back...but by then Maan had entered her life...She was in love with him...

He begins plotting without anyone realising his cruel intentions...tries hard to separate Maneet...

It was him who indirectly instigates Naintara to scare her off from Maan's life...he fails

He informs Brij about Geet's whereabouts and tries to stop Maneet's marriage...he fails

Even Vikram was his pawn...he fails again

"Geet jabhi main tumhe Bro ki bahon main dekhta hoon...mera khoon kholta hai...Tum sirf meri ho...Sirf Dev ki...aur main tumhe paa kar hi rahoonga...And jabhi mai tumhare aur Maan ke baby ko dekhta hoon...mujhe humare bacche ki yaad aati hai...jo uss Maan ki wajah se humein chod kar chala gaya...I lost you, our child, everything because of him...aur ab main usse uski sabhi khushiyaan cheen loonga."

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Precap:

Maan cancels the plan of long drive as he's concerned for Geet's safety...Nandini tells Maneet to get ready for a surprise and when they come down to the hall all dressed up...with Baby...there in the hall was...

DADI MA...and Geet's entire family

A small pooja was arranged and Baby's namkaran ceremony with the blessings of the entire family...Geet is overwhelmed with emotions

Baby's name - Aditya Singh Khurana

After the pooja...party

Maan and Geet close dance...baby playing with Dadima

And Baby goes missing!!!😲

Edited by pj2012 - 12 years ago

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tazeen_29

@tazeen_29

Goldie

Posted: 12 years ago

fantastic updates ..gr888 thinking ..maha twist of dev's -ve side ..looking ff to read ...hope we get our GurTi back soon..😃

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erumzaheer

@erumzaheer

Goldie

Posted: 12 years ago

fantastic updates

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tazeen_29

@tazeen_29

Goldie

Posted: 12 years ago

was there any update for today ? plz dear update plz..waiting...

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POOJA

@pj2012

Goldie

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

EPISODE 3

Scene 1:

[Maneet's room: Baby sleeping in the cradle...Maan enters...taking off his tie and waist coat...Geet is standing in the balcony lost in thoughts...Maan first goes to the cradle, kisses his baby and then walks to Geet.]

"Maan! Aap aa gaye..."

But before she could ask anything else, he pulls her into a tight hug like if he wouldn't hold on to her tightly he'd lose her...

"Geet, I love you...tum mujhse kabhi door mat jaana..."

"Maan..." she places her palm on his face, "Main apse door kyun jaoongi...Aap mujhse kuch chupa rahein hai?"

He realised that in his concern he almost lost control over his reason and was about to disclose the news about Brij's release.

"Geet...aisi koi baat nahi hai? I was just missing you terribly...tum dono ke bina ab mera mann kahin lagta hi nahin."

"Maan...I love you."

And they hug...Geet is completely unaware of the storm that was going to enter her life. Maan on the other hand was determined that he'd never allow any such storm to enter their life, he also knew he would protect Geet and Baby till his last breath.

"Maan aap change kar lijiye main khaana lagwati hoon."

!!!!!

Scene 2:

Devini's room

Nandini is on phone and looks really excited...Dev looks at her apprehensively and walks to her.

"Nandini!"

She is off the phone and turns to him...

"Haan Dev, Aap kahin jaa rahein hai?" she asks finding him all ready to leave.

"Haan...Main London jaa raha hoon...I'll be back in one week. I have to attend an International Business Conference there since Bro can't leave Geet and Baby alone at this moment."

"Dev...you don't have to give explanation...I totally understand you...Aap apna khayal rakhiyega...aur yahan ki chinta bilkul mat kijiyega..."

"Oh Nandini aap kitni understanding hai...I'd have loved to stay here for your surprise par kya karein..."

"Yeah...Dadima aa rahi hai...and I have also called Geet didi's family here. Woh kitna khush hongi..."

"Wow...Nandini, mujhe bilkul pata nahin tha aap itna badiya surprise plan kar rahi thi..."

"Dadima aapko miss karengi...but I'll tell her if it wasn't urgent you would have stayed back."

