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Posted: 12 years ago

~*~EPISODE 6~*~


First the recap of Epi 5😃

(It was Christmas eve...a time of the year when people come together and celebrate the spirit of joy, love and benevolence...a time when happiness fills every heart, every molecule in this wonderful universe.

But for Maan and Geet, the day was dismal and the most traumatic, for they had lost the very reason to be happy...and they were searching like mad for their child.

The streets were crowded with revellers and floats. And it was difficult to drive in such congested streets. While driving through the market road, Maan suddenly stops the car when a woman in rags holding a baby crosses the jeep in haste. Geet sees her and cries, "BABY!"

Maan looks at her and then at the woman...he gets down and hurries to the woman, Geet behind him.

"Rukiye!"

She turns in surprise, with the baby in her hand. Geet soon realises it's not their baby...Maan apologises to her for stopping her like that and tells the woman about their missing baby...Geet sees the smiling baby in the woman's hand and remembers her own child...

She kisses the baby and says, "Bahut pyaara hai apka baby..."

"Madam ji...Aap bilkul pareshaan mat hoyiye...Main bhi ek Ma hoon aur main aapka dard samajh sakiti hoon...Main Bhagwaan se prarthana karoongi ki woh aapke baby ko jaldi se aapko lauta de...Aap dheeraj rakhiye..."

Geet could not control her pain and runs away from there. Maan sighs and controls his tears...He again apologises to the poor woman. He places in her hand all the money he had, and he tells her to take good care of the baby. The woman looks at him leaving and prays to God that such big-hearted people should not be made to suffer...

"May they find their child soon!"

 

 

Scene 2:

Dev is really shocked to see the motionless figure of the child on the table...

"What did you do? What's wrong with the child? Kahin tumne usse..." he gasps in horror.

"Maine kuch nahi kiya...yeh toh khud hi bhookh se ro ro kar so gaya. Mera sar kha gaya ro ro kar...kuch peetha hi nahi..."

Dev examines the baby's pulse and makes sure that he's alive... He wipes the sweat trickling down his temple and turns to Brij.

"Ab humein jald hi kuch karna hoga...hum Baby ko zyaada din Geet se door nahi rakh payenge...yeh abhi bahut chota hai and he needs mother's milk...agar isse kuch ho gaya toh phir main...Geet ko kaise apna banaoonga. Yeh baby hi toh mujhe meri Geet se milayega." (Sicko Dev)

Brij grimaces as if he didn't care about Geet or her baby...

"Marne do isse bhookh se...Mujhe toh bas MAAN aur uss GEET..." he clenches his teeth and fist in anger.

Dev looks at him sternly and says, "Geet? Tumko maine samjhaya tha na ki tum Geet ko kuch nahi karoge...Tumhe sirf Bro ko rasste sai hatana hai...Tum sirf wahi karo jiske liye tumhe maine jail se nikalwaya hai...SAMJHE!!" he yells.

Brij wanted to destroy the entire Khurana family especially Maan and Geet whom he blamed for his doom. But he had made a deal with Dev in return for his freedom...that he'd spare Geet's life...which seemed really doubtful, remembering the past atrocities committed by him on Geet. Anyway, this time he seemed more under control, and he wanted to make reason to Dev...so he cleared himself,

"Main...woh...gusse main...kah gaya...")


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Episode 6 begins here😃


Scene 1:

 Dev is angry at Brij and warns him...😡

"Aaj kaha hai...Phir kabhi aisa sochna bhi mat...Yeh sab main sirf Geet ko pane ke liye hi to kar raha hoon...warna tum jaiso ko to main apne aas paaas bhi nahi..." he looks at Brij in disgust and jerks his head in anger😡.

Brij wanted to retort but he knew he had no choice this time but to heed to him and to accept his humiliation silently😡😃.

"Theek hai...galti ho gayi...Ab aage ka kya plan hai?"😕

"Plan?...ha! Plan toh bahut simple hai...Bro ko phone karo aur yahan bula lo...AKELE!" he stresses on those last syllables, "and then you know what to do with him..." he had a nasty satisfaction in his eyes, "Phir mere aur Geet ke beech main koi nahi aayega," he utters dreamily.

At that moment the baby stirs back to consciousness and starts crying again...

"Yeh baccha? Yeh bahut badi rukawat hai...Ek baar main aur Geet ek ho jaaye phir isse bhi dekh loonga. Abhi toh mujhe iski zaroorat hai kyunki Maan ke jaane ke baad yehi toh mujhe Geet se milwayega."

He picks up the tiny baby and holds him in front of him, the baby writhing in pain screaming for his Mamma😭.

!!!!~~~~!!!!

Scene 2:

 

Geet stops in her steps and suddenly holds her heart feeling her child in pain,

"BABY!" she gasps in horror. Maan sees her and runs to her in time to save her from a speeding bike.

They fall on the side of the road...Maan checks her to see if she was hurt but Geet is lost in shock and agony...

He jerks her and asks, "Geet?? Tum theekh ho na?" and he pulls her into a tight hug of relief.

"Maan...humara baby...Woh ro raha hai...woh takleef main hai...I can feel it...Humara baccha ro raha hai Maan...woh ro raha hai..." she breaks down, and falls at his feet crying. Maan never felt more helpless and so powerless, but he knew it was not the time to be weak but to be strong.

