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Posted: 12 years ago

~CHAPTER 16~

Scene 1:

The funeral site

Geet and Maan embrace eachother😭😳😳...like they were separated for ages. Geet thanked her Babaji for protecting her Maan and solving all the problems.

Meanwhile, unnoticed by their eyes, Dev pulls out a gun from his blazer kept nearby. Nandini sees him and is shocked to utter even a word😲...It is only when he points it towards Maaneet that she screams out😲...

"Didi!!!"

Geet turns and trembles😕 at the sight of Dev pointing a gun at them...

"Geet tum samne se hatt jao😡...main abhi bhi tumhe chahta hoon. But Bro, unhe toh marna hi padega😡."

"NO!😲! Geet sirf Maan ki hai...har pal, har janam😭😭😭...tum goli chalana chahte ho naa...toh chalao, par pehle tumhe mujhe marna hoga...😡"

Dev lowers the gun in frustration😡, shakes his head in anger, and looks up again😡,

"Geet, agar tum meri nahi ho sakti toh tum iss Maan ki bhi nahi ho sakti...toh phir tumhaara  marna hi theekh hai...Alright...marro apne Maan ke saath."

She looks at Maan one last time😭...and her baby too😭...composes her heart with one heavy breath. She closes her eyes, tears leaking out through her crescent eyelids.

"BOOM!!😲" echoes the gun shot.

Blood spurts out all over Maan's face...and Geet screams...😲😲😲

"MAAN!!!"😲😭

Maan had pushed her out at the exact moment. But something happened there in that fraction of second...

The person lying soaked in a blood pool was neither Geet nor Maan...Nandini and everyone else ran to the spot... Dev escapes...

To everyone's shock...

It was Brij😲 Geet's cruel brother, who earlier tried to take away her life. Geet is shocked and so is everyone else. Daar ji is the first to speak...

"Brij!!"😲

He looks at Daar ji with folded hands, breathing with great effort, he manages to speak...😭

"Daar ji...mujhe maaf kar dijiye."

"Brij...yeh tumne kya kiya."

"Nahi Daar ji, yeh hi meri sazza hai..."

Brij had come in between the bullet and Maan, and he lay on the ground with the bullet pierced in his heart, not the cruel one, but a reformed heart.

He then looks at Geet, with shame and repentance in his eyes...😭

"Geet...main tera apradhi hoon...Mere jaisa bhai kisi bhi behen ko nahi milna chahiye. Main tumhare maafi ke layak nahi hoo...phir bhi ho sake toh apne iss bhai ko maaf kar de."😭

Geet being the innocent and pure hearted angel; forgives him the very moment, and sits next to her brother's bleeding body, holding his hand.

Maan too sits next to Geet and says,

"Brij, why did you do this? You've already helped us by exposing Dev and his dirty plan...and..."

"Maan...main kitna bhi prayshchit kar loon...joh maine tumhare aur apne behen ke saath kiya hai...uska paap main kabhi nahi mita paoonga...Agar main apni jaan dekar tum dono ki jaan ko bacha leta hoon toh shayad meri aatma ko kuch toh shaanti milegi...😭😭😭" he then turns to Geet and touches her feet...

"Behen mujhe maaf kar de...Apne iss papi bhai ko maaf kar de..."

Geet stops him,

"Vir ji, yeh kya kar rahe ho aap...Aap mujhse bade ho😭...Maine aap ko maaf kar diya...aapko kuch nahi hoga..."

"Nahi Geet...mujhe marr jane de...jis haath se maine teri zindagi sanwarni thi, ussi haath se maine teri zindagi ujadni chahi...apni behen ko maarna chaha...mujhse bada rakshas aur koi nahi...mujhe tere pairon ko chookar prayashchit karne de...😭😭😭"

"Nahi Vir ji..." she turns to Maan, "Maan please aap ambulance bulayiye😭😭😭."

But it was too late...he had lost lots of blood and he knew that it was going to be his last few minutes...

"Mujhe yahin rehne do...apne parivaar ke saath...bahut akela rah chukka hoon...ab iss maut ki ghadi toh mujhe aap sab ko ji bhar ke dekh lene do...😭"

Brij's mother and father take their son's head in their lap and his mother says,

"Tujhe apni bhool samajhne main bahut der ho gayi puttar..." she weeps holding his head to her heart.