"Main jaldi wapis aa jaaoonga..."

He leaves but he was no longer the same Dev, he had an evil twinkle in his eyes and it was foreboding.

Scene 3:

Lunch table

Geet serves him rice and other things...then comes and sits next to him smiling at him.

"Geet tumne kha liya?"

"Haan...maine aur Nandini ne kab ka kha liya."

"Aur medicine le liya na tumne..."

"Haan Maan...aap ne toh mujhe baccha bana diya hai."

She laughs...

Maan looks really in a dilemma and finally decides to tell her,

"Geet...Main bahut thakh gaya hoon...kya hum aaj ke long drive ka plan phir kabhi karein...?"

"Kya hua Maan? Jab se aap office se jaldi aaye hain tab se kuch pareshaan lag rahein hain...Aap zaroor mujhse kuch chupa rahein hain...Please batayiye naa."

He suddenly changes topic...

"Geet...koi problem nahin hai...I've told you...bas kuch office main problem ho gayi thi..."

"Office main? I knew it...kuch toh baat thi jo aap ko pareshaan kar rahi thi..."

"Geet...shaant ho jao...it was a small problem and I've solved it...Main bas aaj ghar main rehna chahta hoon."

Geet was still not convinced but she didn't want to trouble him more so she kept quiet...

Scene 4:

Evening

Nandini persuades Maan and Geet to come down to the hall all dressed up for a party she had organised for them and the Baby...

Geet takes out a beautiful maroon and gold silk saree from her wardrobe and begins to change...Baby is playing on the bed...

"Baby aap ke Pappa ghar main hai phir bhi unka poora dhyaan office main laga rahta hai...Dekhiye abhi bhi Adi Sir se baat karne gaye hai balcony main..."

Baby chuckles...and Geet smiles at him lovingly...

"Mamma abhi aati hain aapke paas..."

She wraps the sari around her and looks into the mirror, and sees Maan behind her completely mesmerised in her beauty...

MAHI MAHI

They are lost in each other's eyes...Maan approaches a nervously smiling Geet and was lifts his hand to hold her face...

Baby cries and they fumble looking away from each other...

She goes and picks up baby, Maan looks at them and says,

"Geet Baby ko main sambhaal loonga, tum jaldi se tayyar ho jao..."

He takes Baby from her hand and starts playing with him. Geet becomes emotional seeing them together, wipes her tears and starts getting ready for the party.

Scene 5:

Maan holding Baby, and Geet holding his hand walk down the stairs to the deserted and dark hall.

They look around but there was no one in there...

"Kahan hai everyone? Nandini??" she calls...

Suddenly...

"SURPRISE!!!!!"

Dadi Maa comes forward and surprises them...

"Dadi maa..." cries Geet and hugs her...

"Geet beta maine aap logon ko kitna miss kiya...aur sabse pehle toh main apne parpote ko dekhna chahti hoon...Jaante hai jabse mujhe Baby ke aane ki news mili hai main jaldi se ghar aa jaana chahti thi...aur jaise hi yaatra khatam hui main bhaagi bhaagi aa gayi apne bachon ke paas...Maan beta?" she sees him holding the Baby. Tears fill her eyes and she rushes to him...and takes the Baby from his hand and starts loving him like mad...She is so overwhelmed with joy and couldn't control her emotions with her great grandson smiling in her lap.

Nandini too comes and announces, "Geet didi aapke liye ek aur surprise hain..."

And Geet wonders what it is...when one by one her entire family gathers in front of her. She is shocked to see them all and just couldn't believe her eyes...She runs to her parents and cries aloud holding on to them...They too ask her forgiveness for not being with her when she wanted them the most...

The reconciliation was very emotional...they all thank Maan for looking after their daughter and giving her all the happiness that they never gave her. They all meet the baby and all of them wanted to hold him in their hands...

Geet thanks Nandini...who tells her that it was all Jijaji's plan and that he wanted you to have all the happiness that you had lost...

"Maan ne kiya yeh sab..." she looks around but doesn't find him anywhere...