Geet absent-mindedly gets up and hurries out of sight, vaguely walking through the street, her hand extended out as if reaching her baby, her eyes without blinking, and her mother's heart bleeding with her child's suffering.

Maan runs behind her, calling out her name, pleading to her to stop...but she just won't...she just wanted to see her child...that's all.

Her body begins to feel the pressure, and slowly she starts to lose her consciousness...but she won't stop...and her body finally gives up under the physical and emotional stress...

Her body sways unable to stand any longer, she holds her head and faints...Maan catches her at the right moment before hitting the road and picks her up in his arms. He carries her to the jeep and gets in. Just when he starts the jeep, his mobile rings and it is Brij...

"Maan Singh Khurana...Mujhe pata hai tu bahut tadap raha hoga apne bachhe se milne ke liye..."

"Brij...Kahan hai mera baccha...Main tujhe nahi chodoonga..." he screams...

"Sshshhh...tera aise chilanna tere bachhe ke liye theekh nahi hoga...Bichaara jab se aaya hai roye hi jar aha hai...he's not even had one drop of milk..." Maan's heart stops beating, "Aur agar tu usse wapis sahi salamat chahta hai toh...chup chap iss pate pea a jaana..."

"Main aaoonga...par tum Baby ko kuch mat karna"

"Nahi karoonga...par yaad rahe akele aana, bilkul akele..."

"Geet bhi hai mere saath...woh behosh hai...Main usse akele nahi chod sakta..."

"GEET...woh bhi hai...theekh hai...par tum dono ke alawa aur koi bhi hoga toh bhool jao apne bacche ke baare main..."

"Nahi...sirf hum dono hi hai..."

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Scene 3:

 

Dev is angry at Brij for allowing him to bring Geet as well...

"Agar Geet ko pata chal gaya ki main hoon iss sab ke peeche toh?"

"Nahi pata chalega, woh behosh hai...aur uske hosh main aane se pehle hi main uss Maan Singh Khurana ko khatam kar doonga."

Dev is stressed and he looks at his mobile, there were more than ten missed calls...all from Nandini.

"Nandini?" he looks surprisingly.

Brij looks at him in anger, but turns away before saying anything.

"Isse kahin shak toh nahi hua? Oh no...I'll have to call her."

He calls her...

"Dev...aap India main hai?"

"Woh...Nandini ji...hua yoon ki Flight cancel ho gayi aur main jaa nahi paaya."

"Aapne mujhe bataya kyun nahi...Pata hai yahan kitni badi problem ho gayi hai...Baby ko Brij Veerji ne kidnap kar liya hai...aur Maan jijaji aur Didi usse dhoondhne gaye hai...Aap please kuch keejiye...Yahan sab bahut pareshaan hai."

Dev feigns innocence..."Oh God...yeh sab kya ho gaya...aap bilkul chinta mat kijiye...Main abhi Bro ko contact karta hoon..."

He disconnects the call and breathes a sigh of relief.

"Thank God...Nandini ko mujh par koi shak nahi hai..." he turns to Brij and tells him to finish Maan off and then call him. He then calls Maan, but he is not answering the call.

He tries again, this time Maan answers...

"Dev? Tum kahan ho?"

"Bro...main airport main hoon...meri filght cancel ho gayi hai...Nandini ne bataya ki Baby ko Brij ne kidnap kar liya hai...Bro aap kahan hai...main bhi wahi aata hoon..."

"Nahi koi zaroorat nahi hai...tum ghar jao...Dadi ma, Nandini aur baki sab ghar walein bahut pareshaan honge...tum unke paas raho..."

"Aur Geet bro?"

"Geet mere saath hai...main tumhe aur kuch nahi bata sakta...Ab woh Brij mujhse nahi bachega...aur kuch hi der main uss aadmi ka bhi pata chal jayega jisne Brij ko jail se chudaya hai..."

Dev's face goes pale, and he asks nervously, "Aapko pata chal gaya woh kaun hai?"

"Abhi nahi Dev? But his identity will be revealed soon..."

He cuts the call and Dev keeps wondering what Maan knew...

"Damn!! Now what??  I can't stay here...but before that iss Brij ka bhi kuch bandobast karna padega...I don't trust him even a bit."

He then calls someone and tells them to finish off Brij and show it as a suicide...

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

Scene 4:

Maan reaches the deserted wasteland outside the city...and there stood a derelict and isolated building completely wrecked. The darkness was foreboding and the silence even more so. The building had no light and Maan wondered whether it was the right place...

And then he got down and walked towards the crumbled place...the sounds of the rustling leaves drowned only by the brisk wind blowing in the air.

He enters and screws his eyes to look around...With great difficulty he sees a door...but there was no one inside it...He decides to call out Brij's name...

"BRIJ??"

The echo booms around...and then comes the reply...

"Main yahan hoon..."

Maan looks up and sees him, Brij standing on the terrace, holding the baby, who is unconscious.

"Brij...Kya hua mere bacche ko?"

"Woh abhi tak toh theekh hai par agar tumne koi bhi chalaki karne ki koshish ki toh...main isko neeche phenk doonga..."

