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Wish Upon A Star - ArSh FF (P16, pg 58) (Page 23)

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Posted: 27 January 2012 at 2:21pm | IP Logged
Nice update
ARSH r so good .
Arman is such a sweetheart
Hate shilpa's masi
Thanks 4 pm .
Update soon.

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Posted: 27 January 2012 at 8:52pm | IP Logged
awesome concept dear...
plz update the next part soon...

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Posted: 27 January 2012 at 9:16pm | IP Logged
amazing part!!!!!!!!!
loved it!!!!!
i did not like shilpa's maasi at all.
she is a very bad maasi, who treats her own sister's daughter badly and cruelly.
looking forward to read next part.

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Posted: 27 January 2012 at 11:41pm | IP Logged
lovely update
thanx for the pm

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Posted: 28 January 2012 at 12:22am | IP Logged
great update
loved it
shilpa's massi threw her out
someone tell me i should be sad or happy (that their no more of that evil massi nowLOL


Edited by sammy4u - 28 January 2012 at 12:32am

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Posted: 28 January 2012 at 3:12am | IP Logged
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edit- i think the phase where the leads start developing feelings for each other is the most crucial part of any love story and u r writing it beautifully anu Embarrassed taking care of all minute details, every feeling thats going thru their minds... i cld nt believe armaan was actually acting like that when he came to meet shilpa LOL as if  he's a teenager LOL loved that and moreover i love it when he feels all protective for her Embarrassed
shilpa's massi threw her out... Angry what else cld be expected frm her... wil she move in to armaan's place or sthng nw?  can't wait to knw that... cont soon Smile


Edited by m4manju - 28 January 2012 at 9:02am

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Posted: 28 January 2012 at 7:02am | IP Logged
OMG ! I love every little piece of that update ! That was mindblowing...
I definitely love Sapna, she's such a sweet character, just like she was in DMG ! And I think I might really get to like that Dr Hughes who seems to really care about Shilpa too :)
And of course, the fabulous moments with Arsh...Day Dreaming I mean they both are too too cute, acting shy and all... How sweet of Armaan to come and visit her, she really didn't let him indifferent, I love it ! :) But poor soul is still in love with Riddhima... :( Well, I guess Shilpa will make him soon forget about her Big smile
Oh, and here her Massi throw her out ! So sad !!! How mean is she !! God Cry
But then I guess it's for the best :D Will certainly bring her and Armaan closer... Can't wait for that !!!!

Amazing dear ! Please continue soon :)

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Posted: 28 January 2012 at 7:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kashmayurfan

Awesome part!hate shilpa's massi!can't believe it she threw her out! Well atleast i can't wait to see arsh living together! It will be soo fun! Do cont.soon


Thanks hun! I think of her massi as like the wicked witch in a fairy story lolz. I wanted to bring this twist to bring ArSh closer and I really can't wait to find out how you all react to what I have planned for the next update. Hope you'll like it. Embarrassed


Originally posted by moonlight2630

Nice update
ARSH r so good .
Arman is such a sweetheart
Hate shilpa's masi
Thanks 4 pm .
Update soon.


Glad you liked it! It's good to know you're enjoying ArSh's interaction. I promise to keep building on it and showing more of Armaan's caring side for Shilpa. Shilpa's massi is a true villian, but never fear, Shona will have the last laugh. It'll be good for her to get away from that woman. Thanks for reading and I'll try to get the next part up asap. Embarrassed

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