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FF: Holding Your Hands Forever.. Ch16, Pg38 (Page 39)

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Posted: 24 March 2012 at 8:43pm | IP Logged
Amazing chapter Bidz

This line did it for me, it just so beautiful

"this stairway is their first step to a world filled with their love and infinity of happiness.."

I just love the way keep MohUr humor alive in your story cause that what this couple was about even when dealing with serious issue there sense of humor never left them.

Mohan never leave an opportunity to be naughty and tease Kastur LOL

Bidz I would like to applaud you for putting such a beautiful moment in the update. It was subtle yet impactful for Mohan feeling that baby kick was a realization to Mohan and the readers that he accepted that baby as his whole heartedly and made me smile with tears in my eyes.

I feel the closure coming in the next one or two chapters and wouldn't mind it ending cause it was a beautiful journey.

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Posted: 26 March 2012 at 8:30am | IP Logged
aww bidzy such a cute portrait of a marriage Smile love it! Thumbs Up
ek yeh marriage hai aur ek mohUR ki marriage thi Confused were mohan asked kastur for jwelry LOL and put on his ear plugs when kastur was crying . snatching it from kannu LOL that was hillarious.
but obviously i like this one more.my only opinion abt your ff kaash DP mei kabhi kuch aisa bhi dikhata Ouch.enjoyd reading it.

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saba

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Posted: 31 March 2012 at 11:47pm | IP Logged
This is a beautiful chapter, Bidzy.  Simply beautiful.

I have a question--didn't Mohan say he wanted a court marriage?

And a slight nitpick...again LOL Why does Kastur feel shy?Confused

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Posted: 31 March 2012 at 11:55pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by likarsh

This is a beautiful chapter, Bidzy.  Simply beautiful.

I have a question--didn't Mohan say he wanted a court marriage?

And a slight nitpick...again LOL Why does Kastur feel shy?Confused

Mohan suggested to have a simple wedding and the best would be court marriage...Saroj preferred to get them married in the temple, so he went on his mother's decision. Well, to tell the truth, I actually forgot that Mohan did suggest court marriage in the beginning. LOL

So do you think that a bride won't feel shy? LOL Btw where did you see Kastur's shyness in the chapter? LOL Thanks by the way. Hug
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Posted: 01 April 2012 at 12:14am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Bidzie-

Originally posted by likarsh

This is a beautiful chapter, Bidzy.  Simply beautiful.

I have a question--didn't Mohan say he wanted a court marriage?

And a slight nitpick...again LOL Why does Kastur feel shy?Confused

Mohan suggested to have a simple wedding and the best would be court marriage...Saroj preferred to get them married in the temple, so he went on his mother's decision. Well, to tell the truth, I actually forgot that Mohan did suggest court marriage in the beginning. LOL

So do you think that a bride won't feel shy? LOL Btw where did you see Kastur's shyness in the chapter? LOL Thanks by the way. Hug


I didn't see any shyness from Kastur in the chapter either LOL. The girl was ready it's Mohan whose pretending to be sleeping ROFL

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Posted: 01 April 2012 at 12:56pm | IP Logged
" He's sleeping tonight .. seriously? i know that i ain't in such a condition to.." She blushed but keeping her shyness aside with a lot of difficulty, she turned annoyed again.

No, Bidzy I don't think it's a given that a bride would/should feel shy.  She was married before is pregnant.  Her issues were more on emotional trust rather than physicality, and whatever there was of that had vanished long before.  He was the one that pulled back often times, not she.

So why would she be shy just because she's the bride and female?  
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Posted: 01 April 2012 at 1:23pm | IP Logged
Lik, I understood what you meant. Perhaps I got carried away. :P Anyways thanks for your opinion. Needed it to be consistent in my writing. :D

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Posted: 02 April 2012 at 7:58pm | IP Logged
The Beginning of A New Life! What an appropriate title to this chapter, sweets! An elaborate wedding scene would not be appropriate for this particular couple...Your description of the temple steps & each step signifying their journey into a new life was awesome! Mohan pretends to fall asleep post wedding! Hahahaha...Classic! The baby's kicking was so apropos...the baby is an integral part of their life, married or not! Was grinning at their excitement to feel that sensation!

Btw, the mangalsutra is made of black beads, not black pearls... Smile

Waiting for the next part!

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