"Nahi...dekho maine kisi ko bhi nahi bataya ki main yahan aa raha hoon...Geet gadi main hai...aur woh behosh hai...Tumhe jo kuch bhi chahiye main de doonga...par please mere bacche ko chod do..."

"Gidgidao...ha ha ha" he laughs like a crazy man, and then says, "Theekh hai main itna bhi bura nahi hoon ki marne se pehle ek baap ko uske bete se aakhri baar na milaoon...tere bete ko lekar neeche aata hoon..."

They come face to face...Maan desperate to take the baby from that animal's hand.

But he won't give up like that...he throws a gun at Maan and asks him to pick it up...

"Utthaoo gun...ab iss bache ki zindagi tumhare haath main hai...Gun utthaoo aur chalaoo apne pe...aur main tumhare bacche ko sahi salamat Geet tak pahucha doonga..."

Maan sees the cunningness behind Brij's plan to kill him, then also the baby and Geet. He had to think fast and also to spill out the other person's name from him...

"Main aisa nahi karoonga...mujhe tum par bilkul vishwaas nahi hai...Pehle tum Baby ko Geet ke pass chod do...phir  jaisa tum chahoge main waisa hi karoonga..."

Brij agrees thinking he can always overpower the meek and frail Geet.

"Theekh hai..."

They both walk towards the jeep, Brij taking the gun from Maan's hand and pointing it at the baby...He keeps the baby down on the seat and points the gun at Maan, and motions him to walk away with him. Maan looks at his wife and his baby one last time...and then determinedly walks with Brij into the building.

 

On the terrace...

Brij points to him the gun and says,

"Jump!"

Maan looks at him in shock and says, "Brij...tum aisa kyun kar rahe ho...Geet tumhari behen hai aur..."

"Chup bilkul chup..." he walks to him angrily...and this was what Maan needed, he jumps on to him and grabs his gun but he won't let go off the gun. A tussle broke out between them and they were on the verge of the terrace...They move back and forth and fall down the stairs...they tumble down the stairs still struggling to snatch the gun, into the darkness of the buiding.

Dev was watching all this from a distance and was waiting for the right time to enter.

The baby wakes up recognising the presence of his mother. The cry of her child brings Geet back to her senses...and she is overwhelmed with emotions to see her child on the seat...She picks him up and kisses him all over...and holds him close to her heart breaking into tears...She is completely unaware of the situation inside and she's lost in her child...

She sees the scars on his tiny hands and body and her heart weeps...she caresses those scars that makes the baby shiver...she then feeds the baby and realises for the first time that Maan was not there.

She gets down keeping the baby safely on the seat, and looks around with whatever strength was left in her...

"TISHKIYAON...TISHKIYAON!!!!" she hears two bullet shots and then followed by Maan's scream, her heart goes numb. The sound has come from the building, she runs towards it screaming,

"MAAN!!!"

But before that Dev seizes her and stops her...

"Dev...Maan andar hai...maine unki aawaz suni...Aur woh goliyon ki aawaz...Mujhe chodo...mujhe abhi unke paas jaana hai..."

"Geet sambhalo apne apko... tum jeep main jaakar baitho...Main andar jaa kar dekhta hoon..."

"Nahi...Mujhe abhi Maan ke paas jaana hai..." she demands trying to break herself free from Dev's grip...

She manages to free herself and runs inside...and there in a pool of blood was lying her Maan...She stops dead in her path and she falls down next to his lifeless body...She shakes him...

"Maan...Maan" then turns to Dev "Dev call the ambulance...tum mera mooh kya dekh rahe ho...jaldi call the ambulance...MAAN ...MAAN...aankhein kholiye..."

Dev had to prove his innocence to her so he called the ambulance, and also the police so that no one points a finger at him.

Maan is not responding to her sound, his body was cold and Geet kept shaking him...she hugged his body and was unable to breathe...screaming out in pain.

Dev tried to pull her apart from Maan but she wouldn't let go off Maan's body...

"Geet...wake up...Bro humein chod kar jaa chuke hain...he's dead."

She gets up and there was disbelief in her angry eyes, "Kya kahan tumne...KYA KAHA TUMNE???😡" she slaps him again and again... "Maan mujhe chod kar kahin nahi jaa sakte...samjhe...jab tak meri saansein chal rahi hai, tab tak unhe kuch nahi ho sakta...Samjhe tum..." she tells him angrily refusing to believe her Maan is no more...She sits next to his body, caressing his bloody face, wiping the blood of his face and neck, she unbuttons his blood soaked shirt, bends low on his face and kisses him, her tears washing away the blood on his face...and slowly faints on him...Dev realises it's the right time and takes her to the jeep...He comes back into the buiding and sees another pool of blood in which laid Brij...

"Accha hua dono mere raaste se hatt gaye...mujhe zyaada mehnat bhi nahi karni padi..."

He then walks to the bodies to check their wounds...his mobile rings, it's the contract killers...

"Dono hi mar chuke hain...police ke aane se pehle yahan ke saare sabooth mita dena...Zyaada waqt nahi hai humare paas..."

