Wish Upon A Star - ArSh FF (P16, pg 58) - Page 19

Thanks hun! I think of her massi as like the wicked witch in a fairy story lolz. I wanted to bring this twist to bring ArSh closer and I really can't wait to find out how you all react to what I have planned for the next update. Hope you'll like it. 😳




Glad you liked it! It's good to know you're enjoying ArSh's interaction. I promise to keep building on it and showing more of Armaan's caring side for Shilpa. Shilpa's massi is a true villian, but never fear, Shona will have the last laugh. It'll be good for her to get away from that woman. Thanks for reading and I'll try to get the next part up asap. 😳

Hey, thanks for reading and commenting. I'm glad you like the concept. It brewed in my mind for quite some time and I felt compelled to write it down, though I wasn't sure how well ppl would receive it. So thanks for liking it, that means a lot, and I will definitely get the next part updated within a week. 😳




Awww, thanks hun, it's great to know you enjoyed it this much! I hoped that you all would like the ArSh moments and that the twist would fire you all up. I've had that planned since the last few parts and I couldn't wait to get to it. 😆  Her aunt is indeed a horrible woman. I made her that way on purpose to give weight to Shilpa's back story and also because I wanted to have an out-and-out villian lolz. She has her reasons for being so mean, but in general she is just one of those really bitter and hard-hearted people. Shilpa will find life much easier without her bearing down on her all the time. I hope you'll enjoy what's coming up. It should hopefully be a lot of fun. 😳

You're most welcome dear. Thank you for taking the time to read my ff and to leave this comment. I'm really pleased that you liked this part and hope the rest of the ff will continue to entertain you. 😳




Thanks Sammy!!! Hehe, well I guess that depends on how you look at it. It's sad for Shona cause her realtives treated her so appallingly, but it's good cause, like you said, the wicked massi is gone. 😆  And Shona will be okay, in fact, she's gonna find that life without her aunt is much happier. Can't wait to know your thoughts on what's coming up.

Haww, Laila, you're making me blush bright red! 😳😆  I'm so thrilled you liked it this much. When I was writing it I was thinking, I hope these ArSh scenes make up for the fact that she's still stuck in hospital. 😆  I'm glad you like Sapna. I had such fun writing her conversation with Shilpa. I wanted Shona to have one really good, sweet friend, after all, she needs someone when she has such a horrible family. And it also allowed me to pave the way for the shyness between ArSh. I'm delighted you thought they were cute. I just thought, how would they react seeing each other again? I mean, Armaan is smooth and cool and charming, but I wanted him to be different around Shilpa, I wanted her to bring out another side of him. Also, he's acting out of instinct by coming to visit her. He doesn't really get why he feels the need to go see her, but it's not something he can fight. And that's never happened to him before, and thus he's out of his depth and doesn't quite know what he's doing. As for Riddhima...well, till now he thinks he's still in love with her. I can't say he doesn't love her anymore, because there are still feelings there, but his confusion and anger are all part and parcel of those feelings being usurped by these new ones. He's just not ready to acknowledge that yet.
I know, right, her aunt wouldn't win any kindess awards any time soon. I have had that twist planned for a while now. I'm really hoping you'll like where it leads to. There's going to be a lot of ArSh adventure, and yes, she will be getting out the hospital soon. 😆  I'll try and get the next part up through the week.

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Hawww, that is so sweet of you! I'm flattered you think I'm doing a good job with their love story. 😳  Haha, I couldn't resist writing that scene where Armaan came to see her. I thought it would be quite sweet and fun and also I wanted to show how she is affecting him. She's the first girl to ever make him feel uncertain of himself. There's something about her that takes his breath away and he can't be charming with her. She brings out the more natural side of him.
All will be revealed about what's gonna happen to Shilpa in the next part. I'm really hoping you'll all enjoy it. Her massi's actions will definitely bring them closer together. 😳  Will aim to get the next part up soon.

Hey, thanks for reading my ff! It's great to know you're liking it and want to read on. Thanks so much. I'll send you a PM as soon as the next part is up. 😳

awsum part..

simply superb..

loved it..

adored ARSH moments...they were relly amazing...

n the way they were reacting..

not knowing wats rite to say..

n armi all lost in her..n so do she..

her maasi threw her out...though sad...but im really happy..

now she is gonna live with armi...

continue soon..

thnx for the pm...

Awww, thank you hun!!! I'm thrilled you liked it so much and enjoyed their shyness with each other.  I had so much fun writing that scene so it's great to know you all have enjoyed it too. I love the fact you all are wanting her to live with Armaan. Well, I can't say if that will happen, but her aunt throwing her out is actually a good thing for Shilpa. And, yes, it will for sure bring her closer to Armaan. 😳