Maan is in the garden and he's talking to Adi on phone...

"Adi uss Brij ka kuch pata chala..."

"Nahi Sir...woh jail se choothte hi kahin gayab ho gaya...par Sir mujhe pata chala hai ki Dev Sir aaj uss Police station main gaye the..."

"Dev? But why?" he sees Geet coming towards him and he tells Adi to find more about it and cuts the call...

She comes near him and looks into his eyes lovingly...and then she hugs him and Maan hugs back...

"Maan thank you...aapne mujhe itni saari khushiyaan de di..."

"Geet tum khush ho mujhe aur kya chahiye..."

Nandini comes out and calls them in...

"Geet didi...Jijaji andar chaliye...Pandit ji aa gaye hain...Baby ke namkaran ceremony ka muhurat ho gaya hai..."

Geet looks at him still in his arms and says, "Chale Mr Maan Singh Khuraana..."

"Yes Mrs Geet Singh Khurana...chaliye...waise aap ne humare bete ka koi naam socha hai..."

Suddenly they both realise that they haven't still thought of a name...

Scene 6:

The ceremony begins...

Pandit ji chants the mantras and asks Maan to sit down with the baby in his lap...and then the Pandit tells him to hold the betel leaf to the baby's ear and whisper his name into his ears. He looks at Geet, who walks to Dadi ma and asks her to suggest a name...

Dadi suggests the name "Aditya Singh Khurana..." Aditya was the name of her late husband and Geet and Maan loves the name.

The baby is named Aditya and soon after the ceremony the party begins...

Scene 7:

Slow ball room dance

"Geet, tum itni door kyun khadi ho?"

"Door Maan? Yeh door hai?"

He pulls her closer and says, "Haan ab theekh hai..."

She frowns at him, "Maan sab dekh rahein hai...chodiye mujhe..."

The music begins...

[Jab koi baat bigad jaaye, jab koi mushkil pad jaaye, tum dena saath mera...Oh hum nava...]

They dance like two people who are truly and divinely in love with eachother, lost in each other's eyes...magical and heavenly...

After the dance...Geet asks for the Baby...

Dadi maa tells her Baby was with Nandini...but looking everywhere the baby is not found to be with anyone...Geet is desperate and frantically runs around asking everyone where her baby was...Maan and everyone else present there search for the baby but he was gone...Geet faints crying for her baby...Maan takes her to their room and comes down...

Maan's mobile rings...

"Maan Singh Khurana?"

"Brij?" he utters, his face losing all it's life...

"Kaise he aap...aur meri behen Geet?? Arre main toh bhool hi gaya aap ko mubarakbaad dene ke kiye...Main bahut khush hoon...Mama jo ban gaya hoon...Mera bhanja..."

"Shut up you filthy coward...Mera beta kahan hai??? Agar usse kuch bhi hua toh main tumhe zinda nahi chodoonga..."

"Chillayiye mat Khurana saab...aap apne bete ki jaan khatre main daal rahein hain..."

"Brij...tum aisa kuch nahi karoge...Main tumhare aage haath jodta hoon...please usse kuch mat karna, tum jo kahoge main woh karoonga bas usse lauta do..."

Brij laughs like a crazy maniac and cuts the call...Maan falls down completely broken...

Everyone comes to him and asks him who it was...and Geet's family understands it's Brij, Geet's own brother who has kidnapped their son...They are completely shocked and ashamed and Daar ji angrily takes out his sword and swears to kill Brij...

!!!!!!

Precap: Police is informed about the kidnapping...Geet is still unconscious. Maan takes his jeep and goes out in search of their child. Nandini tries to contact Dev but his phone is unreachable. Adi is at KM and he is trying hard to contact Maan but his phone too is unreachable...

Edited by pj2012 - 10 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

~Episode 4~

Scene 1:

Maneet's room

Everyone's gathered around the bed where Geet is lying unconscious...Geet's mum and Dadi ma are sitting next to her and the Doc is examining her.