Brij looks remorsefully at Geet😭, with his hands folded, pleading her forgiveness.

Geet forgives him and he takes his last breath...

She hugs Maan and cries...

 

Scene 2:

Daar ji walks away from that place...😭

When he reaches a lonely place he broods on the events and on Brij's life...He realises...

"Babaji...yeh sab meri galti hai...Maine Brij ko haivaan banaya...main hoon iss sab ka zimmedaar...Maine humesha beta-beti main bhed-bhav kiya, uske mann main yeh zeher bharta gaya ki ladkiyon ko humari jhooti ke neeche rakhna chahiye...aur apne usoolon ke liye uska istemaal karta gaya...BABAJI...main hoon sabka gunehgaar...na keval Geet ka, Channi ka, aur unn sabhi begunah ladkiyon ka...jinko parampara ke naam par bali chadha diya...par main Brij ka bhi gunehgaar hoon...woh jaisa bana, usse maine banaya...Mujhe sazza dijiye Bababji...Mujhe sazza dijiye..."

The sky is rocked with a lightning and thunder...and Daarji falls dead😭😭😭...his heart broken with shame and regret.

 

 

Scene 3:

 

Everyone's gathered around Brij's body...

Police have grabbed Dev and dragged him there...He had no remorse in his evil eyes😈...

Geet holds Maan's hand and looks at Dev with hate and disgust...😡

The baby cries...

Dev tries to attack the baby in Nandini's hand...

"I'll kill you...like your mother killed my child...😡"

(It was Maneet's child you idiot😡 Bada aaya hai..mera child huh!!)

Geet screams and runs to the baby...Maan hits Dev and pushes him away...😡😡😡

Maan beats the hell out of him...and throws him to the police...😡

"Le jayiye isse...He's a criminal...jo apne hi bhai ke ghar ko barbaad karna chahta tha...le jaie isse yahan se warna main iska khoon kar doonga..." he is boiling with anger...😡

"I wanted to help him...What was I thinking??? My brother...my own brother tried to destroy my family..." Maan was completely broken at the reality of Dev...Geet consoles him and hugs him with their baby in her hand...She cries in his arms...

Later...

Adi explains to everyone how Brij had told Maan everything about Dev😕. They both had planned everything to trap Dev. Adi was the only one who knew about it...

The police now had all the proofs to arrest Dev and charge him with all the crimes he had committed.

The police hand cuffs Dev, and is about to take him to jail...

Daadi Ma enters...

He tries to emotionally blackmail her as usual...But this time Dadi Ma was on the side of truth and justice...She now had only two grandsons...Dev was dead for her...

"Dadi Ma...rokiye inhe...Please mujhe baccha lijiye."

She looks at him with blood shot eyes and slaps his jaw off...

"Lekar jayiye isse mere nazron ke saamne se..."

Police drags Dev away...He was finally going to pay for all his crimes...He was going to rot in jail forever(YES!!!👏👏👏)...or worse he was going to die at the hands of law. Finally justice was done...

 

Scene 4:

The black clouds burst open to pour the drops of relief...to purge the hearts from the shadow of evil.

Manneet holding their bundle of joy, walk towards a new beginning...a happy tomorrow...where their love will bloom and spread its fragrance...and they'll live happily forever and ever after...😳

~THE END~

 😆

Kidding!!!

 

 

Edited by pj2012 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Pooja ,lovely one ,please don't end  it ,try with some new twist dear . Edited by GM098 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb kidding means no end na aur agar end karne ke baare main socha hoga to bhul jana hume itni jalid end nahi chahiye
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update dear plzzz dont end it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update dear plzz dont end it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
finally dev was caught
happy dat atleast brij repented 
and naaahi dont end it :P
waiting for 2moro's epi :)

harneet <3 
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow awesme update asusual..
Finally daarji repented 4 hs mistake and wow brij is the one who helpd maan..lovd the twist..accha hua us devil ke saath par usko tho mar dena chahiye tha par koi gal nahi waisi bhi marne hi wala hai na par kanooni tareke se..he he he
u really scared me with end title bt relieved then..hmm waitng 4 same khurana's moments i mean maaneet and Bsk..
Love u dear..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Superb episodes.  Pl. don't end cont. soon.

