Awesome update..had al d elements..it was hawt it was naughty n it had d usual virman banter...loved it!!
Btw..i loved ur blabberings in d begining as much as i loved ur update...cud relate 2 it so easily..was laughing while reading n had some sort of a deja-vu..lol..al mum's world wide r jst d same..evn d dialogues they r jst d same..i wonder how!!
Neway..i'm sooo eager for d nxt part..manvi n virat in virat's room...hahahaha..oh well i shud'nt let my mind wander..if possible do pm again..i know it's getting tuf for u having 2 pm so many ppl..dont worry i'l b on d luk out neway..wud'nt want miss d nxt update!!
Wishing u a veryyy Happy New Year!!
Ps: By d way i had 2 tell u..man u write in way that it leaves a vivid impact on me..d other day this song from desi boyz "subah hone na de...tu mera hero.." wals song..came on radio..n i almost ended up asking my cousin (she was wid me in d car) that "hey hv u seen virat, viren n jeevika perform on this no." bt stopped coz how wud she..al that happened in my head..now always relate those dasi boyz songs 2 them, venevr i hear them..LOL..😆
Oopzz sorry for d looong post😛
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