Wish Upon A Star - ArSh FF (P16, pg 58) - Page 9

Awesome part! Aww armaan cried for her!that's really sweet! Hope shilpa gets well soon:) do cont.soon

aww!! without realising these two souls have come close

such a lovely update
shilpa's relatives r so mean...hope they dont create more problems for her...
loved the way u described armaan's concern n emotions...unknowingly he has come so close to her...
waiting for more arsh moments.
thnx for d pm...cont soon

hey!!!!!!
amazing update!!!loved it!
oh i hope shilpa gets alr8 real soon!ammy is such a sweetheart :D
oh ho!who is the last entry?!mm...update soon as i am very excited to read the next part :)
and thnx 4 d pm!

Originally posted by: kashmayurfan

Awesome part! Aww armaan cried for her!that's really sweet! Hope shilpa gets well soon:) do cont.soon

Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it and found Armaan crying sweet. 😳  That was a bit of a spur of the moment decision, I was just hoping it would add more depth to his concern for her and show how he feels a connection to her.

Originally posted by: twilightmystery

aww!! without realising these two souls have come close

i think the voice in the last is of shilpa's uncle?

i wonder wat they'll do with them

i hope armaan saves her afterall he is her guardian angel

wonderful part

loved it

continue soon

I love your first line - you have summed up everything I was trying to show so beautifully. 😳  Ahh, well, I can't say if it's her uncle or not just yet, but we will indeed meet her relatives in the next update and Armaan will see for himself their attitude towards Shilpa. Thanks so much for your lovely comment. I hope you'll enjoy the next part just as much. 😳

Originally posted by: luv_kash

such a lovely update
shilpa's relatives r so mean...hope they dont create more problems for her...
loved the way u described armaan's concern n emotions...unknowingly he has come so close to her...
waiting for more arsh moments.
thnx for d pm...cont soon

You're most welcome. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. I am thrilled you liked it and felt I described Armaan's emotions well. I wanted to show how affected by Shilpa's accident he was, even if he can't understand why he is feeling this way. You'll get to see her relatives in the next update, and I promise to have an ArSh moment soon. I couldn't have one here because it was getting too long, but Shona has regained consciousness now and soon I will show her reaction to all that has happened.

Originally posted by: Sam_KaShian

hey!!!!!!
amazing update!!!loved it!
oh i hope shilpa gets alr8 real soon!ammy is such a sweetheart :D
oh ho!who is the last entry?!mm...update soon as i am very excited to read the next part :)
and thnx 4 d pm!

Thank you so much!!! It's so good to know you enjoyed this part! Ahh, I was hoping you all would find Armaan's reaction sweet. I always imagine him as the most loving of guys and I wanted to show how big a heart he has here. 😳  Ahh, the person who spoke at the end will be made clear in the next update, and I do hope you will continue to enjoy everything that is to come.

hi dear...

just came across ur ff...

n im simply loving it..

superb n amazing..

n u wrote it beautifully..

continue soon,...

n do add me to ur pm list...

Originally posted by: anumeha_rajat

hi dear...

just came across ur ff...

n im simply loving it..

superb n amazing..

n u wrote it beautifully..

continue soon,...

n do add me to ur pm list...

Hey thank you so much for taking the time to read my ff and for leaving this comment. It's wonderful to hear that you have liked the ff so far. I'm humbled you think my writing was beautiful - that is such a lovely compliment! 😳  I will surely add you to the PM list.