He then leaves the bodies inside and walk to the jeep...He drives out of the wasteland satisfied that he had finished off Maan and that Geet was now going to be his. Finally his wish of having her was going to come true and he was on cloud nine. (RASCAL!!!🤬)

 

The building is set on fire by the goons and the bodies burn away in the fire...Maan was gone and how was Geet going to face this reality...😭😭😭

The police discovers the charred bodies and identifies them as that of Maan and Brij...😕😕😕



Precap: Geet is not ready to accept his Maan is no more...Dadi ma and everyone else can't tolerate to see her in that condition...she's not even aware of her baby. Dev on the othere hand is acting all sad and teary eyed tries to console Geet...to which she slaps him again. Dev controls himself saying, he'll have to bear it if he wants her in his life...

"Bas thode dino ki hi toh baat hai...phir Geet meri hogi..."

The entire office staff gathers in KM...Adi is completely broken...and Dev goes into a hysteria crying his eyes out...screaming,

"Bro aap humein chod ke nahi jaa sakte!!!"

 

 

 😕

 

Edited by pj2012 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi😊😊😊I'm sally and I've always been a silent admirer of ur writings😊😊😊
 
 
Sach kahoon toh..U r awesome⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
 
This was an awesome piece of writing👏👏👏👏👏👏
 
 
I strongly hope that Maan is not dead😭😭😭😭😭
 
 
That Dev bas****,I hate him😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡
 
 
Thank God Brij's dead😆😆😆😆
 
 
Please cont soon and add me 2 ur PM list😊😊😊😊
 
 
love,Sally..
 
Sorry fr over use of emoticons😆😆😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: SallyAmanda

Hi😊😊😊I'm sally and I've always been a silent admirer of ur writings😊😊😊

 Glad...really glad to hear that😃😃😃😃😃
 
Sach kahoon toh..U r awesome⭐️

I'm floating😆😆😆
 
This was an awesome piece of writing👏
 
 
I strongly hope that Maan is not dead😭
 
 
That Dev bas****,I hate him😡
 
 
Thank God Brij's dead😆
 
 
Please cont soon and add me 2 ur PM list😊

Ofcourse😃
 
 
love,Sally..
 
Sorry fr over use of emoticons😆

Puh-leez  I do it all the time...luv ya😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

😃🥳HAPPY B'DAY SALMAN KHAN🥳😃


~⭐️Episode 7⭐️~

 

Khurana Mansion


Dev walks in with Geet and the baby😭...Everyone is happy to see the baby😃...They rush to Geet and baby😃 in excitement.

Daadi notices that Geet is unconscious...

"Dev, Geet ko kya hua?😕"

"Woh Dadi...😭"

"Accha...pehle usse andar le jao...Nandini please take her in.😕"

Geet's mum and aunt also go with them...

She then takes the baby from Dev's hand and kisses him😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳.

"Aditya...aapke bina hum ab ek pal ke liye nahi rah sakte...kitna pareshaan ho gaye hum sab...Bhagwan ki kripa se aap humein wapis mil gaye...😭😳😳😳" she thanks God...Daar ji too comes and shows his love for the baby. Suddenly Dadi realises that Maan was not with them...

"Dev...Maan kahan hai? Woh aapke saath nahi aaye...😕"

"Dadi...Bro...woh..." he fills his bespectacled eyes with croc. tears😭😭😭😭😭.

"Kya hua Dev...Maan theekh toh hai naa...aap itne pareshaan kyun hai...😕 sab theekh hai naa😕😕😕" she asks restlessly.

"Dadi...Bro humein chod kar chale gaye...Uss Brij ne unhe maar diya...he's dead," and he breaks down crying😭😭😭😭😭😭.

"DEAD😲! Nahin...humare Maan humein chod kar nahi jaa sakte...😲😭😭😭"

"Dadi this is the truth, he's no more...😭😭"

Dadi gets a heart attack and is taken to the hospital😲...

 

Scene 2:

 

Maan and Geet's room...


Geet is lying unconscious on the bed😭...

Geet's mum is taking care of the baby and they all are in Nandini's room😕...

"MAAN!😲😳😳😳" she wakes up crying out his name. She looks around desperately to find him😲😕😕, but he's not there.

Hearing her scream everyone comes to her room...😕😕😕

"Maan...woh yahin the😕...maine unhe mehsoos kiya hai😳...Maan aap kahan hai😕...please saamne aa jayiye...mujhe pareshaan mat kijiye😕..."

Geet's mum holds her and jerks her😭😭😭,

"Geet puttar, hosh main aa😭...Maan ab kabhi nahi aayega...😭"

"Ma...yeh aap kya kah rahin hai😕...Woh zaroor aayenge😕😳...Mujhe aur baby ko chod kar woh kahin nahi jayenge😳...Maan??" she continues looking for him😕😕.

Her mum cries and looks at her in grief...😭😭😭

"Babaji...kya aapne meri bacchii  ke kismet main khushiyan likhi hi nahi???😭😭😭 Ab main iss pagli ko kaise samjhaoon iska Maan ab kabhi wapis nahi aayega.😭😭😭😭"

Geet picks up her baby and smiles at him...😳😳😳

"Appke Pappa abhi aate hi honge😳😳😳...woh bas humein tang kar rahe hain😕😕😕...Dekhna jab woh aayenge toh hum dono unse bilkul baat nahi karenge😡..." she puts the baby on her shoulder and shakes him lightly to sleep, singing the lullaby which Maan always sang to him.

