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Broken Hearts- OS (Page 2)

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Posted: 18 December 2011 at 4:52am | IP Logged
simply beautiful;

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Posted: 18 December 2011 at 4:57am | IP Logged
you.are.a.genius! 

Need I say more? Every emotion, every move, every feeling expressed so beautifully, I have never read anything like this Zee! You NEED to write more on ArHi! No kidding, your writing has the power to make me feel the emotions! I seriously missed reading your work! Keep writing. I would definitely love to read more <33

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Posted: 18 December 2011 at 5:29am | IP Logged
when i saw ur pm abt OS i was so happy and eager to read Embarrassedwoww what a OS u penned down it awesomely Clapi love the way u started it and ended superb it direct touched to heart i always love to read ur awesome work keep writing more Hug

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Posted: 18 December 2011 at 5:33am | IP Logged
Amazing emotions, portrayed beautifully. He is alone, whilst they are one…they can share their pain, but he can't. Well written, great! Clap

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Posted: 18 December 2011 at 5:40am | IP Logged
You were hesitant about posting this? You kidding, right?!

Brilliant OS.
It made me smile. It made me frown. Everything was depicted so beautifully. 
...But this line alone was enough to make me fall in love with your OS...
(She faded away into the seeming darkness hoping to shield herself from his eyes, the side of his lips twitched to form a smirk,  how silly of her didn't she know she carried with herself a light of her own.)  

Continue writing please :)

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Posted: 18 December 2011 at 5:41am | IP Logged
loved it but wish you wrote more darlz cuz it's pretty short. nevertheless i enjoyed this broken angels story & feel like singing arash's 'broken angel' for them

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Posted: 18 December 2011 at 5:46am | IP Logged
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Posted: 18 December 2011 at 5:57am | IP Logged
YOU WROTE!!!!! Monkey Emoticon Monkey Winks

i was like Monkey Winks Yoyo when i saw your OS page.
hehehe.. i'm so glad those creative juices are still flowing! Monkey Icons

anyways, on with my review. Monkey Icons Yoyo

well, it was an angst OS, but not the types that leave with thinking, "OH HECK. THIS WORLD IS A SAD PLACE!" LOL. i dislike those types... makes me feel as if there was no Hope in Pandora's Box (that box being the literary work). yours did. and i'm glad it did. if reader's (who are also human) like anything, that is the feeling of feeling something good. because, all of us are in the pursuit of happiness (or any good feeling that ends up being related with happiness), and this OS left a little bit of happiness in me. i saw a glimmer of hope; a sparkle of a bright new day, bright new opportunity; a tiny spark that did leave me feel elated! SO YES. I LOVED THIS OS. Monkey Icons Cici

i loved how you intertwined unhappiness of broken hearts with the happiness of some hope, because these angels, still remain as pure, even if bits of them are not intact. at least, they did not become fallen angels. that would be full-on angst man! LOL. Monkey Emoticons Cici

and as for my dearest ASR, i love it when he feels hopeless, guilty and all broken, and then in some manner when he'd be expressing his guilt, upon reading between the lines, you see how much he wants to be healed. there is a nuance, and not everyone would be able to catch. but i guess, it's the way you write. your words speak. Monkey Wink Yoyo

LOVE YA YOU SEXY MOMMA! Monkey Icons Yoyo

love,
Teddy Bear. Monkey Emoticons

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i hope the emoticons made your day! Monkey Emoticons


Edited by sharneil92 - 18 December 2011 at 6:02am

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