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Posted: 12 years ago

🥳HAPPY BIRTHDAY DD🥳

Index

A New Beginning

Maneet Holiday Special

 

~Epi 17~

Scene 1:

Holiday Cottage, Kerala

Their car enters...

The driveway was quite long, but not boring at all...The neatly kempt hedges, the rainbow coloured blossoms, and the rich green was a treat to their eyes😃.

Baby was awake and busy with his baby talk. Maan just couldn't take his eyes off the most beautiful sight on the earth, his Geet, while she was excitedly viewing the beauty of the new place.

"Maan?😃"

No response...

She looks at him, he's simply admiring her beauty😳😳😳...

"Mr Maan Singh Khurana?😡" she frowns...

Maan suddenly comes back to his senses😆😆😆...

"Haan...Geet kya hua?😕"

"Maan...This place is so beautiful. Kerala is really God's Own Country😃."

She hugs him...😳

MAHI! MAHI! 😳

"Thank you Maan...for everything..."

"Geet...Thank you?? Maine kya bola tha tumhe Mrs Khurana...Agar tumne mujhe phir se thank you kaha toh tumhe punishment milega...😳😳😳"

"Maan?😳" she blushes "Aap bhi naa...😳😳😳" then she says ina a sad tone, "Agar Nandini bhi humare saath aati toh uska mann kuch halka ho jaata...😭"

"Geet...tum phir apna Hum Saath Saath Hai shuru mat karo. Nandini wanted to go back to Amritsar and meet Biji...We should trust her and respect her decision. She is a strong girl and I know she'll face everything bravely😃...And now coming back to my Mishty...😳" he approaches her...

"Maan😳" she pushes him, "Gaadi se utrein please😆?"

"Hmmm...😡" he replies giving her his angry DD look, to which she smiles and holds his arm.

They get down the car...the helpers arrive and carry their luggage inside the huge cottage situated in the beautiful valley surrounded by green, flowering hills. There were other cottages also, but were situated some distance away from each other.

Maan takes baby from Geet's hand and holds her with his other hand and they walk towards the cottage...

 

Scene 2:

Evening

Baby is lying on the bed, ready to go out, powdered and all wrapped in his baby suit.😳

Geet is wrapping her saree around her...complaining to baby about Maan in her Hoshiarpur Express style😆...Baby lifting his tiny hands and toes, and chuckling!!!

"Aditya...dekha apne Pappa ko...kya kah kar gaye the aapki Mamma se...Geet bas adha gantha...kuch important clients se video conference karke abhi aa jaoonga...aur ab poora ek gantha beet gaya hai...aur janab ka kuch ata pata nahi...Aane do unhe...dekhna phir main kya karti hoon..." she places the pin in her mouth and takes plaits in her saree...still complaining through closed mouth. Suddenly Maan comes from behind and slides his hands around her slender waist sending shivers all through her body. She recognised him even with her closed eyes...😳

He slowly whispers into her ears... "Kya karogi Geet..."


She blushes...😳

He turns her slowly and raises her chin😳...she looked drop dead gorgeous but what Maan saw laid beneath her outer beauty...he saw her beautiful heart, which loved him like no one else in the whole world...and made him feel like the luckiest person in the world. For him Geet was everything, his life...😳

Geet tries to free herself from his arms, but he pulls her closer...She looks at him in a mild surprise wondering what his intension was.😳

He takes out the pin held between her lips and keeps it on the dresser (she looks into his loving eyes). He then gently tucks her hair behind her ears... (She closes her eyes)


Her anger had vapourised the very instant she sensed his presence, and her heart filled with love for him. She wanted to be in his arms for ever, the time froze and it seemed like the stars⭐️⭐️⭐️ and heaven were mesmerised by the beauty of their true love.😳

"Maan chodiye mujhe" she slowly pleads to him, "Mujhe tayyaar hone dijiye...everyone must be waiting for us."

