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OS:Ahem Helps Gopi to Wash-updated 10/01/2012 (Page 13)

shaina.sharma IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 11 January 2012 at 3:12am | IP Logged

Hai hai hai hai

wow yaar..i never read such a indepedent gopi before..u really brought a huge change in her.

its so good to see ahem being a puppet in her hands and i love the part where he thought he was too transperantLOL

very sweetly and nicely described a simple love essence...

sooo good and so hot too at the same timeLOL

i have to give credit to u...u can burn computers downWink

and i love the last koki scene...the way  she thought about them being mishceivous..LOL

well done once again...

and yeah i remembered breathing this time.

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Posted: 11 January 2012 at 3:37am | IP Logged
Wow that was amazing , u are one brave woman , hats off to you.you handle the porridge /honey /mint tea challenge with such aplomb , it far exceeded my expectations .your title of 'queen of steam ' is well deserved

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Posted: 11 January 2012 at 11:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by taniks

Wow that was amazing , u are one brave woman , hats off to you.you handle the porridge /honey /mint tea challenge with such aplomb , it far exceeded my expectations .your title of 'queen of steam ' is well deserved

Thanks, taniks.Smile  It was fun writing it, even if I did have to change one bit. 
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Posted: 11 January 2012 at 3:40pm | IP Logged
gosh.this was truly amazing.loved each n every part

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Posted: 12 January 2012 at 3:00pm | IP Logged
Really hot Xarina, love the steamy scenes. 

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Posted: 12 January 2012 at 7:36pm | IP Logged
Xarina came back to read it againWink Don't know why but its getting hotter the more I read itLOL

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Posted: 13 January 2012 at 4:29pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by maddy311

Xarina came back to read it againWink Don't know why but its getting hotter the more I read itLOL

I know.  I keep reading my copy too. Blushing Blush like mad and then realise that there is a typo or something.  Makes me want to redo the whole thing.

And Shaina?  Thank you for breathing.LOL  Didn't want to be doing a murder mystery on the forum.
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Posted: 14 January 2012 at 4:01am | IP Logged
Xarina I read all parts of your OS and thought is was fabuluosly written.
 
You have put in so much details making it a visually stimulating read.
 
Looking forward to reading more from you again soon. Well done.

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