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Wish Upon A Star - ArSh FF (P16, pg 58) (Page 26)

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Posted: 04 February 2012 at 10:49pm | IP Logged
you described evrythng so well
loved it 

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DulceAmor

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Posted: 04 February 2012 at 10:56pm | IP Logged
Awesome update!!
I m loving the way you are describing thier
change in emotions.
Especially, how armaan is trying hard not to
think about the strange feelings shilpa is
evoking inside him.He himself dont knows that he has already fallen deeply for her.But
I guess cuz of his past experiences he would
take some time to realise this.
But the highlight of this part was that cute and sweet fight...forgetting the past, it was just the two of them...laughing and enjoying...how I wished this moment would have turned into something more hotter...LOL.
OMG...why did you stopped at such a moment...who was screaming and why?? :0

Please try to continue soon.
Thnx for the pm :)

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Posted: 05 February 2012 at 3:33am | IP Logged
great update
Thumbs Up

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Posted: 05 February 2012 at 3:39am | IP Logged
may be you know this already, but let me tell you.
you are an amazing writer, i'm in love with your writing style, the way you describe everything i feel like being there & witness the whole scene.
now plz dnt make us wait long, update super soon.
i'm regreting how come i didn't came across this ff before.
but now really waiting for next update.

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Posted: 05 February 2012 at 5:47am | IP Logged
U never fail to enthral me with the meticulousness with u describe each and every thng in ur ff...thats what makes it so beautiful...kudos...great pace..this is the dynamism and push i was looking for

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Posted: 05 February 2012 at 7:16am | IP Logged
Awesome part! The fight was really cute! The part was sweet:) can't wait for more! Do cont.soon

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Posted: 05 February 2012 at 7:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by fri42911

beautiful update!!!!!!!
loved the ARSH flour fight scene!!!!!!!
 


Thanks hun! The flour scene was in my head for days, I had such a clear image of them fooling around, so I couldn't resist putting it in. Glad you liked it! Embarrassed



Originally posted by twilightmystery

k m still in a daze
u dscribed everythin so perfectly
it was just beautiful
continue soon


Oh wow, thanks for saying so. Embarrassed  I guess it helped that when I was writing I had such a vivid picture of it all in my mind. I'm really happy you felt I was able to transfer that onto the page. I'll try and get the next part up within one week.
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Posted: 05 February 2012 at 7:38am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sammy4u

you described evrythng so well
loved it 


Hey Sammy, thanks a lot, it's great that you thought I described it all well and I'm so delighted you enjoyed it so much. Thanks for taking the time to read. Hope you'll like what I have planned next. Embarrassed

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