"Aa ri aa aaja...nindiyan tu le chal kahin...udann khatole main...eee...door door door...yahan se door..."


~~~~~


Dev is in the hospital with Dadi...Adi comes there looking in complete shock...

"Dev Sir...😲 Maan sir kya..."

"Haan Adi...I couldn't save him...ab Geet aur Baby ka kya hoga..." he wipes his tears, "Jab tak main hoon tab tak unhe kabhi koi pareshaani nahi hogi..."

"Adi looks at him in shock and...says,

"Maine Maan sir se baat ki thi...aur unhone bataya ki unhe Brij aur uss aadmi ka pata chal gaya hai...aur woh jald hi Geet aur baby ko lekar wapis aa jayenge...phir..."

"Kya matlab hai tumhara😡...Main jhooth bol raha hoon...Police ko poori tarah se burnt bodies mil chuke hai...And I've seen Bro. lying dead in a pool of blood, with my own eyes. Geet bhi thi mere saath...😕"

"You saw the body in a pool of blood...then who burnt the whole place down...I mean...Did you see anyone?"

"Nahi...Geet was really not well and I thought I'll bring them home first...And tum mujhse aise questions kyun pooch rahe ho...tum apni aukath main raho samjhe...I've lost my brother and I am in no position to satisfy your curiosity now..."😡😡😡😡

"Arre Sir...aap gussa mat hoyiye...Main toh bass...Mujhe bilkul vishwaas hi nahi ho raha that Maan Sir humein chod kar chale gaye..."

Adi then leaves...and Dev is suspicious of Adi now...

"Why was he asking me those weird questions? And Bro. ke jaane ka toh isse kuch zyaada gham bhi nahi hua hai...Kahin??😲😕😕"

~~~~~

Precap: It's suspense!!!😉

 

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~Episode 8~

 

Scene 1:

Next Morning

Devini's room

Nandini is restless and very upset... 😕😕😕

"Babaji...Ab Geet didi se kya kahoongi?😕😭 Adi abhi body lekar aate hi honge..😭."

She gets out of her room and looks for someone from the family...She sees Geet carrying the baby towards the garden outside. She was smiling and singing to the baby sofly😳😳😳, completely lost in Maan's thoughts😳😳😳.

"Chanda hai tu, mera sooraj hai tu...oo meri aankhon ka taara hai tu...Jeethi hoon main bas tujhe dekh ke...mmm...😳😳😳😳" she pecks on her baby's soft cheek.

 Nandini wipes off her tear😭 and walks to her😕.

"Didi, aapse kuch kehna hai😕."

"Maan aa gaye kya😳," she asks looking excited😃.

"Didi woh...😕" she hesitates, "woh jijaji ki...😭"

"Arre Nandini ji aapne abhi tak tayyariyan nahi ki?😕" enters Adi disrupting her.

Adi sees a completely lost Geet😭, he feels really sad for her condition...

"Geet...Maan Sir told me...he'll be in the terrace garden...tum jaake unse mil kar aao...😃😃"

"Maan...terrace par hai😃...Main abhi jaakar unse milti hoon😳...woh aa gaye...😃" there were happy tears in her eyes and she was overwhelmed with happiness😃😃.

Nandini looks at Adi in disbelief.

Adi gulps and walks Geet to the stairs😕...

After coming back...

"Adi...aapne jhoot kyun bola...?😕"

"Nandini...she's already weak and in a really bad condition...agar Geet ko body ke baare main kuch bataya toh woh apna santoolan kho dege, she'll lose her sanity...and then what will happen to her and the BABY...We'll have to hide it from her😭😭😭😭."

"Okay😭...but aapne Dev ko toh bata diya hai na?? Ghar main sabko main bata doongi...But karma and pooja vidhi ke liye toh Baby ko laana hi padega...after all he's the son,tab kya karenge😕?"

"Nandini, Geet abhi bhi yeh manti hai ki Maan Sir zinda hai...and that is why she's still hanging on...with that one hope...and at any cost we have to hide the truth from her😕😕😕."


Dev enters😡😡😡...

Adi sees the tension in his eyes...but was that for Dadi ma? Maan? Or for the fear of being exposed???

"Dev! Thank God aap aa gaye...😭" Nandini hugs him and cries out on his shoulder.

"Nandini...shaant ho jayiye...😕" he holds her and wipes her tears. He then turns to Adi...

"Adi, sab arrangement ho gaya hai na??" he asks with a doubt in his sound.

"Yes Sir...almost...bas Pandit ji ko bulana hai...Main abhi jaakar unhe le aata hoon...😕😕"

"Adi?😳"

Adi stops, and turns trying to hide his nervousness😕...

"Police ne body verify kiya hai na??"

Adi goes into a stammer attack mode sweating profusely,

"Y...y...yes😕 the initial v...v...v...erification😕...I mean we don't want a post-mortem or anything? He's suffered enough...😭"

Dev looked sceptical for one moment and then composed himself, "Yeah ...yeah...ofcourse...We don't want to see Bro's body all mutilated..."

