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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by neha_maaneet


hi puja u r so sweet and your updat is all so so sweet. but pecap song r all reday ur update .
so plz change the song just like
aaja piya tho pyar du...
aaja aaja o piya(yeh raaste hain pyar ke)
beri piya(davdas)
and 
me teri isha me mar ...and so on...



Hi Neha...๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Thanks a lot for ur sweet comment๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Regarding the song...'am so sorry...I am ready with the update...and i didn't see ur post before...๐Ÿ˜•but that's okay...there's always a next time...if u really like the songs u've suggested...can u write a Maaneet sequence with any one of these songs and pm me...I'll try to fit in the song in one of the future updates๐Ÿ˜ณ

๐Ÿ˜ณThanks for ur suggestion๐Ÿ˜ƒ

PJโญ๏ธ

Posted: 11 years ago

~โญ๏ธEpisode 89โญ๏ธ~


 

Scene 1:

 

The entire way, the silence in the car made Maan and Geet more uneasy. Guru sat with his dad and occasionally looked back at her mum.

"Mamma...aap aur Pappa kuch bolte kyun nahi?"๐Ÿ˜•

"Eh!๐Ÿ˜ฒ" she looked at him in surprise, "Guru woh...Pappa gaadi chala rahe hain na...Don't disturb him๐Ÿ˜•."

Guru nods and sits straight, still wondering why his parents were not talking.๐Ÿ˜•

...

 


Scene 2:

 

Adi and Pinki's home

"Pinki, Doctor ne kaha hai na...No chips...no junk food...only healthy diet...๐Ÿ˜•"

"Kya Adi...yeh ghaas-phoos aur daal khaane se koi healthy kaise ho sakta hai...Please mere chips do naa..."

"Theekh hai...but remember that baby bhi yahi sab khayega...aur agar baby yeh khayega toh..."

"Nahi nahi๐Ÿ˜ฒ...I won't eat this...Aap jo kahoge main wahi khaoongi..."

She throws away the chips packet...

Adi's mum comes in and tells them that as per the family traditions they'll have to keep a function for Pinki and the baby...

"Theekh hai Ma...aap jaisa chahein..."

Pinki smiles happily and hugs him...๐Ÿ˜ณ

 

 

Scene 3:

 

In Boy's Hostel...where Romeo, Pandey ji and...Manish...a resided...

 

"Yaar, humein Geet aur Maan sir ke liye kuch karna chahiye...Bechare kitne door-door rahte hain...Ek doosre ko apni dil ki baat bhi nahi bata paate..."๐Ÿ˜ญ

"Shriman Romeo, aap nishchit roop se satya kah rahe hain...Maan ji aur Geet ji dono ka virah ab mujhse bhi dekha nahi jaata...Humein avashya unki sahayata karni chahiye..."

"Boys, I have a plan...Oh Wow๐Ÿ˜ณ...Manishaa you are awesome...๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ" boasts Manish...aa himself.

Pandey ji gulps๐Ÿ˜• in confusion, and Romeo grimaces๐Ÿคข...

"Manish...aaa zyaada udne ki zarroorat nahi hai๐Ÿ˜ก...Hum Maan Sir aur Geet ki baat kar rahein hain...koi Shahrukh Khan ki movie ki nahi...joh tum itna excited ho rahe ho..."

"Oh Shut up...Romeo...mera plan toh suno...phir batana ki excited hoon ya nahi?"

He whispers into their ears...and they all join hands in agreement.

"Awesome...ab aayega mazza!!"

 ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

 


Scene 4:

 

The car comes to a halt before Maan's house

 

Guru gets down first...Maan gets down as well...

Geet opens the door herself and gets down, but her duppatta gets stuck...๐Ÿ˜ฒ

She turns and sees Maan๐Ÿ˜ณ...

Maan removes her duppatta from the car and walks to her๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ...

He hugs her and tears roll down her eyes...

MAHI MAHI

๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ

...

"MAMMA!!๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•"

Geet looks down with a start๐Ÿ˜ฒ...it was Guru looking at her...and Maan was on the other side of the car, definitely not hugging her. She was just imagining all that...๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ

"Mamma...andar chalein? Pappa wait kar rahein hain."

"Haan beta...chalo."

...

Geet slowly walks past Maan with Guru...While she walks before him; he looks on at her๐Ÿ˜ณ...