"Geet...let them wait...Aaj mujhe kahin nahi jaana...main bas aise hi tumahare paas rehna chahta hoon..."😳😳

"Maan bahut ho gaya😕...aap please mujhe tang mat kijiye...dekhiye we'd promised the manager that we'll arrive for the party and aapne promise kiya tha ki hum jayenge...So aap apni yeh masti band kijiye, aur mujhe tayyar hone dijiye..."

She frees herself from his grip and collects the rest of her saree from the floor...but suddenly she is forced to stop as Maan pulls her saree. Geet's heartbeat accelerates...He pulls her closer and holds her hand. She closes her eyes unable to slow down her pounding heart and her panting breath.

He takes the plaited portion of the saree from her hand and tucks it at the right place pulling her closer.

Geet can no longer bear his piercing eyes and hugs him...

MAHI MAHI!!!!


He slides the bangles into her hand, the necklace around her neck and finally adorns her maang with sindoor😳😳😳.

Tears rush into her eyes and she hugs him again...thanking her Babaji for blessing her with Maan...the pain she had suffered seemed like nothing to her before his love. She felt like the happiest person in the world, when near him.

"Geet...ab kaun der kar raha hai?😆😆😆" he asks naughtily.

Geet looks up at him in anger and hits him...😡

"Maan!😡"

Baby chuckles again... (Mamma Pappa mujh par bhi thoda dhyaan do please😆😆😆)

Maan picks him up and holds him close to his heart...Geet too comes near him and rests her head on his shoulder caressing baby's softy cheeks...

Maan pecks on her cheek and tells her...

"I Love You Geet...😳"

"Love you too Maan😳"

And they hug their baby, the greatest gift of their love.

 

Scene 3:

Night time

New Year Party

Maan and Geet are welcomed by the manager...

They take seat...and enjoy the party with everyone else...

And suddenly they come across Yash and Meera.

"Yash-Meera!" exclaims Geet😲.

Yash gives his usual wide happy grin and tells them...

"Guys...she's my wife now..."

"Wow! Meera...you didn't tell me...kab?"

Yash explains...

"Well mere America jaane ke baad, Meera ko ehsaas hua that she loves me...and mujhe pata tha aisa hi hoga" he shrugs...proudly...

Meera nudges him...

"Accha baba...I'll tell the truth...I returned back to India and literally begged to her to marry me..."

"Yash!" she turns to Maan and Geet and clears their confusion, "don't listen to him...actually ours was an arranged marriage...we didn't know about it until we both saw eachother...Our families arranged it and we decided to get married."

"Congratulations both of you..." says Maan shaking Yash's hand.

"Contratulations humein tum dono ko dena chahiye...After all the fights and problems you both got married..." said Yash...

"And look at this cute baby? Wow...aap kaun ho?" asks Meera taking the baby from Geet's hand.

"Yeh humara baby hai...Aditya."

"Tum dono ki love story toh sabse alag hai Geet...you both personify love...and tumhara baby toh sabse lucky hai to have parents like you, jo ek doosre se itna pyaar karte hain." says Meera with some pain in her tone.

Geet senses it and looks at Maan. Maan changes the topic...

"Arre...tum dono toh chuppe rustum nikle...Yash tumne akhir Meera ko mana hi liya..." jokes Maan.

"That's Yash...arre agar Geet tumse itna pyaar nahi karti toh shayad woh bhi apne aap ko rok nahi pati from falling for this handsome hunk..."

"Hunk! Who? Yahan mujhe koi hunk nahi dikh raha?" ridicules Geet.(Geet...silly arre tumhara Maan hai na)

They all laugh and have a great time together...

 

Scene 4:

Party Ball

The manager announces about the ball...and invites all the couples to gather on the dance floor. Yash had gone out to make a call...

"Maan Geet...com'mon go..." appeals Meera.

"Ball...No no..." Geet refuses nervously.

"Arre...Geet...give the baby to me...mujhe bhi toh khelne do Aditya ke saath...and you both go to the dance floor right now..." she demands and takes BSK from her hands.

Maan extends his hand...and Geet looks into his eyes and forgets everything...she gives him her hand and he leads her to the dance floor...

Two angels in love...and everyone and everything stop around them admiring them...

 

Precap: The party continues...

 

 

Edited by pj2012 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow lovely updates...
loved the yash meeera part..hehe

everything going well..brij died..dev in jail..yaaay