"Sir...Ab main jaoon...It's getting late...😕"

"Yeah...okay..."

After Adi's departure...Dev goes into a pensive mood...

"No...it can't be...and yeh Adi toh hamesha hi nervous rahta hai...I saw Bro's body with my own eyes...He's dead Dev...he's dead...and Geet..." he suddenly realises that Geet is yet to know about the Antim Samskaar kriya for Maan...and he didn't wanted to miss the golden opportunity to be near her and console her, "Geet? Kahan hai woh...? Apne room main hogi...I'll go and see her...🤢"

"Dev?😕"

He halts halfway on the stairs, and turns...

"Nandini!!😲"

"Aap upar kahan jaa rahe hain...Office se phone hai aapke liye...Woh Jijaji ke clients hai...and they want to talk to you..."

"Okay...Main abhi aata hoon..."

Dev breathes a sigh of relief😲..."Yeh Nandini bhi...iska bhi kuch karna padega...Agar mujhe pata hota ki yeh mujhse aise chipak jaati toh main isse kabhi pyaar ka dhong karta hi nahi..."

For him girls were only beautiful objects...and he never understood the true meaning of love...to win over every girl he met was like a cheap challenge for him...He ruined Geet's life once...and he could never take her out of her mind...not because he was in love or anything...he wanted to claim her as his which he could not do earlier...Geet didn't fall for him in the first place, she had only married him because her family wanted her to...she never loved him...and this time he wanted her to love him...to be his prized possession.😡😡😡😡😡

Dev decides to go and talk to the clients first...

 

Scene 2:

Dev talks to the clients who inform him of a multi-million deal that Maan was supposed to sign with them...Dev's eyes widen at the scope of profit...He calls them home to the funeral ceremony...

"Bro...ne mujhe iss deal ke baare main kuch bataya hi nahi?? But kya farak padta hai...Now everything is mine...Business bhi and Geet bhi..." he gives his evil grin...😈

 

 

Scene 3:

Geet left the sleeping baby in his cradle in their room and rushed towards the terrace...longing to see her Maan😳😳😳.


Terrace Garden

"Maan?😲😳" she called out his name restlessly looking all over the place... "Dekhiye😕...bahut ho gaya...please bahar aa jayiye...warna main ro doongi...😭" she pleaded and warned together.

But Maan doesn't come and for the first time she had fear in her eyes...the tears danced on the brim of her eyelashes...and a tear drop leaks out trickling down her soft cheeks😭 while she longingly looked at the sky...

Before the drop could touch the ground, a hand catches it on it's finger tip...Geet is still unaware of the act...She closes her eyes...and a soft breeze ruffles her hair locks😳, tickling her skin😳...and glides over the bare skin of her neck😳...she feels him😳😳...his touch on her soul😳😳. She shivers under his breath on her skin😳, feeling his kiss on her neck😳, moving down her bare back😳, the small beads dangling from the threads fastening her kurti's back tinkled when he untied it😳😳😳, causing a shiver down her spine 😳😳😳...


Her hands tremble under his hands gentle touch😳😳😳😳...She feels his hands wrapping around her waist gently😳, taking her into a world of pure love😳😳😳...She smiles when he places another kiss on her cheek😳😳, her eyes😳😳😳...she turns, her eyes still closed, holding him in a tight hug, her hands running through his hair😳😳😳😳😳...

"Maan😳😳!" she utters as if she had found her life back...her eyes still closed...


Precap:

Geet is confronted with the truth😲😭😭😭...that Maan's no more...Adi looks on...Dev is the only one speaking, screaming at her to forget Maan...whereas Geet simply looks on at the white cloth covering the body...She screams like mad and runs out of the hall😭😭😭...

Dev is having nightmares about the murder of Maan...he wakes up in sleep, drenched in sweat...Nandini gives him water and asks him what's wrong?

Dadi slaps??????😡😡😡😡

Geet slaps and hugs???😭😭😭

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Posted: 12 years ago

~⭐️CHAPTER 9⭐️~

 

Scene 1:

 

Terrace

Geet holds on to him tight😳😳😳...and wouldn't let go😳😳😳...Her smile then transforming into a trembling moan😭😭 and then into a cry 😭😭breaking all the dams of her heart...Her fear of losing him overtook her completely😭. Tears came bursting, the pent up emotions all erupting like one volcano😭.


"Maan...mujhe yakin tha aap ayenge...Aap apni Geet ko chod kar jaa hi nahi sakte..."


Geet looks up into his loving eyes😳...but his figure slowly fades before her...She gasps in despair😲😭...throwing her hands in air trying to hold him back😲😭...but he vanished into thin air like smoke leaving her crying on the floor😭😭😭...


"Maan mujhe chod kar mat jayiye...MAAN😭!!!"


Nandini, Geet's family, Adi all reach the terrace on hearing her screaming voice...They find her on the floor screaming out Maan's name, begging him to come back...Geet's mum rushes to her and holds her in her arms😭.