The wind blows her duppatta over his face๐Ÿ˜ณ...he remembers all the old times and slowly removes it from his face๐Ÿ˜ณ. Geet doesn't see it...

...

She reaches the doorway...

Dadima sees her and Guru...She rushes to them and grabs them both into a happy hug...๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

"Babaji...aapne meri prarthana sun li...๐Ÿ˜ƒ" she looks at Maan, "Thank you beta...aapne aakhir apne dil ki baat sun hi li..."

Dadima strokes Geet's hair, kisses her on her forehead and then looks at Guru...She is so overwhelmed with emotions that she is half laughing and half crying...She picks Guru up and kisses him all over...๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Maan looks at her and says, "Dadima...yeh sirf aapse milne aaye hain...aur kuch nahi.๐Ÿ˜•"

Dadima stops abrubtly, and looks up at him in shock...๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ญ

But Maan is completely indifferent and walks away to his room...

Dadima breaks down tearfully...๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ

"Daadima aap please mat royiye๐Ÿ˜ญ...Main aapko chod kar kabhi nahi jaoonga...Aap jab bhi mujhe yaad karengi...main doda chala aaoonga...๐Ÿ˜ณ" says BSK wiping her tears with his tiny hands.๐Ÿ˜ณ

Dadima is touched by his words and hugs him...๐Ÿ˜ณ

Geet too smiles at her son's innocence and strokes his hair.

"Dadima...main Pappa ke paas jaoon?"๐Ÿ˜ƒ

"Haan beta...woh aapke Pappa hain...unke paas jaane ke liye aapko kisi ki permission ki zarroorat nahi hai...Jayiye dodte hue jayiye apne Pappa ke paas."

 

...

 

Geet then sits on her knees beside Dadima and says,

"Dadima...mujhe maaf kar dijiye๐Ÿ˜ญ...yeh sab meri wajah se ho raha hai...Maine unke dil ko bahut dukhaya hai...Maine bahut bada paap kiya hai...๐Ÿ˜ญ"

"Nahi beta๐Ÿ˜ญ...aap apne aap ko dosh mat dijiye...Hum jaante hai aap kabhi Maan ka saath nahi chodti...aapne toh Sam ki jhooth ko kabhi maana hi nahi tha...par unke bete ke liye...uss bacche ke liye aapne apne pyaar ko kurbaan kar diya...Main jaanti hoon aap duvidha main thi...aur yeh sirf ek Maa hi samajh sakti hai...aur aapne uss mamta ki awaaz ko suna...Main aapko kabhi doshi nahi manoongi...Shayad Babaji ki yahi iccha thi. Hum aapki jagah hote toh shayad yahi karte...aur aisa karne ke liye saccha pyaar hona chahiye...Maan ke liye aapka pyaar niswarth hai...aur aap dono door reh kar bhi sada ek doosre se pyaar karte rahe...yahi aap dono ki pyaar ki jeet hai..."

Geet was moved by her words and hugs her, "Dadima!๐Ÿ˜ญ"

"Shaant ho jayiye Geet bete..." she then gets up and makes Geet also to stand, "Bete yahan dekhiye humari aankhon main...kya dikhta hai aapko...khushi aur sirf khushi...Babaji ki leela wahi jaane...par woh apne bhakton ka saath kabhi nahi chodte...aur aaj unhone meri sun lee..."

"Parr Dadima๐Ÿ˜ญ...Maan ne abhi tak mujhe maaf nahi kiya hai...Woh ab bhi mujhse naaraz hai..."

"Haan naaraz zarroor hai...parr zyaada samay tak nahi reh payenge...Arre hum jaante hain woh aapko aur humare padpote ko kitna pyaar karte hain...Bas humein aisa kuch karna hoga ki Maan apni dil ki baat ko maan le...ki unhone aapko maaf kar diya hai."

"Paar Dadi...Maine unka dil toda hai...aur unka gussa valid hai๐Ÿ˜ญ."

"Of-oh! Geet beta...aap decide kar lijiye...aapko Maan ko manana hai ya unka gussa sehna hai?"

"Dadima...woh toh main bhavuk ho gayi thi...mujhe unhe manana hai...parr woh toh meri taraf dekhte tak nahi...mujhe bas ignore kar dete hain...jaise main exist hi nahi karti..."

