sorry for the late comment..
simply amazing n rocking part..
loved it alot..
specially the way they are comfortable with each other...
its awsum..
n the snow game was lovely...finally both are letting themselves free..
the gift was fab...
n wat happened after that was kind of unpredictable..
cont. soon..
thnx for the pm...
Originally posted by: anumeha_rajatsorry for the late comment..
simply amazing n rocking part..
loved it alot..
specially the way they are comfortable with each other...
its awsum..
n the snow game was lovely...finally both are letting themselves free..
the gift was fab...
n wat happened after that was kind of unpredictable..
cont. soon..
thnx for the pm...
Originally posted by: blessed4loved the part ..it was amazing.hope Armaan doesn't regret the kiss and please tell us about Armaan's past
Originally posted by: roshni_AI am sorry i missed on two parts for replys...
.and my 1st point would be the Kiss...u have sudden knack girl ...just expect u to do unexpected but in the most convenient way...just before the last part when the about to kiss scene happened i was like no ..no ..no...it shouldn't be now...i didn't wanted any of them to regret it later...u know..i wanted it to be a wholesome experience but in the next part when u penned down the kiss scene it seems it is how it should be...its so pure and whole at that moments... and moments are what that made a relationship ... Shilpa's reaction is quite predictable but about Armaan , i din't know...he is so unpredictable a character here...but somewhere i felt though he won't be able to withheld the attraction but his denial about his feelings would going to make it more complected and Shilpa has to bear it...I love the thought behind armaan's present...at first i though it contains their picture.. and the snowball throwing was great...and btw what is the ritual associated with that plant Sapna tried to give shilpa? i am sorry but i don't know...Sapna seems a very sweet character ...Muskan's character is also getting prominent with each part...she is so concerned about her brother...i think she understood whats going on in the room but tried to overlook and at the same time stooped it from going anywhere that she thinks would not bring a nice consequence...I will be waiting to know about Armaan' reaction coz its only natural that they now can not shrug off the awkwardness but silly things...and armaan who din't believe he can move on would definitely upto something...will be waiting for the next part...
Originally posted by: DulceAmor
Wowww, 2hrs, now that is seriously impressive! I hated reading at school...oh man, the slowness of some of them! I used to be like three pages ahead and then the teacher would ask me to read and I wouldn't know where the last person had stopped cause I was so far ahead. 😆 But, honestly, it's just amazing that my little ff made you wanna keep going on. I'm glad I managed to keep the suspense and interest going with it. I am just about to post the next update. It's 10 pages at font size 10 on MS Word, but I think it might be shorter than the last part. What I'll do is, to make it up to you all for my 2 week hiatus, I'll make the next update after I come back super long. 😛 Can't wait to know your thoughts on the bit that's about to come up and dw, I'll try to update asap after my hiatus. You can throw chappals at me if I don't. 😆
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