"Geet puttar😭...shaant ho jao...Tum kyun nahi samajhti, Maan ab kabhi wapis nahi aayenge😭😭😭...Babaji😭 Meri beacchi ko shakti do ki woh yeh sadma bardasht kar paye..." she too cries.😭


"Maan...main aapka intezaar karoongi...aap aayenge...mujhe pata hai...aap apni Geet ke paas zaroor aayenge...😭"


 

Scene 2:

Dev enters with his mask of concern along with Nandini...Geet is lying on the bed holding Maan's photo to her chest...her eyes longingly fixed at the door as if she was expecting any moment.


Dev wipes off his crocodile tear and sits next to her on the bed😭...


"Geet...neeche sab tumhara aur baby ka intezaar kar rahe hain..." Geet is paying no heed, he wants to hold her in his arms, but refrains since Nandini is with him😕😕. Nandini gestures that she'll take care of the matter. Dev gets up and walks to the door still looking back at Geet.


He leaves...


Nandini makes her get up from the bed and walk to the dresser...Nano is really in dilemma...She removes Geet's bangles first, her jewellery, and helps her into a white sari...Then her shaking hand approaches Geet's maan smeared with sindoor. She begins to wipe it off, when Geet angrily holds her hand...and throws it...😡😡


"Yeh kya kar rahi ho tum?😡 Tumhari himmat kaisi hui😡...Nikal jaao yahan se...Yeh sindoor mere Maan ki nishani hai...Yeh mangalsutra humare pyaar aur vishwaas ka prateek hai...and tum uss vishwaas ko mitane jaa rahi thi...😭😡"


"Didi...aap samajhti kyun nahi Jijaji ab kabhi wapis nahi ayenge..." she holds her mouth and break into tears.😭😭😭


Geet is unwilling to accept the truth...she picks up the baby and walks out to the balcony...


 

Scene 3:


Hall, KM


Mourners begin to pour in the hall...Business moguls, Government officials, Socialities, and everyone who knew The Khuranas assembled there to convey their condolences...Dev greets very one with folded hands and lowered eyes.


Nakul comes and informs him something. He immediately excuses himself and goes to the outhouse...There some people were waiting for him...the clients of Maan with whom he had earlier talked to.


"Mr Khurana...We are extremely sad for your loss. Your brother was a great businessman and above all a great human being..."


He nods and says, "Gentlemen, I am completely unaware of the deal that my brother was discussing with you, and today is not the time to discuss business. You all know that today his last rites will be performed...his body will be put to rest..." he sighs making tearful gestures, "If it's not urgent, can we talk about it later?😭"


"If it wasn't that urgent, we would have never troubled you at such a hard time...The deal is worth millions of dollars...and Mr Maan Singh Khurana has fifty percent share in the whole deal."


Dev's eyes widen with greed🤓 and he turns...


"Millions of dollars😲..." he shakes himself and retains his melancholic temperament, "Well...it's nothing before my Bro but since it was his desire to strike this deal, I'll make sure it happens. So what is the deal all about?"


The deal was about a huge skyscraper in South Africa and how the Khurana Constructions had tied up with a British Construction Company to fulfil the project. It was the first time they were doing an international project that too on such a large scale. Dev was bound to be tempted.


"Wow!😃" he then tried to hide the excitement in his eyes and tone😭😭😭, "I mean this is huge and important...it was his dream and I'll fulfil it at any cost."


They discuss in detail about the basic plans and the cost of expenditure and decide to meet as early as possible...


One of the representatives of the South African Firm informs him that the share in the deal was in the name of Geet Singh Khurana...so she'll also be needed at the meeting. Dev gives an affirmative on that but hesitatingly.


After the clients departure...Dev broods😕😕😕...


"Bro ne itna bada share Geet ke naam par😡...I knew it, he never cared about me😡...company toh pehle se Geet ke naam par hai...I'm only a minor share holder...and now after this deal I'll be nothing in the company..." the worry on his face changes into a cunning grin, "Kya farak padta hai...Geet ke naam par ho ya mere naam par...Geet toh meri hone wali hai...and then whatever is hers is mine..."


"Dev?😕"


He turns and it's Nandini...


"Nakul ne bataya aap yahan par hai...Jaldi chaliye...pooja ka samay ho gaya hai...Main Geet didi ko le aayi hoon..."


"Okay...I'm coming...😭"

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Posted: 12 years ago

~Episode 10~

 

~Scene 1:

Hall, KM

Dev asks, "Nandini, Geet kahan hai? Aap ne toh kaha tha ki woh neeche aa gayi hain.😕"

"Pata nahi, abhi toh yahin thi😕...Main dekh kar aati hoon..."

She leaves while Dev tries to look calm...

His mobile vibrates...

An unknown numbers flashes on its screen...

"Hello! Who's this?"

"Dev saab😈...kabse aapka number try kar raha hoon...aap kafi busy lagte hain...specially apne bhai ki maut ke baad..."

Dev is annoyed by the speaker's tone...😡

"Kaun ho tum😡...kisliye mujhe phone kiya hai???"

"Arre Dev saab...aisi kya jaldi hai...Main aapke fayde ki baat karna chahta hoon...Brij ko toh aap jante the naa...main ussi ka saathi hoon...sab kuch janta hoon...kya hua uss raat ko aur kaun uske peeche tha..."