"Geet bete๐Ÿ˜•...aap unka pyaar hain๐Ÿ˜ณ...aapki jagah unke dil main hain...toh aapko seedhe unke dil par attack karna chahiye...yeh office-woffice join karne se baat nahi banegi...samjhe aap..."

Geet shakes her head looking confused...๐Ÿ˜•

"OMG...ab yeh bhi humein hi batana hoga...chaliye humare saath..." she takes her to her room, opens her wardrobe and... "pehle toh yeh boring salwar-kameez change kijiye...and inme se joh sari aapko pasand ho usse pehen kar humein dikhayiye."

"Parr Dadima...sari kyun๐Ÿ˜•, hum kahin jaa rahein hai?"

"Haan...ja rahe hain...aapke pati ki shaadi main?"๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

"Daadima?๐Ÿ˜ฒ" she looks at her in shock.

"Of-oh Geet bete...hum mazzak kar rahe the... aap bhi kitni buddhoo hain...arre aap aisi beautiful sari main agar Maan ke saamne jayenge tabhi toh unko heart attack aayega..."

Again Geet looks at her in shock...๐Ÿ˜ฒ

"Arre I mean apke pati ka dil pighalega...aur woh apne aap ko rok hi nahi payenge aapko dekhne se...phir dekhte hain kaise ignore karte hain woh aapko..."

Geet blushes๐Ÿ˜ณ and Dadima blesses her...


...


Geet picks up a beautiful sari and goes to change...

She comes back and Dadima's eyes fill with happy tears...

Dadima Geet ki nazar utarti hain...and hugs her...

"Jayiye...jaake manayiye apne Maan ko."

Geet nods and hugs her...

 

 

Scene 5:

 

Maan's room...

Dadima comes there...with Geet hiding behind the door.

They watch Maan and Guru happily playing with each other๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ...

Maan is lying on the bed and is lifting Guru up and down on his knees...Guru is laughing merrily...

"Pappa aur tez...Wooh!!!๐Ÿ˜ƒ"

Geet looks at them longingly and happy tears trickle down her eyes...๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Dadima holds her hand and squeezes it assuring her that everything will be fine.

Dadima then enters in...

"Arre baap re...Pappa aur bete toh bahut masti kar rahe hain...Dadima bhi join kare aapko?"

"Dadima?" Maan gets up...

"Maan?" she gives him a motherly look, "Beta humne aapko kitne dino baad itna khush dekha hai...aap phir kyun inn khushiyon ko apne se alag karna chahte hain...Purani baton ko bhool jayiye...Geet..."

"Dadima...please main iss baare main kuch baat nahi karna chahta..."

He picks up his son, and kisses him... "I love you beta..."

"I love you too Pappa๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ," and he puts his little hands around him and holds on tight...

Geet heart sighs in pain...๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ

She goes away...

"Maan...arre jab se Guru aaye hain...aap unhe apne se alag hi nahi karte...Humein bhi toh unse milne dijiye..." she then looks at Guru, "Aap Dadima ke saath aayenge?"

"Yes Dadima..."

She takes Guru from Maan and leaves...

Dadima informs Nano that Geet and BSk would stay there for the night...Nano is really happy for them...

 

 

Scene 6:

 

As the night progresses...

Though Maan acts as he doesn't care about Geet, all the while he could only think of her...

He restlessly moves in his chair, gets up, walks to and fro and then walks to the balustrade...

His eyes wander to get one glimpse of her...but where is she???๐Ÿ˜•


Suddenly he hears the tinkling of her anklets...he turns but she was not there...

He was no longer aware of himself...he walks away from his room like he was in some trance...He is pulled towards her, by their true love...which however hard he tried could not be hidden...

 

 

Scene 7:

 

On the terrace...

The door closes behind him...

Geet hums...

"Hmm...mmm๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ"

"Geet!๐Ÿ˜•" he looks around on hearing her sound...but where is she???

The wind blows...and she appears in front of him...in her beautiful, angelic appearance...her sari flying in air...and love in her eyes...


 

Maan stands there speechless for like ages...lost in her deep eyes...๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ

She walks to him๐Ÿ˜ณ...and takes his hand...that's when reality hits him...and he looks away...

She sings...๐Ÿ˜ณ

Bahon main chale aaoโ€”2

 Ho...Humse sanam kya parda

Oh..Humse sanam kya parda


He jerks his hand free๐Ÿ˜ก from hers and turns away...

