OS:Ahem Helps Gopi to Wash-updated 10/01/2012 - Page 10

the update was very good...loved it

Great update xarina!!!! You are the steam queen

Hai hai hai hai

wow yaar..i never read such a indepedent gopi before..u really brought a huge change in her.

its so good to see ahem being a puppet in her hands and i love the part where he thought he was too transperant😆

very sweetly and nicely described a simple love essence...

sooo good and so hot too at the same time😆

i have to give credit to u...u can burn computers down😉

and i love the last koki scene...the way  she thought about them being mishceivous..😆

well done once again...

and yeah i remembered breathing this time.

Wow that was amazing , u are one brave woman , hats off to you.you handle the porridge /honey /mint tea challenge with such aplomb , it far exceeded my expectations .your title of 'queen of steam ' is well deserved

Originally posted by: taniks

Wow that was amazing , u are one brave woman , hats off to you.you handle the porridge /honey /mint tea challenge with such aplomb , it far exceeded my expectations .your title of 'queen of steam ' is well deserved

Thanks, taniks.😊  It was fun writing it, even if I did have to change one bit. 

gosh.this was truly amazing.loved each n every part

Really hot Xarina, love the steamy scenes. 

Xarina came back to read it again😉 Don't know why but its getting hotter the more I read it😆

Originally posted by: maddy311

Xarina came back to read it again😉 Don't know why but its getting hotter the more I read it😆

I know.  I keep reading my copy too. ☺️ Blush like mad and then realise that there is a typo or something.  Makes me want to redo the whole thing.

And Shaina?  Thank you for breathing.😆  Didn't want to be doing a murder mystery on the forum.

Xarina I read all parts of your OS and thought is was fabuluosly written.

 

You have put in so much details making it a visually stimulating read.

 

Looking forward to reading more from you again soon. Well done.