Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain


Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain
Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain

ViRmAn os : beautiful

vishruta Senior Member

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Posted: 18 December 2011 at 10:58pm | IP Logged

hiii guys!!!!!!

here's my os on virman\\

do enjoy...

"When was the last time you went jogging, manvi?" Her aunt called out to her from across the dining table, setting her critical eye over her niece's form. "You must've gained at least ten pounds since the last time I saw you and that was only a few months ago." manvi squirmed in her seat, her confidence crumbling under the scrutiny of her family members. virat, resting just to her left, scowled slightly at the attack made on his wife of three years, who was now washed a vibrant shade of red.

"Now, now," chacha tried to settle from the head of the table. "This is hardly diwali dinner talk. Leave the girl alone" manvi shot her chachu a grateful look, turning back to her plate of panner and other helpings. Watching her closely, virat couldn't help but notice the way she poked and prodded at her food, deepening the frown on his face.

"But she's right, manvi," Her beeji, added. "You're starting to get on the pudgy side again, dear, and we can't have that, now can we?"

"No, beeji." manvi responded automatically, her eyes still pointed downwards.

Her beeji didn't let up, turning towards virat."Why, I remember when she was a little girl ' well, she could never really be called little, mind you, but anyways ' she was always the largest child in her class. Even among the boys!" She laughed heartily at some private memory, while virat, not wishing to be rude, simply shared a polite smile with her.

"I can arrange for you to get a membership in a gym I occupy,manvi. It's up in the city, so you can go on your way home from work." Her aunt insisted, spearing some vegetables into her overly wide-set mouth.

"Thank you, Aunt." She replied, trying to appear relieved with the information. Only the black-haired man at her side could distinguish the beaten slouching of her shoulders and downcast eyes as one of mortification. chahaji shot his beeji and sister-in-law another disapproving glance, which went unnoticed by the two.

"Yes, and you should join my yoga class, as well." beeji insisted. "It'll do wonders for your thighs and calves. I'm sure virat doesn't want a fat wife." She and aunt shared an airy laugh. The defeat of manvi's stance grew more prominent, her shoulders so slumped they almost touched the table.

Unable to stay quiet any longer, her husband snapped, "I don't know what you're talking about, beeji. manvi doesn't need to be a size two to keep me around ' she's perfect the way she is. I'm lucky to have a girl like her who loves me as much as I love her." To prove his point, he leaned down and pecked her square on the temple, secretly engulfing her tiny hand with his under the table. Chacha nodded approvingly at his actions, telling him that he had just passed the "Meet The Father" test. The two harpies ' as he referred to him in his head ' were stunned into silence by his powerful assertion.

"You is a good one, manvi." Her chachu commented before popping another morsel of panner in his mouth.

"I did, chachu." She replied softly, briefly squeezing virat's hand.

The rest of the evening played out with virat sticking closely by manvi's side, fearing what her relatives might say once he was out of earshot. After a quick round of coffee and dropping a few loose promises to visit soon, the couple headed home, both equally grateful that the night was over.

"Thank you for what you did back there." manvi said shyly, turning her palm upwards to meet his.

Chancing a glance away from the road and towards hers, virat lifted their joined hands to his mouth, brushing her knuckles with the sweet pressure of his lips. "You're welcome, love. Dinner was...interesting." He murmured, still slightly enraged at the callous conversation that transpired over dinner.

Smile faltering, her chin fell, losing the contact she had with his depthless brown eyes. "That's not what I meant' Don't get me wrong, I really appreciate you coming down here and visiting with me and I'm glad you had a good time' but what I meant was, thank you for what you said earlier. To my beeji and aunt, I mean." Tears burned the back of her eyes and she had to turn away, ashamed at the uncharacteristic bout of emotion. She was startled when the car began to slow and then eventually stop, resting just along the sides of the nearly abandoned road. It was silent for a moment before she heard the unmistakable click of disengaged a seat belt.

"manvi? manvi, baby, look at me." Forcing her head up, she was taken aback at the fierce expression on his face. "They're the reasons, aren't they?"

"Reasons for what?" She whispered though still feeling as if she were too loud.

His mouth set into a saddened droop, his brows drawn into what she would call an infuriated furrow. "The reason why you won't let me touch you; why you always pull back when I get too close. They're the reasons why you won't let me hug you from behind and why you wear cardigans even on the warmest days." The hurt lacing his tone pierced her deeply.

Her brows lifted at his statements. She hadn't realized he was so aware of her actions. "My family has' always made sure I knew I had no reason to be proud of my body." She confessed, instantly regretting it. She went on to abuse her bottom lip with her teeth. Her earliest memories were of the cruel school children bullying her because of her hefty frame and of her beeji placing her on a diet the age of ten after being chastened by numerous family members for having an overweight child. Even sitting in the darken interior of his pristine car she felt subconscious, tugging the material of her navy blue tunic forward to conceal the rolls that prodded from her sides.

Cradling her straight, delicate face in his grasp, he forced her to look straight at him. "Don't." He commanded sharply, unintentionally making her wince. "Don't you ever, ever listen to what they have to say about you, do you hear me, baby? I meant every word I said back there; you're absolutely perfect the way you are now. I wouldn't change a hair on your head. You can join a gym or do some yoga after work if you want, but only do it if you want to, not because they told you to." He kissed her deeply, willing the sharp words of her relatives out of her mind. He channelled every unspoken feeling into the kiss, making sure she knew with every sweep of his tongue and nip of her lip just how precious she was.

"Promise me, baby." he breathed against her cheek when they separated. "Promise me you'll never listen to them. You're a beautiful woman; my beautiful woman. You will never change in my eyes, not in five years; not in fifty years. I love you."

"I'll try," she mumbled against his lips, tears sliding freely down her face. "I swear I'll try."

"That's all I ask." And with that, virat lovingly gripped her generous hips and claimed her mouth once more.


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Edited by vishruta - 18 December 2011 at 10:59pm

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-Yuks- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 18 December 2011 at 11:34pm | IP Logged
I have no words...
This really was beautiful. And excellent

I loved every word


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luv.u.zindagi Senior Member

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Posted: 18 December 2011 at 11:43pm | IP Logged
aww that was soo sweet! i would love to have a husband like him lol Day Dreaming

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love_never_dies IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 19 December 2011 at 12:04am | IP Logged
Nice... emotional and lovely..

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Neetu2825 Goldie

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Posted: 19 December 2011 at 12:10am | IP Logged
That was a beautiful story. AmazingClap

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preethis IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 19 December 2011 at 12:34am | IP Logged
Awww Beautifull OS!!!!!!

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rev4eva IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 19 December 2011 at 3:04am | IP Logged

Perfect, it is simply beautiful.

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tina_1234 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 19 December 2011 at 1:51pm | IP Logged
beautiful os..i wonder does dese kind of guys really exist...if yes thn plzz lemme knw ;) :P

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