Wish Upon A Star - ArSh FF (P16, pg 58) - Page 4

This content was originally posted by: twilightmystery

wow tht was magical

lovely

very well written

continue soon

n do pm me

Woww, what a compliment! I'm flattered you think so. Thank you so much! 😳

Awesome part! You describe everything so well:) luved it! Do cont.soon

haww u r bad anu, u stopped at such moment 😡 the part was BEAUTIFUL... loved how u have portrayed the pain not just for armaan or shilpa but how both of them feeling... awesome...
and then the car accident scene... i was like why is she shouting at him 😲 then i knw she was so lost in her thoughts to notice it... but yet she's nt ready to give up her attitude lol ... and she's drunk? omg i wanna knw what is going to happen nw... its killing me pls update soon anu and gr8 job 😳 and yeah pls make this a longer ff k? dnt end in 4-5 parts 😛

This content was originally posted by: kashmayurfan

Awesome part! You describe everything so well:) luved it! Do cont.soon

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it! 😳

This content was originally posted by: m4manju

haww u r bad anu, u stopped at such moment 😡 the part was BEAUTIFUL... loved how u have portrayed the pain not just for armaan or shilpa but how both of them feeling... awesome...
and then the car accident scene... i was like why is she shouting at him 😲 then i knw she was so lost in her thoughts to notice it... but yet she's nt ready to give up her attitude lol ... and she's drunk? omg i wanna knw what is going to happen nw... its killing me pls update soon anu and gr8 job 😳 and yeah pls make this a longer ff k? dnt end in 4-5 parts 😛

Hehe, of course yaar, I needed to leave you all in suspense na. 😉😆  But seriously, I'm really pleased that you liked this part. She had no idea what was happening at first lolz...she thought he was some random guy trying to take advantage of her, and he in turn thought she was some crazy girl. 😆  Really she's taking out all her inner frustration on him just because he's there and she needed someone to vent on. I'm gonna explain more in the next part, so watch this space. 😉  I will try to update asap...I shouldn't be as busy this week. And I think it will be about 6 parts long or s'thing. It depends really...I have the rough outline in my head, but sometimes it grows as I write, so it could end up longer. 😆

U left in absolute awe at the depth of descritions of the emotions...it literally swept thru me...i could feel and every bit of the emotions...loved it...cont soon dont be late plzzz

awesome update!!!!

how do u do this??

awesomeee part!!!!
loved it!!!!!!!!!!
thnx a lot 4 d pm :)
cont real sooN!
can't wait 4 d nxt part :D

beautifull update...please add me to ur pm list