Dev's heart skips a beat and goes numb...He regains his senses and replies...

"Kya bakwaas kar rahe ho..."😡

"Main bakwaas nahi kar raha...saare saboot hai mere paas...Main aapke ghar main hi hoon...aur apki bhabhi...yani ki Geet...jinke liye aapne yeh saara khel rachaya, apne bhai ko maar dala...woh Geet abhi mere aankhon ke saamne hai...Aap agar meri baat nahi sunna chahte hain toh phir mujhe majbooran saare saboot unko dena padega...aur phir..."

"Nahi...aisa kuch matt karna😕. Kya chahte ho tum? Kahan ho tum?" he looks around the house while talking to the blackmailer.

"Main yahin hoon aur sahi samay par aap ke saamne aa jaoonga...Mera intezaar kijiye..."

Dev is scared to death now😕...he curses himself for having left loopholes that led the blackmailer to him.

"Kahin ussne Geet ko??😕 Nahin nahin...Geet ko dhoondna padega...aur usse kisi bhi halat main neeche aane se rokna hoga."

He calls Nakul and tells him to find Nandini and tell her to not bring Geet down for the safety of her health.

 

Scene 2:

 

Everyone is seated in the hall...a sea of white and melancholy. Pandit ji is performing the rituals and pooja before the shav samskar.  All the family members and gathered people are supposed to pay their final homage before the body is taken away to the funeral pyre. Dev looks really pale and worried, sweating in the AC room.

Pandit ji indicates to Dev, "Pehle parivaar ke log apni shradhanjali denge"

"Pandit ji...Humare parivaar main sabse badi humari Dadi hain aur woh toh hospital main hai..."

"Koi baat nahi...unki patni ko bulayiye..."

"Pandit ji...woh abhi iss halat main nahi hai ki woh yahan pe aa payengi...Main inka bhai hoon aur main hi..."

"DEV!"

He turns and sees Nandini coming down the stairs with Geet in white, her maang still filled with sindoor and the magalsutra still hanging close to her heart😳.

"Dev...Geet didi aa gayi hai..."

Dev adjusted his glasses and speaks nervously, "Thank God...aap...aap...Geet ko le aayi. Accha kiya...Pandit ji abhi kah rahe the ki Geet ko bhi Pooja main baithna padega..."

Geet looks around at the whispering crowd and then Nandini wondering what's going on😕. Dev was angry but couldn't show it before everyone or the Hyde inside him would have been revealed. Also he was relieved in the sense that Geet looked like before...lost and calm...indicating the mystery man hasn't talked to her.

"Chalo...Geet ko kuch pata nahi chala hai abhi tak...Mujhe uss aadmi ka pata lagana hi padega...before he creates problem for me...Yahin kahin hona chahiye" he scans around the hall, but all are familiar faces.


The Pandit ji begins the rituals...

"Mritak ki patni ab aage ayengi aur yeh pushp apne pati ke charano main arpit karengi..."

Geet's mum indicates to Geet to get up...Geet gasps in wonder and looks at her...

"Geet...jaao beta..."

It is then that she notices the picture of Maan behind the burning diya...and her heart shatters into pieces...she sees the shroud and she is hit by the fear of losing her Maan.

"No😲...yeh kya mazzak hai...Yeh kya hai😡😡...Mere Maan ki tasweer pe yeh haar kyun chadaya hai😡...aur aap sabhi log aise shok kyun mana rahe hain...Jayiye aap yahan se...CHALE JAYIYE...😡"

"Geet bro marr chuke hain...Hosh main aao..." yells Dev at her.

She looks at him with fire in her eyes😡 and gives him a tight slap that almost dislocated his jaw, his specs flying away🤣.

Nandini comes and stops her😭😕...trying to convince her that Maan is dead and the body lying before is that of him.

"Yeh..." tears flood her heart😭😭😭 "yeh mere Maan ho hi nahi sakte...main unhe aankhein band kar ke pehchaan loongi😭😳...kyunki Maan toh Geet ke har ek saans main hai...har ek ehsaas main hai...aur jab tak meri saansein chal rahi hai tab tak unhe kuch nahi ho sakta...kyunki hum do jism aur ek jaan hai...Nandini tum chinta mat karo...Mere Maan abhi aate hi honge...😭" she wipes her tears and looks at the door...

 Geet's mum jerks her and slaps her...😭😡

"Geet Hosh main aa...Tera Maan marr chukka hai, woh ab kabhi wapis nahi aayega..."

"NAHI!!!😲😭😭 Jhooth bol rahein hai aap sabhi...kyun kar raho ho mere saath aisa...Main kabhi nahi mannoongi...NAHI!😡" she runs away from there, leaving everyone worried.

 

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Posted: 12 years ago

SMARTLY WRITTEN... AND BEAUTIFULLY WATCHED BY ME... 😉

 
LOVED IT DEARIE... DO CONTINUE SOON... WHO IS THAT MISTRY MAN... I HOPE ADDI JALDI HI MAAN KA PATA LAGA LE...
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update dear
keep doing good work.
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hey...love the post...plz plz add me to your PM list so that I'll be more regular in reading the updates...thanks :)