She hugs her from behind...๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ


Yeh aaj ka nahi milan,

yeh sang hai...umar bhar ka...๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ


Shh...shh...shh๐Ÿ˜ก ( he shushes her)


Geet again comes near him๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ and takes his arms and puts them around her waist๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ


Bahon main chale aao...Oh ho ho

Humse sanam kya parda,

hooo...humse sanam kya parda...


Geet pushes him on to the bed...and sits beside him...๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ

She hugs him๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ...and he's completely under her spell...Involuntarily he caresses her hair, and come close to her...holding her hand...๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณGeet closes her eyes...


 ...

...but suddenly he pushes her aside and gets up๐Ÿ˜ก...

She tries to manao him๐Ÿ˜ณ...but Dusht Danav...uski taraf dekhta hi nahi...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

She holds his hand trying to stop him from leaving...propping herself against her elbow on the bed...๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ


And sings again...

 

Mmm...Oh...Chale hi jaana hai...

Nazar churaake yoon...

Phir thaami thi saajan tumne

Meri kalaaayi kyun...hmmm?๐Ÿ˜ณ


He frees his hand...๐Ÿ˜ก


She gets up...sadly...๐Ÿ˜ญ


Kisi ko apna, bana ke chod de

 Aisa koi...nahi karta...


Shhh...shhh...shhh๐Ÿ˜ก


Maan puts a finger on her lips...

MAHI MAHI!!!

๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ


๐Ÿ˜ณ

She puts her arms around him...and looks into his eyes lovingly...๐Ÿ˜ณ


Bahon main chale aao...oohhh...

Hooo...humse sanam kya parda...

Oh...humse sanam kya parda...

๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ


๐Ÿ˜ณ

She comes closer...and Maan could feel his heart pounding against the rib cage...


 

Their breaths meet...and Geet melts away in his arms...๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ


But suddenly he pushes her...๐Ÿ˜ก

She loses her balance...and falls from the steps...

Maan sees this in time and jumps towards her to rescue her...

"GEET!!๐Ÿ˜ฒ"

He too falls...but manages to hold Geet...

They roll down together...but Maan takes all the hits...wrapping his arms protectively around her...

Finally they come to a halt...

Maan is breathless...the first thing he does is...

Ask Geet...

"Geet tum theekh ho na?๐Ÿ˜ฒ" he takes her face in her hand...they both are still holding on to each other.

She looks at him...with happy tears...and nods...๐Ÿ˜ณ

"Thank God๐Ÿ˜ฒ...I am sorry...main tumhe girana nahi chahta tha...Tumhe pakka chot nahi lagi??๐Ÿ˜ฒ"

"Maan!๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ญ" she takes his name lovingly, tears filling her angel eyes, "Mujhe pata tha...aap apni Geet se bahut pyaar karte hain...Abhi bhi...aur humesha...Aap kyun nahi maan lete...aap mere bina nahi reh sakte?"

Maan gets up and helps her to stand...He then lifts her in his arms and takes her to his room, puts her on the bed...

He silently walks away from the bed...to the switch board..

He switches the lights off...

"Maan?๐Ÿ˜ญ"

He finally speaks...

His back towards her...slightly tilted to her side...

"Geet...main teen saal tak tumhare bina raha...aage bhi rah loonga...par main phir se yeh sab nahi hone doonga...kyunki ek baar toh maine bardasht kar liya...par ek aur baar nahi sah paoonga..."

Geet gets up from the bed...and walks to him, tears gushing from her eyes...๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ

(pic from fb)

 "Maan, aisa mat kariye๐Ÿ˜ญ...mujhe aise mat tadpayiye๐Ÿ˜ญ...Meri galti ki itni badi sazza mat dijiye...Teen saal tak apse door rehna mere liye maut se kam nahi tha...par main majboor thi...main aapki zindagi main problem nahi banna chahti thi...aapko pareshaan nahi dekh sakti thi...Please Maan meri taraf dekhiye...aise mooh mat pheriye...main bardasht nahi kar paoongi..." she pleads to him...๐Ÿ˜ญ


Maan too couldn't control his tears...but he couldn't just make his mind to forgive her...he dismisses his own heart's plea...his Geet's plea...and walks out...leaving a tearful Geet in the room


...

