wow...
awsome update
i didnt think all these would hapen u could have turned d story to khushi...bichari she has no much role to play
yaar make her strong n why doesnt she trust her love...my god ya
i dont mean to critisise bt u are writing like a kid...if its true lov then she should trust...
u could have done-
arnav was said to have been sleeping with that. he was guilty bt khushi trusted him n alll... she then tried to find d truth n tell it to arnav n tell him that he is nt guilty n he is innocent n they should plan something n put him behind bars
anyways ur story is alo good
do update sooon
byeee
i dont give so much suggestions to all bt i gave u as u r a gud frnd of mine
Edited by roshnidiya - 12 years ago
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