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Wish Upon A Star - ArSh FF (P16, pg 58) (Page 20)

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Posted: 19 January 2012 at 10:46am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -pooluvsKaSh-

awesome update ..loved it ..beautifully written  &  u bought out shilpa's situation &  feeling well ..the interaction btw ArSh was lovely..continue soon cant wait to read next part


Thanks so much for your comment! Your words have really made my day! I'm delighted that you think I've managed to portray Shilpa's suffering well. It's always tricky trying to convey the feelings of the characters without going OTT (or at least, I find it to be that way sometimes). I really hoped that you all would be able to get a sense of how much she's suffocating in her present situation and how Armaan comes into her life and breathes new life into her. It's great to know that you think I have succeeded and thank you for wanting to read on. Embarrassed  I will update as soon as I can. Really excited to know how everyone will react to what's coming up.

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Posted: 19 January 2012 at 11:27am | IP Logged
beautiful update anu Embarrassedarmaan is her savior... good that he gave a nice piece of mind to her aunt ...she deserves more Angryand loved the scene towards the end... when dr Hughes had that little interaction with arsh LOL good one...

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Posted: 19 January 2012 at 1:53pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by m4manju

beautiful update anu Embarrassedarmaan is her savior... good that he gave a nice piece of mind to her aunt ...she deserves more Angryand loved the scene towards the end... when dr Hughes had that little interaction with arsh LOL good one...


Thanks hun! Embarrassed I just had to have Armaan put Shilpa's aunt in her place. Firstly, cause it was so much fun to write lol, and secondly because it was a way to make Shilpa sit up and really take notice of him. No one has ever taken her side before and that was why she was so amazed that he did that. Like she said to him, he doesn't really know her and yet he defended her. It made her warm to him. Aww, I'm glad you enjoyed the end bit with Dr Hughes. I just thought it would be kinda fun to end it on a happier note after so much sadness for the last few updates. Big smile



Edited by DulceAmor - 19 January 2012 at 1:52pm
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Posted: 19 January 2012 at 3:07pm | IP Logged
Beautiful update...liked the way Armaan defended Shilpa...pl continue soon !!!

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Posted: 20 January 2012 at 7:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by blessed4

Beautiful update...liked the way Armaan defended Shilpa...pl continue soon !!!


Thanks for reading! I'm pleased you liked seeing Armaan in hero mode, standing up for Shona. He is gonna be there for her no matter what from now on, so hope you'll enjoy seeing their relationship develop. Embarrassed  Next part should be up soon.
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Posted: 20 January 2012 at 3:55pm | IP Logged
atleast shilpa got one person in her life, who can defend her.
can fight and do anything to protect her from any trouble.
please continue soon.

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Posted: 20 January 2012 at 7:31pm | IP Logged
Nice part
loved how armaan stood up nd their moment:p

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Posted: 21 January 2012 at 7:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by fri42911

atleast shilpa got one person in her life, who can defend her.
can fight and do anything to protect her from any trouble.
please continue soon.


I love the way you summed that up, and you are spot on - Armaan will do anything for her. It's an instinct he has now and even though it makes no sense to him right now he's gonna follow it anyway because somehow he knows it's the right thing to do. Embarrassed 
I'll try to update within a couple days.

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