Arnav smiled for what seemed like the millionth time that afternoon!
So did I while reading your OS. So glad that u returned Arnav's childhood to him.
AwesomeππΌ
Awwh! Absolutely loved the OS Shuheda!
Definitely a perfect day for both Arnav and Khushi!I hope something similiar does happen in the show...and the addition of kids and cricket made it all the more better!Loved it! <3-Dee
awe so cute arnav playing cricket at least they stop calling him uncle but so want them to call hin jijaji
Please PM me when you update the next part.
It was awesome...they should have such tension free moments bringin ARHI together...loved the jeejaji, uncle to bhaiyya transition.Paddy
Originally posted by: DTeacher
Very good OS and very enjoyable reading.
I am not 'stumped' at all with what to say - I guess you could say I was 'clean bowled' by it! π π
'Over' and 'out'
Saj aka DT. π
Originally posted by: NaDzGirl
bhaiyya is way better than uncle rofl. im sure arnav loves being called jeejaji instead lol
loved it hon!! *jappi*
Originally posted by: shaaranya
Lovely OS
Originally posted by: MairaKhan1180
That was super duper cute, enjoyed it:)
Originally posted by: Arhi-Sarun
this was fantastic...fun filled and tension free...loved it
Originally posted by: tina_1234
amazin part
fantastic !
your works are truly awesome !
i always wait for ur updates nd new works :)
Originally posted by: minimuffin86
you always manage to lift my mood!
this is awesomeArhi's awesomeYOUR awesome!
that was really cute ...
spply loved the last line : bhaiyaa wasnt as good as jeejaji ... but better than uncle !!! ππ
Fantastic one, Shuheda!!
Ugh!! That Shyam. . . .
I probably curse his every breath!!
Though I very well know he's just a piece of fiction!! π π
Aahh. . . . How I wish to see this on screen!!! π
And that last bit about 'Bhaiyya' not sounding as good as 'Jeejaji'?? Awesome, dude. . . π
loved it..its really awsome..arnie playin cricket,laughing..enjoying with khushi and all that ..loved it,.enjoyed reading it..
Originally posted by: RiyaDutta
OMG that was so cute!!!π
Originally posted by: --Nargis--
Very cute and light hearted...loved it!!!
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