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Dhadkan *Sujal And Kashish*

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Posted: 18 years ago

GarewalS (Lives in Shimla )

Chetan Garewal : A very rich man ...and love to make money

Veena Garewal : A very loving and caring lady...love all her children

Sujal Garewal : A very handsome and caring person with little bit of attitude...

Rishi Garewal : A naughty person who is loved by his brother...and Loved hi brother very much

SinhaS ( Lives in Mumbai)

Parvati Sinha : A caring lady ...love her children a lot

Om Sinha : A rich gentleman and a great friend of Chetan

Kashish Sinha : A beautiful girl ....respect her parents a lot

Charu Sinha : A cute girl ...but have attitude problem ...

OtherS

Angad Raheja : A charming person ..and a best friend of Kashish (Mumbai)

Kripa Agarwal : A pretty girl ..and a gr888 firnd of Sujal (Shimla)

Garewal House

Rishi : Big B ..!! mein jaa raha hooon ..mama ko bata di jiyeh ga k mein aaj raat mein late aaon ga

Sujal : haan theek hai bata doon ga ....lekin sun koi aisi waisi harkat na kerna ..samjhay

Rishi : Ji Big B ab mein chalta hoon Bye

Sujal to Veena

Sujal : mama mein office jaa raha hoon ..aur haan Rishi keh raha tha k aaj woh late aaye gaa raat mein

Veena : aaj phir late aaye ga..!! kya ho ga is larkay ka

Sujal : kuch nahin hoga mama ..!! acha ab mein jaa raha hoon mujhay late ho raha hai ..Bye..!!

Sinha House

Om : Parvati ..mera coat kahan hai mujhay der ho rahi hai

Parvati : haan abhi laayi ...

Parvati : yeh le jiyeh aap ka coat ..acha suniyeh aaj thora jaldi aa jaayiyeh ga..!!

Om : kyun??

Parvati : Woh aaj Charu ki birthday hai ...

Om : acha theek hai mein aa jaaon ga ...ab mein ja raha hoon Bye

Parvati : Bye...!!

Kashish comes down

Kashish : mama ..! papa kaha hain

Parvati : woh tu abhi abhi office k liyeh niklay hain

Kashish : kya nikal gaye

Parvati : haan ..!! kyun koi kaam tha tumhein

Kashish : haan mujhay shopping mall jaana tha ...Charu ka gift lena hai

Parvati : tu driver k saath chali jaao na ..!!

Kashish : mama driver k saath Charu gayi hui hai

Parvati : tu ab tum kya kero gi

Kashish : mein Angad ko phone kerti hoon ..wahi le jaaye ga mujhay

Parvati : theek hai

Kashish Angad ko phone kerti hai

Angad : helloo

Kashish : Hello Angad..!! mein Kashish bol rahi hooon ...asal mein mujhay Charu ka gift khareedna tha..aur Driver aur apa donon jaa chukay hain ..tu kya tum aa sakhtay ho ..ager tum free ho tu

Angad : Kashish Kashish ..!! saans tu le lo ...tum kaisay bol leti ho ...itna

Kashish : tum aa rahe ho ya nahin ?

Angad : okay baba aa raha hoon

Kashish : theek hai jaldi aao

Angad Kashish k ghar aa jaata hai

Angad to Parvati

Angad : Helloo Aunty

Parvati : Helloo beta ..kaisay ho tum

Angad : aunty mein bilkul theek hoon ..woh Kashish kahan hai ??

Parvati : woh tayar ho rahi hai

Angad : matlab ek ghantay mein aaye gi

Peechay se awaz aati hai

Kashish : ji nahin mein ek ghanta nahin lagati tayar honay mein

Angad : acha acha ..ab chalein

Kashish : haan chalo

Angad aur Kashish shopping kernay chalay jaatay hain

Office

Sujal : Diya ..!! meri Mehta group wali files kahan hain

Diya (secetory): Sir woh aap k drawer mein hain

Sujal : acha ..!! tum Suraj ko ander bhejo

Diya : ji sir

Suraj : Sir aap ne mujhay bulaya ..

Sujal : haan ..aaj jitnee bhi meetings hain saari cancel kerdo..mujhay kisi

zaroori kaam se jaana hai

Suraj : ji sir

Suraj leaves the room

Sujal k pass Cg ka phone aa ta hai

Cg : helloo beta

Sujal : Ji dad boliyeh

Cg : beta Mehtas wale project k liyeh tumhein Mumbai jaana hoga

Sujal : Mumbai ..!! aur mein

Cg : haan beta ..ab tumehin hi jaana hoga ..kyunki yahan bauhat kaam hai is liyeh mein nahin jaa sakhta

Sujal : theek hai dad..lekin kya mein apnay saath Kripa ko le jaaa sakhta hoon

Cg : haan haan kyun nahin ..acha suno tum wahan meray ek dost k ghar mein raho gay

Sujal : dost k ghar mein kyun ???? wahahn hotels nahin hain kya??