Maan's in complete shock and wonders why happiness doesn't lasts long in their life...His geet was unconscious and their one week old baby was kidanapped...his brain was going numb but he couldn't give up...He had to find their baby at any cost and he was not going to spare Brij and who so ever was supporting him this time😡😡😡...they had gone too far this time...

He barges out of the room completely unaware of things happening around him...Daar ji and Geet's dad follow him but he won't even stop for them...He gets into the jeep and drives away...

Scene 2:

Railway Station

A woman wrapped in a shawl, covering her head and face walks towards the railway bridge. She was carrying something in her hand. Only her eyes were visible and they were full of fear😲...She appeared to be looking for someone and also seemed to be in a hurry. Halfway the bridge, she halts between platform four and five, and turns to a man who was waiting for her. The man was none other than Brij😡😡😡

"Kisi ko tum pe koi shak toh nahi hua na...😡"

She speaks with fear,

"Nahi ji...aap ne jaisa kaha tha maine waise hi kiya...par yeh bahut chota hai😭...yeh apni Maa ke bina kaise rahega...😭"

"Bacche ko idhar lao...tum bas apne kaam se matlab rakho...iss bacche ki fikar karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai..."😡😡😡 and he snatches the baby from her hand...😡

The baby wakes up😭 and not finding his mother he begins crying in hunger.😕 Brij is annoyed by the baby's crying and shushes the baby...but the baby won't stop. Brij nervously looks around to check whether someone was watching them or not😕😡 He angrily scolds the baby and jerks the poor child. The woman stops him and asks,

"Yeh aap kya kar rahein hai😲...yeh ek chota baby hai..."😭

"CHUP😡...Badi aayi hai iski fikar karne waali😡...Main iska Mama hoon aur joh fikar mujhe nahi woh tumhe kyun ho rahi hai...Yeh pakad apne paise..."😡 he throws the money on her face😕, "aur daffa ho yahan se..."

😭 She began to leave half-heartedly😭 looking at the tired and hungry baby😭😭 wriggling in Brij's hard hands😭😭😭

"Aur sun😡" she stops, "iss baare main kisi ko pata nahi chalna chahiye...agar teri zubaan khuli...toh main tera woh hashar karoonga😡😡😡 samajh gayi naa...ab chal yahan se..." he drives her away...

She gulps in fear and silently walks away. Brij looks at the baby in his hands and his diabolic eyes widens with hatred and his heart fills with a malign satisfaction.😡😡😡

"Bhaanje janta hai main kaun hoon? Main tera Mama hoon... aur tu😡😡😡 uss Geet aur Maan ki nishaani hai jinhone mujhe jail bhijwaya aur mujhe mere pariwaar se alag kar diya...Geet😡 tujhe toh main baad main dekh loonga...par Maan joh tune mere saath kiya hai uska badla main tujhse zaroor loonga😡😡😡," he looks at the baby and then staright ahead, "Ab tujhe mujh se koi nahi bacha sakta..."😡

His mob. rings...it's Dev.

"Haan bolo..."

"Baby kahan hai..."

"Mere paas hai...jabse aaya hai...tabse gala phad kar roye hi jaa raha hai...kya karoon main ab iska..."

"Suno usse kuch mat karna...tum mera wait karo...main abhi aata hoon."😈🤓

Scene 3:

Police Station

Maan is very furious and yells at the Inspector...

"Aapne usse jaane kyun diya...I want to know where he went...Agar mere bacche ko kuch hua😡 toh main kisi ko nahi chodoonga...aapko bhi nahi...😡"

"Mr Khurana shaant ho jaayiye...dekhiye humne poore city main police force ko alert kar diya hai...aapka baby jald hi mil jayega."

Maan was not going to sit idle taking the inspector's words for an answer. He had to find his son on his own...While coming out of the station one of the constables stops him from behind and informs him, nervously looking around😕, that Brij had gone to KM after his release and that a man had come looking for him after he left the station.

He couldn't undestand why Dev had come to meet Brij...but at that moment he was more worried about finding his child.

Adi calls him...

