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Wish Upon A Star - ArSh FF (P16, pg 58) (Page 3)

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Posted: 21 December 2011 at 8:35pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by DulceAmor

Hey all, well with Christmas coming up I wanted to write something wintery on KaSh. Embarrassed This idea has been brewing in my mind for a few weeks so I finally sat down to try and write it and here is the first chapter. I will try to update the rest of it before Christmas. Hope you all enjoy it. Embarrassed

It was Christmas time in New York and the city was at its most magical. Shops glittered with multi-coloured fairy lights that lit up the frosty sidewalks and turned the breath of the shoppers bustling up and down them into blue and green clouds. Christmas songs filled the streets, bright and cheerful, and no matter where you went the ring of bells could be heard along with the shouts of 'ho, ho, ho' and 'merry Christmas'. Joy was in the air, almost tangible, as the season of goodwill and peace found its way into the heart of everyone in the city.

            Everyone, that is, except Shilpa Malhotra. For her this season of warmth and giving was a painful reminder of all she had lost in her short life. Instead of feeling loved and cherished, she always felt alone, like she was the only person in the whole world who didn't enjoy the festivities.

            The Christmas parties were the worst. She went because her cousin, Anjali, wouldn't let her stay at home and because her aunt and uncle would have made her feel uncomfortable with their not-so-subtle comments had she stayed behind. They thought she was ungrateful and too self-involved anyway; there was no need to encourage that opinion.

            But it was a torture for her, seeing everyone laughing and dancing when she was dying on the inside. She sat at one of the long tables lined up around the dance floor and stared out at the dark winter night, wishing she could escape out into it. The bright lights of the bar where Anjali's work party was being held were reflected in the window and the more Shilpa looked at them, the more they appeared to her like multi-coloured tear drops. Snow was beginning to drift silently down outside, smattering the window with wet streaks here and there, only adding to the effect.

            Behind her was the sound of glasses clinking and then a new song started, an up-tempo dance number that drew a riotous shout from the partiers. Shilpa sighed and huddled closer to the window, trying to shut the sound of it out.



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Posted: 22 December 2011 at 12:14pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ksgforever10

When are we getting an Update? Cry
Please try to update as soon as you can. I am quite eager for the next Update! Tongue


I hope tomorrow. Sorry hun, have been v busy these last few days. But I'm really honoured you wanna read the next part so much. Hope it will live up to your expectations. Embarrassed
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Posted: 22 December 2011 at 12:17pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by aish_loves_KaSh


Great start

Loved it

Cont. Soon


Thanks for you reading and for your comment. I'm glad that you liked it. Will hopefully be updating tomorrow.
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Posted: 22 December 2011 at 12:18pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by fri42911

awesome concept!!!!!!
please continue soon.


Thanks so much! I'm really pleased that you liked the concept and I will try to update asap. Embarrassed

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Posted: 22 December 2011 at 12:47pm | IP Logged
Hailaaa KaShHeart 

hey that was just mind blowingThumbs Up

The emotions and the pain u depicted is so natural and beautiful.
I loved how you started and the introduction of both the characters is amazing. I am able to connect to the pain and their feelings with ur beautiful words. U just reminded me of Laila...  dont get confused she is another writer who just took my heart away with her writing...hmm am getting diverted hereLOL anyways coming to the update... I can only say its Perfect and am loving it... continue it soon... i mean super soonWink

Hey u are the same one who wrote You Found me... hayee...I just loved ur intense writing there and now, am even more loving itEmbarrassed...U better pm me from next one.Wink
Sahasra




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Posted: 22 December 2011 at 1:03pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by RomanceChocolat

Hailaaa KaShHeart 

hey that was just mind blowingThumbs Up

The emotions and the pain u depicted is so natural and beautiful.
I loved how you started and the introduction of both the characters is amazing. I am able to connect to the pain and their feelings with ur beautiful words. U just reminded me of Laila...  dont get confused she is another writer who just took my heart away with her writing...hmm am getting diverted hereLOL anyways coming to the update... I can only say its Perfect and am loving it... continue it soon... i mean super soonWink

Hey u are the same one who wrote You Found me... hayee...I just loved ur intense writing there and now, am even more loving itEmbarrassed...U better pm me from next one.Wink
Sahasra




Hey Sahasra, thank you so much for your comment! I really don't know what to say...I am totally thrilled that you thought it was good. It's always a hope that my readers can connect with the characters, so hearing that you could and you could feel their pain makes me feel like I must have done something right. But wowww, saying I remind you of Laila is just amazing. I love her writing so much, so I'm humbled that you think I'm of her standard. Embarrassed  And yes, I did write 'You Found Me'. I'm really glad you liked that one too and I will surely PM you when I next update. Hopefully it will be sometime tomorrow. Embarrassed

Thanks again!

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Posted: 27 December 2011 at 6:15am | IP Logged
it's damn beautiful!!!
cont soon...and plz add me to ur pm list :)

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Posted: 27 December 2011 at 7:36am | IP Logged
Vry nyc waitng to read mre. Pm me

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