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FF: Mysterious Murder at Manampur; Updt-Pg 44;5/2 (Page 10)

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Posted: 22 December 2011 at 6:32am | IP Logged
Good Character Sketch and Nice update...Continue soonTongue.Thanks for PM

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Posted: 22 December 2011 at 7:57am | IP Logged
aww raj ji v aa gaye. Aru ka bf shanky? Wow!
Nice part.

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Posted: 22 December 2011 at 8:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by justjayati

awesome part Swethu!!! 

Thank u dear Hug

ek doubt meri taraf se bhi: even if u mention 8:30 instead of 5:30... why did u write "it was getting dark outside"?? 8:30 se aur zyaada kya dark hoga??? even if its summer...[Don't mind dear...just a random doubt] 

Wanted to put here something but didn't as i thought it will be filmy n deviate from original track. but forgot change the sentence due to some other workCry 

Now... ab bajegi teri band... Tongue Mar gayi...

abt characters...
Meri full on buraai karaaai jaa rahi thi ashu se hunh??? Ouch  

i cannot do it straight to u and teri ashu hi tho kaha hai mein nahiDancingLOL Wink


aru ko shanky de diya... khushi ko rohu, charu ko sid, polly ko Murderer... wah!!! kya baat!! kya baat!!! kya baat!!!

dhanyawaad ji LOL
 
pura badla nikala hai mere se !!!! milo aaj googletalk par... sikhaati hoon tujhe sabak on chatting!!! aaj to chodungi nahin!!! Evil Smile

Aaj mein nahi aane wali chatting mein. LOL thanks u said it here. now i will escape ur badla Tongue


At the end!!!! Awesome yaar... u r writing really good [keeping all the scott's suggestions to u in mind] Update soon...Approve

well thank u again. 

this time with all ur suggestions will try to put it in a good way. next part is almost ready must change few things so will be posting 2moro as weekend spl LOL 

i may not give chapter 3 during weekends but will try my level best to update. it is a long weekend. so i'm not sure of posting 100%. if i prepare the update will post it definetly.

i know all are waiting for their characters to be seen in the story. chapter 3 is the intro of all ur's Wink and ur career thing.


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Posted: 22 December 2011 at 8:08am | IP Logged
Thank u Anu n Radhi!

Aap bhi aayenge in chapter 3. toda wait kariye. mujhe dantna mat padne ke baad. Embarrassed






Edited by vss08 - 22 December 2011 at 8:08am

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Posted: 22 December 2011 at 9:22am | IP Logged
@jayathi i think at 8.30PM in north india gets dark.so i think swetha is rite abt getting dark outside even at 8.30PM!!SmileSmile
 
@swetha i want 2 give a suggestion. 4 Shimla theres no direct train from even Delhi and u've 2 take a train from Delhi 2 Kalka(a small town in Haryana bordering HP) & from there u've 2 take Toy Train which takes min. 6hrs!!SmileSmile
 

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Posted: 22 December 2011 at 9:25am | IP Logged
Mummy bhook lagi khana do

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Posted: 22 December 2011 at 9:46am | IP Logged
@radhi
tu toh mujhe lagta hai ki full mood mein aa gayi hai..

@tiny15
that's what i said...
in north India.. it gets very dark at 7 only... but in her FF she mentioned that "it started getting dark" She should have written "It was very dark outside " or something like this... MOreover me too knew abt that train thing but was not sure,,, thnx for reminding yaar...Hug

@swetha
chinta mat karna dear... we atleast I don't bother much about these small details however it helps making ur FF better but still i m personally liking ur FF very much... and tu toh sach mein dar gayi yaar... don't worry... tujhe kha nahin jaaungi chat par...LOL

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Posted: 22 December 2011 at 9:58am | IP Logged
tiny! u have said what i had in my mind re!!! thought of mentioning abt diff trains but neglected it as it is FF. i made a direct train till shimla and from there a taxi to sahu hills  LOL

though i know its not possible to go there directly hahah Wink

Next update Shortly...


Edited by vss08 - 22 December 2011 at 9:58am

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