 

~End of Episode 89~

Posted: 11 years ago
mindblowing par kab maan maaf karega geet ko continue soon eagerly waiting for next part
Posted: 11 years ago
 ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ...he left her alone in the room...I am so sad...sahi me aab to Maan ne pakka aapna dusht Danav wala roop le liyia hai. Bechari hamari pyaari Geet ko kitna sata rha hai...hope he forgives her before she gives up...
Amazing update ๐Ÿ˜Š
Posted: 11 years ago
superb Pooja ๐Ÿ‘,waiting for today's update ๐Ÿ˜‰
Posted: 11 years ago
bahoon mai nhi aaya na piya
i knw it
geet ye maan singh khurana hai
isko smbalna itna asaan nhi
try smthn diffrnt yaar
lvd it...
awsmmm

Edited by tiakashyap - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago

 Sorry guys for no update yesterday!!!

Here's yesterday's update...๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Guys...request you all to please vote for Maaneet in the ITA awards...this is our chance to show the channels are prod. houses how much we love Maaneet...So guys spread the news...tell ur friends to pls vote for them...Dunno though if the voting is still going on or not...Please guys do it for Gurti๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Also vote for GC in the best lead(male) section๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Spread the news...relatives, cousins, uncles, aunts sab ko patao and tell them to vote for Gurti๐Ÿ˜ƒ This time we are gonna make it...For Gurti!!!๐Ÿ˜ƒ

๐Ÿ˜ƒGURTI/MAANEET ROCKS!!!๐Ÿ˜ƒ

 

~Episode 90~

 

Scene 1:

 

Morning...

Maan comes in to the room...but what does he see???

Geet is not there...

He remembers how impertinent he was to her last night...and how he broke her heart...

...

He sees the sari she was wearing folded and kept on the bed...

He remembers their conversation at night...and shakes his head in anguish.

...

"Itni subah kahan gayi hogi? Dadima ke room main dekhta hoon?"

 

 

Scene 2:

 

Dadima's room

Dadima is up and so is Guru...they both were happily talking about his school and his friends...

Maan enters...

"Dadima aapne Geet ko kahin dekha?" he asks hesitantly, trying not to look too concerned...

"Oh...ab yaad aa rahi hai Geet ki?? Jab kal raat uss bacchii ka dil dukhaya tab yaad nahi aayi?

"Dadima?"

"Nahi Maan...mat rokiye humein...aaj humein bolne dijiye..." she then turns to Guru, "Bete aap neeche jayiye...aur aapko jo pasand ho woh Nakul ko breakfast main banana ke liye bata dijiye...Hum abhi neeche aate hain...phir hum dono milke breakfast karenge..."

Guru understands why she wanted him to go away...but Geet had taught him well...he knew it would be disrespectful of him to refuse Dadima, and to overhear bade logon ki baatein.

"Guru...ruko...

Maan stops him...

"Haan Pappa..."

"Yahan aayiye..."

He walks to him...Maan picks him up and kisses him...

"Aap Pappa se naraaz toh nahi hai na?"

"No Pappa...You are my Hero...and I love you..."

He jumps down from his lap and runs out happily...but ofcourse he was sad...hed be happy only if both his parents come together, and they too would be a happy family.

Dadima wipes her tears...and looks at Maan indignantly...

"Dekh liya Maan...Kya kar rahein hai aap...Aaap dono apni differences ke beech main uss chote bacche ka bhi dil dukha rahe hain...Kitna samajhdaar hai woh...itni choti umar main bhi unhe sab samajh aata hai...par aap dono abhi bhi bacchon ki tarah jhagad rahe hain...Bete yeh zindagi ek lamba safar hai...aur iss lambe safar main agar koi humsafar nahi toh isse katna mushkil ho jaata hai...Aap apne saath kitni zindagiyon ko dukhi kar rahe hain..."

"Dadima...Main ja raha hoon...Mujhe aaj office jaldi jaana hai."