"Sir, I've found some information about a woman who might have taken the baby out of KM. She lives in the slum area near the railway station. Her name is Shanta."

"Adi I'm going to that place right now..."

"Okay Sir...I'll call you as soon as I get any new information."

"Adi...wait...Geet ko hosh aaya?"

"No Sir😕 abhi tak behosh hai Geet, par aap fikar mat kijiye...hum sab hain na yahan pe uski dekhbaal karne ke liye...aap bas baby ka pata lagayiye..."

~~~~~

Scene 4:

Maan reaches the slum and enquires about the woman called Shanta...After asking a lot of people he finally finds her home. She sees him coming and runs out of the back door. Maan chases her and catches her...

"Kahan hai mera baccha? Tum hi usse uttha kar le gayi thi naa?"

"Saab please mujhe kuch mat kariye...main toh bas paise ke liye...mujhe maaf kar dijiye...😭"

"Dekho main tumhe kuch nahi karoonga...bas mujhe mera baccha kahan hai bata do..."

"Woh baby toh uske paas hai..." she shivers with fear.😕

He understands immediately it's Brij and asks her, "Kahan hai woh? Take me to him."

She takes him to the bridge, but Brij was gone with the baby already.

The police comes and takes away the woman...and Maan breaks down not knowing where to find his child...😭

Outside the railway station he sees Dev's car zooming out of the station😲...he chases it but loses track of it in the heavy traffic of the city.

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Scene 5:

He's frustrated😡, heart broken and desperate to find his baby. He stops his jeep near a temple and gets down from the jeep. He sees a mother and father going into the temple with their new born baby. He imagines Geet and himself holding their baby in their place, and tears fill his heart. He climbs the temple steps and reaches the temple...prays to God with all his heart.😭😭😭

"Bhagwaan apne mujhe aur Geet ko itni badi khushi di...aur phir apne usse humse door kar diya...kyun Bhagwaan?😭😭😭 Please aap mujhe saza de dijiye par mera baccha woh toh bahut chota hai...aur pata nahin woh kahan hai...please usse lauta dijiye...Bhagwaan please humein humara baccha wapis lauta dijiye..."😭

His mob. rings...he comes out and wipes his tears...he takes the call...

"Sir, Geet ko hosh aa gaya hai...woh baby ke liye pooch rahi hai...Aap please ghar aa jayiye..."

Maan rushes to his jeep, he didn't wanted to lose Geet aswell.😭 There a Fakir Baba stops him and says,

"Baccha...upar wale pe bharosa rakh...woh kabhi apne bachon ka haath nahi chodta..." and he blesses him.😳

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Scene 6:

A lonely dilapidated house on the outskirts of the city

Baby is crying breathlessly on seeing only Brij who was being cruel to the child😭😭😭...he is hungry and wants to be in his mamma's comforting arms...😭😭😭

Brij is very irritated and pours some water into the baby's tiny mouth. Baby chokes and cries even louder...gasping for breath...😭

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Scene 7:

KM

Geet wakes up with a start screaming...

"Mera baccha!!!"😲

She springs out of the bed, pushes everyone aside and runs out of her room crying,

"Mera baccha...woh ro raha hai...mujhe uske paas jaana hai..." 😭😭😭

She runs down the stairs and in the doorway runs into Maan...She falls into his arms crying...😭

"Maan humaara baccha...mujhe uske paas le chaliye...woh kahan hai...woh bhooka hoga😭😭...Maan...please kuch kijiye...mujhe baby ke paas le chaliye😭😭😭 Main uske bina mar jaoongi😭" she cries almost losing her senses and becomes lifeless after crying.😭

Maan could no longer tolerate to watch Geet in such a pathetic state...😭

"Geet humare Baby ko kuch nahi hoga...I promise you, main Baby ko tumhare paas wapis le aoonga...Nadini," he turns to Nandini holding Geet in his arms, "tum Geet ko andar le jao...main baby ko dhoondne jaa raha hoon..."

"Nahi Maan...please mujhe bhi apne saath le chaliye...mujhe chod kar mat jayiye..." she was really broken...and was afraid to lose him also.😭😭😭

She wouldn't let go off him, holding on to him tightly. He decides to take her along, fearing her health to worsen with all the crying and worrying.

Before they leave, he again turns to Nandini and asks her,

"Nandini, Dev ka koi message aaya?"

"Nahi...Jijaji...kya baat hai?"😕

"Kuch nahi...tum please Dadi maa ke saath rehna...unka khayal rakhna..."