Cg : hain lekin meraa dost zid ker raha tha ..k tum us k ghar mein raho gay ..is liyeh tum ussi k ghar mein raho gay

Sujal : theek hai dad..!!

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Surya.Ravi thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
iman tum bohat achche likhthi ho..... 👏
plz agli part jaldi likhna kyunki agle part mein shayad sujal ,kashish & angad aur kripa pehli baar milenge..am'i right ??? 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
:::::Very good iman.Keeep it up.Nice story line.Continue soon.Post the next part soon.Waiting.....................   👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome story iman plz continue
Shezaadi thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
kool nice story!!! 👏 👏 👏
continue soon!!



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Posted: 18 years ago
thanx for ur comments yaaron...

Sujal : lekin dad mujhay jaana kab hai
Cg : kal
Sujal : kya???? kal ..
Cg : haan kal ...ab tum Veena ko bata do taa k woh tumhari packing wacking ker lay
Sujal : theek hai dad
Sujal phone rakhta hai ..aur phir forun hi Kripa k ghar mein phone kerta hai
Kripa : helloo
Sujal : helloo Kripa ..mein Sujal bol raha hoon
Kripa : haan Sujal bolo
Sujal : Kripa kal tum mere saath Mumbai chal rahi ho
Kripa : Mumbai???Kall???kya keh rahe ho tum
Sujal : haan dad mujhay Mumbai bhej rahe hain business k silsile mein aur tum bhi meray saath aa rahi ho
Kripa : Sujal mein kaisay
Sujal : meine dad se bhi baat kerli aur aap bas aa rahi hain
Kripa : Lekin
Sujal : lekin wekin kuch nahin ...aap aa rahi hain tu aa rahi hain
yeh keh ker Sujal phone rakh deta hai

Ab dekhtay hain idher kya ho raha hai
Angad aur Kashish shopping mall mein hain
Angad : yeh dress kaisa rahe ga
Kashish : acha hai lekin is ka colour acha nahin hai ...yeh wala acha hai
Angad : naa..!! yeh bhi koi colour hai
Kashish : hum donon ki pasand bilkul alag hai ..ager hum yahi kertay rahe k yeh colour acha hai yeh nahi hai tu shaam ho jaai gi ...aisa kertay hain koi pink colour ka dress le letay hain
Angad : haan theek hai
Kashish aur Angad Cahru k liyeh ek bauhat hi acha pink colour ka dress letay hain
Kher Phir Angad aur Kashish ghar jaaatay hain
Guest room saaf ho raha hota hai
Angad Kashish ko ghar chorta hai aur phir chala jaata hai
Kashish : Hi mama kya ho raha hai?
Parvati : hamaray ghar ek mehman aa rahe hain ..unhi k ruknay ki tayari
Kashish : Mehman..kaisay mehman
Parvati : woh tumharay papa k dost k betay hain
Kashish : lekin woh yahan kyun ruk rahe hain ?
Parvati : kyunki tumharay papa ne kaha hai
Kashish : acha theek hai ...Charu kahan hain
Parvati : us ki kuch dostein aayeen theen unhi k saath gayi hai
Kashish : kuch bata ker gayi hai kab taq aaye gi?
Parvati : Nahin
Kashish : acha jab woh aaye tu usse mere room mein bhej diyeh ga..!!
Parvati : theek hai
Charu ghar wapis aati hai
Charu : mama mama Kashish Di wapis aayeen kya??
Parvati : haan ..woh tumhara intezaar ker rahi hai room mein
Charu bhaagtay huay upper room mein jaati hai
Charu : Di mera gift ????
Kashish : gift ..kaisa gift??
Charu becomes sad
Charu : Di aaj mera birthday hai aur aap ko yaad nahin
Kashish : aisa kabhi ho sakhta hai k mujhay yaad na
Charu : tu phir mera gift?
Kashish : yeh lo
Kashish Charu ko gift de deti hai
Charu : wow..!! bauhat acha hai ..mein pehen ker aaon
Kashish : abhi nahin shaam mein pehan lena..!!!
Charu : theek hai..Di aap ko pata hai ..hamaray haan mehman aanay wale hain
Kashish : haan pata hai ..unhi k liyeh tu guest room saaf ho raha hai
Charu : ji nahin guest room aap k liyeh saaf ho raha hai
Kashish : kya mere liyeh..
Charu : haaan..woh aap k room mein rahein gay ..aur app guest room mein
Kashish : lekin kyun ???
Charu : kyunki aap ka room sab se acha hai ..aur well decorated hai
Kashish : lekin aisay hi koi mera room nahin le sakhta
Charu : papa ka order hai ...

Baaqi baad mein ...
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Posted: 18 years ago
imannnn very nice... 😊 😃
iman tum kashish se kehna apne kamra hi nahi sujal ke liye apna dil bhi taiyaar rakhe... 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
nice story ......gud beginnin...it seems really interestin.....plz cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
👏 👏 👏 ..wow..imaan...ap cha gayien.....story kafi achi hai..agaye likhna... 👏 😃 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
Great part
continue soon 😛