"Office?? Jayiye office jayiye...and escape from the reality...but how can you escape from your own heart?..." she sighs and walks to him, keeps her hand on his shoulder, "Humein dukh hota hai aap dono ke baare main soch kar...Aapka yeh gussa, yeh nafrat...yeh sirf aapko aur dukh dega...Aapko kya mila uska dil aise tod kar...Kyun nahi maaf kar sakte aap unhe...Unhone aapke har dukh, har dard main saath diya hai...Unhone aapko choda lekin apne swaarth ke liye nahi...balki aap ke liye...Maanti hoon unse galti hui...par uss galti ke liye aapke saath-saath unhone bhi teen saal tak dard saha hai..." she shakes her head sadly, "Kyun nahi maaf kar sakte aap unko??? Aisa kya gunah kar diya unhone ki aap unki shakal se bhi nafrat karte hain? Aapne unka dil tod diya Maan...uss Geet ka...jinka wajood aapse hai...aur jinke bina aap bhi adhoore hain..."

She cries completely broken...๐Ÿ˜ญ

Tears flow from his eyes too...

He walks to her...

"Dadima?"

"Nahi...mat rokiye humein...bolne dijiye...aur kitna sahan kare aapko aisa toota hua dekh... she then walks to Babajis picture, "Shayad Babaji ne humari zindagi main khushiyaan likhi hi nahi hai...Jawani main pati ko kho diya...akele humne unka business sambhala, apne bete ko paala...phir jab beta bada hua...humari zindagi main tum aaye...humne socha khushiyaan phir se humare ghar main aa gayi...Lekin phir sab khatam ho gaya...Aapke Ma aur Pappa alag ho gaye...Hum phir akele ho gaye...bas ek sapna tha...aapki zindagi main khushiyaan bhar dene ka...Aur waisa hua bhi...jis din hum Geet se mile...humein pata chal gaya...ki Babaji ne ek pari bheji hai, humari berang duniya main...Humara sapna poora ho gaya...Geet bahu ban iss ghar main aayi...aapki zindagi main khushiyaan bhar di...humara ghar swarg ban gaya...Humar jholi main ek nanhe se rajkumar ko daal diya...Humein Aditya ke roop main sabse badi khushi di...Phir sab khatam ho gaya...saari khushiyan, saare sapne chin gaye humse..." she turns angrily towards him, "And now when our lost happiness, woh pari jinhone humein khushiyaan di...woh wapis aana chahti hai toh...aapko manzoor nahi??...Maan humari jaan aapme basti hai...aur aapki Geet main...usse le aayiye...usse le aayiye..."

But Maan leaves without responding...

 

Scene 3

Office

 

"Oh Romeo...yeh Geet baby aaj itni jaldi kyun aa gayi??"

"Yes Manish...aa...Aur itni serious bhi lag rahi hai...zarroor kal kuch gadbad hua hai..."

"Manyavar...humein kisi bhayankar vipadha ka abhas ho raha hai?"

At that time Adi comes sliding in and halts in front of them...

"Jaldi bhago...apni jagahon parr...Maan Sir is coming...and he looks really angry..."

"Kya???" the entire office exclaims together...

"Shiv...Shiv...Shiv...Shiv...humne kaha tha na...bhayankar vipadha..."

"Excuse me, Pandey ji...Mere Maan ko Bunker Keeda mat kahiye..." retorts Manish...aa making face at Pandey ji...

"Oh Hello...Manish urf Manish...aa...Maan Sir tumhari private property nahi hai...Tumhe yaad dila doon woh shayad Geet ke hain...Aur kya hai yeh Bunker keeda??"

Adi almost faints...

"Arre tum log apna yeh crazy nomenclature game apne places main jaake khelo๐Ÿ˜•...varna Maan Sir tum logon ke saath mera bhi kaam tamaan kar denge...

They all scram around...and Adi gets his freak nervous laughter attack...

"Hehe...hehe...he.."๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

"ADI!!!" bellows Maan...๐Ÿ˜ก

Adi turns and almost falls on him...๐Ÿ˜ฒ

"S...ss...sir...So..so..sorry Sir...I mean...G...gu...gu...goodmorning Sir..."

"Over??"

"Kya Sir??"

"Adi!" he glares at him...

"Samajh gaya Sir...woh main jaat hoon apni jagah..."

"Ruko Adi...eh..mmm...woh..." he falters, "Geet...mera matlab hai...meri secretary aa chuki hai??"

"Haan Sir...Geet apne cabin main hai."

Maan (Aside)

"Accha...toh office main hai? Mujhe pata tha...ab batata hoon usse...Maan?? Kya kar raha hai...ek toh uska dil dukhaya aura b phir se usse pareshaan karne jar aha hai?? Jaake dekhta hoon kaisi hai...I was very harsh on her, mujhe aisa nahi karna chahiye tha..."