~~~

Scene 8:

In the jeep

Geet is completely broken and rests her head on Maan's shoulder. Maan looks at her and then tells himself...he has to find their Baby at any cost...

PRECAP:

Dev enters the house where Brij was hiding the Baby

Baby is silent...🥱 tears dried at the corners of his tiny eye lashes.😭😭🥱

"Kya hua? Baby chup kyun hai...😲😲😲kahin tumne isko?"

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Posted: 12 years ago

~*~CHAPTER 5~*~

Scene 1:

It was ⭐️Christmas eve⭐️...a time of the year when people come together and celebrate the spirit of joy, love and benevolence...a time when happiness fills every heart, every molecule in this wonderful universe.😃

But for Maan and Geet, the day was dismal and the most traumatic😭, for they had lost the very reason to be happy...and they were searching like mad for their child😭.

The streets were crowded with revellers and floats.🥳 And it was difficult to drive in such congested streets😕. While driving through the market road, Maan suddenly stops the car when a woman in rags holding a baby crosses the jeep in haste. Geet sees her and cries, "BABY!😲😲😲"

Maan looks at her and then at the woman...he gets down and hurries to the woman, Geet behind him😭.

"Rukiye!😕"

She turns in surprise😲, with the baby in her hand. Geet soon realises it's not their baby...Maan apologises to her for stopping her like that and tells the woman about their missing baby...Geet sees the smiling baby in the woman's hand and remembers her own child...😭😭

She kisses the baby and says, "Bahut pyaara hai apka baby..."😭

"Madam ji...Aap bilkul pareshaan mat hoyiye...Main bhi ek Ma hoon aur main Bhagwaan se prarthana karoongi ki woh aapke baby ko jaldi se lauta de...Aap dheeraj rakhiye...😊"

Geet could not control her pain and runs away from there😭😭😭. Maan sighs and controls his tears...He again apologises and places in her hand all the money he had, and he tells her to take good care of the baby.

Scene 2:

Dev is really shocked to see the motionless figure of the child on the table...

"What did you do? What's wrong with the child...kahin tumne usse...😲😲😲" he gasps in horror.

"Maine kuch nahi kiya...yeh toh khud hi bhookh se ro ro kar so gaya. Mera sar kha gaya ro ro kar...kuch peetha hi nahi..."😡😡😡

"Ab humein jaldi hi kuch karna hoga...hum Baby ko zyaada din Geet se door nahi rakh payenge...yeh abhi bahut chota hai and he needs mother's milk...agar isse kuch ho gaya toh phir main...Geet ko kaise apna banaoonga. Yeh baby hi toh mujhe meri Geet se milayega."

Brij grimaces as if he didn't care😡😡

"Marne do isse bhookh se...Mujhe toh bas MAAN😡 aur uss GEET...😡" he clenches his teeth and fist in anger.

Dev looks at him sternly and says, "Geet? Tumko maine samjhaya tha na ki tum Geet ko kuch nahi karoge...Tumhe sirf Bro ko rasste sai hatana hai...Tum sirf wahi karo jiske liye tumhe maine jail se chudwaya hai...SAMJHE!!😡😡😡" he yells.

Brij wanted to destroy the entire Khurana family especially Maan and Geet whom he blames for his doom. But he had made a deal with Dev in return for his freedom...that he'd spare Geet's life...

"Main...woh...gusse main...😡😕"

!!!!!!!

P.S:⭐️⭐️HAPPY X' MAS!!⭐️⭐️

Sorry for the small update...will make up for it in tomos episode...😃

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