He goes into flashback...night scene...

"MK!!!" calls Sasha...

And her voice breaks the flashback...

Maan closes his eyes and scolds himself... "Maan control...tune jo kiya woh theekh kiya..."

He then turns to Sasha, "Yes Sasha?"

"Thank God MK aap aaj jaldi aa gaye...Abhi phone aaya hai that a government tax official is coming to our office to inspect our accounts..."

"Kya?? Why didn't anyone tell me?"

"MK...it was all quick...just now the call came...It seems someone gave wrong information about our company...It's just a formality...We'll come clean..."

"I know Sasha...but this is ridiculous...Anyways main dekhta hoon yeh sab hua kaise..."

"Yes MK..."

Adi eyes her suspiciously, but she ignores him and struts to her seat...

Geet sees him coming and she too remembers yesterday night's incident, how rudely he behaved with her...

"Aa gaye Dusht Danav๐Ÿ˜ก...Main hi pagal hoon, joh ab tak yahan padi hoon, inki gaaliyan sunne," she tells herself angrily and then cools down, "Geet...sunna toh padega hi...unki naarazgi sahni padegi tujhe...kyunki yeh sab teri wajah se hi hua hai...Ab toote dil ko judne main samay toh lagta hai...hai na Geet."

...

"Ms Geet Handa!" enters Maan opening her cabin's door...

She springs up from her seat, but then composes herself and speaks, "It's not Ms Geet Handa...Mera naam Mrs Geet Maan Singh Khurana hai..."

Maan looks at her her in surprise but also pleased somewhere inside...

There eyes meet and...

๐Ÿ˜ณMAHI MAHI๐Ÿ˜ณ

"Sir...apke liye accha hoga agar aap mujhe waise hi bulaye..."

Maan walks to her...and pulls her close...๐Ÿ˜ก

"Geet Maan Singh Khurana???" he tightens his grip and looks at her angrily...๐Ÿ˜ก


 

Geet tries to push him, but then stops suddenly and the disgust in her eyes turn into a more loving, attractive look...and she whispers softly making Maan uneasy...

"Dekhiye...Sir...aap mujhe aise pakad nahi sakte๐Ÿ˜ณ...Waise mujhe koi problem nahi hai, parr mere joh husband hai...woh bahut possessive hain...unhe bilkul accha nahi lagta ki koi aur mujhe chuye...๐Ÿ˜ณ"

๐Ÿ˜ณMAHI MAHI๐Ÿ˜ณ in air๐Ÿ˜ณ

He leans closer...holding her firmly...she closes her eyes...๐Ÿ˜ณ


Maan suddenly looks up and leaves her...she's still lost in him...eyes closed...

"Geet???" he said sharply breaking her trance...๐Ÿ˜•

She adjusts her duppatta...and even though Maan was still lost in her beauty...looks away from her to stop himself from losing his mind...

"Geet...mere cabin main aao...humare tax returns ki saari files lekar...and humare company ke C A ko bhi bulao..."

He looked at her and she was writing on her writing pad...Tresses of her hair flying on her pretty face๐Ÿ˜ณ...ensnaring his heart...He extended his hand to tug hose curls but he stopped realising he was losing himself in her presence...

"Geet..."

"Haan Sir...kuch aur?"

"Apne baal theekh karo..." he said looking away from her...cuz they were distracting him...๐Ÿ˜•

"Kya??๐Ÿ˜•"
"I meant..." he clenched his mouth in regret, "Jaldi kaam karo..."๐Ÿ˜ก

He then leaves...

"Huh!๐Ÿ˜• Babaji, yeh kya baat hui? Pyaar karte bhi hai...aur maante bhi nahi...aur nakhre toh mujhse bhi zyaada karte hain...Chal Geet...warna tere patidev ka paara aur chad jayega...Parr...Haye!! she blushes,๐Ÿ˜ณ "inka gussa bhi kitna pyaara hai."

Edited by pj2012 - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
LOvd the updateโญ๏ธ, Yeh maan geet ko aur kitnaa hurt krga? Continue soon๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Posted: 11 years ago
hayee schi mere maanu ka gussa b bda pyaara hai..๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
lvd it..
bs ab jldi se maaneet ki sari prlmb ka the end ho jaye..๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
lvd itt.

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