FF: Holding Your Hands Forever.. Ch16, Pg38 (Page 32)

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Posted: 27 February 2012 at 2:43pm | IP Logged
Just read it!! It was fantastic my dear!! wish i could write like you! Smile but i guess only the gifted ones can write like that Day Dreaming

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@chapter12 OMG bidzzz sowie for late reply but i must say what a change in kastur... i loove her concern for mohan...awww thinking her dream came true running around the whole hospital for him?? enquiring... wowow finally saw mohan and blasted him hehehehe lolx.. looove kastur.. awww mohan i cud vision his baffled look... missing them soo much... OMG kastur confessed to mohan that she loves him awww how cuteee and then their super cuteee huggg ufhhh... their playfulness and mohan's naughtie speech regarding the continuation of their "ahem ahem" "work" ahahhaah... m gng to read the other part now... 

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TongueClapwowowowowowo bidzzz m goneee ufhhh what a special amazing valentine morning.. *IHOPE THERE IS MOREWink* omggg i cant think beyond that.. but of course the sunset viewing was indeed a special moment ... ufuhh mohan is such a romantic Embarrassed ... loove the fact that he made a very mature decision upon marrying kastur in court rather than a huge uncalled for kinda wedding... OMG ufhhh now coming to the "SPECIAL" morninggg wowowow again i'm visioning while reading how cute kastur opening her eyes just to find herself in the most romantic room ever, being surrounded by teddies and flowersss awww and then being wished by hr loverrrHeart how sweeet awww cuteness mohan asking for his wish...and ahemmm a little moreee, and he GOT ITShocked kastur kised mohan wowowoow that was icing on the cakeBlushing.. I just love it to the maxxx bidzzz keep writing sooon cant wait Embarrassed, once again sowie for late reply hope u understandHugmuahxxx

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Thanks a lot guys for all your appreciations/comments. Means a lot to me. I'm gonna update the next chapter soon. Embarrassed

Chapter #14
You Are My Strength

Mohan stopped the car in front of the institute. "Here you go." He casually said and looked at Kastur and smiled slightly on seeing her scary face. She was looking same as a kid, who was going to give her exam.

"I'll be selected naa? I don't know what I should do.. I'm feeling strange." Kastur restlessly said and turned her face to Mohan. Seeing his smile, she made an angry pout. "I'm literally shivering in fear and you are smiling? Like seriously?"

Mohan cupped her beautiful face in his hands and staring in her eyes lovingly, he said, "Just calm down and go inside. I know that you'll rock. After all, you are my superstar. You can do it. I've faith in you completely." There was a feeling of pride in his voice.

"Really?" Kastur asked innocently. Mohan nodded sweetly. He brought his face closer to hers. Kastur closed her eyes and blushingly smiled on feeling the touch of the lips of the one she loved on her cheek.

Moving apart, Mohan gave his killer smile and subtly yet tenderly said, "All the best." Kastur gratefully gazed him as a gesture of a thank you. She then got out of the car and turned back, smiling in the ever softest way. Mohan waved his hand to her and as she did it back, he left.

Kastur walked inside. Her heart was pounding in nervousness but she didn't let it come on her face. She remembered Mohan's words and smiled with glow and pride. Just then, her phone beeped and flashed "1 text message from Mohan" on the screen. She shyly smiled and opened the message which said..

"Love the smile of pride on your face. Makes you more beautiful than the usual..."

Kastur looked around in astonishment. How did Mohan see her prideful smile? She wondered and then looked back at the screen again.

"What happened? Don't look around. I'm in my office yet I can see your smiley face through my heart. Anyways enough of romance. Now go inside and just rock. Love youuu...*hugs*"

Kastur shook her head and grinned. Mohan always crossed the limit of being the sweetest, she thought and then decided to reply him back.

"Love youuu tooo..*hugs back* Take your lunch on time and be safe..."

She typed and tried hard to make her cheeks look normal. Finally when she succeeded, she went inside confidently.


"It was been a couple of hours since Kastur's interview started. What hadn't she call me yet?" Mohan worriedly thought and kept glancing on his phone as he was going through an official file. 

Just when he was going to call Kastur as he was terribly restless on not getting any news from her, she texted him. He opened it excitedly and read..

"Need you here asap..."

Mohan got up from his chair. He felt a strange tension. Without wasting a moment, he rushed outside.


Kastur looked at her wrist watch with a sullen look. Mohan arrived there in his car. As Kastur saw that, she quickly walked and sat inside.

"What happened? What did they say?" Mohan curiously asked her.

Kastur looked at him with a disheartened expression. "They didn't select me." She plainly said.

Mohan sat shocked for a moment. All he could mutter was a "why?"

"After they knew that I'm going to be a divorcee soon, they said that I can't work there. They think that keeping a divorcee in their institute will have a bad affect on the students." Kastur said in a painful voice.

Silence took place for sometime. Mohan didn't know what to say. Kastur, after controlling her overwhelming feelings, curved her lips in a smile and looked at him. "What happened? Why are you silent? Lets go home."

Mohan nodded with a forceful smile. He knew that they both were heartbroken yet he smiled as he wanted to see his Kastur strong, whereas, Kastur also knew about the state of their hearts at the moment and also that Mohan smiled only for her. Still she didn't speak a word about it as she didn't want him to be weak on seeing her gloomy and with a broken heart.


"Mohan, what file is it?" Kastur curiously asked him as she saw the file on the backseat of the car.

"Kastur, actually this is..." Mohan mumbled his words in nervousness. Kastur knew that something was fishy by the way he reacted. She took the file in her hand and flipped its cover.

She sat numb as she saw the papers inside. She knew about it yet on seeing it in reality had somewhere made her feel sad and broken inside.

Mohan knew the storm going on inside her heart. He placed his hand on hers and entwined their fingers together to show that he was always there.

Kastur immediately turned herself normal and looked at him. "I'm okay." she said calmly. "I'll take the file with me. Will sign on it as I go inside." She plainly said and taking the file, she hurriedly headed to home.


Kastur stared at the papers after she sat on a chair. Her hand trembled and at one moment, the pen from her hand fell and the sound of its falling seemed to echo in the silent room.

"I've come out of my past, so why ain't I signing these papers? What the heck am I thinking? I'm happy with Mohan. I love him, so why can't I get free from my past?" Kastur frustratedly questioned herself. Just then, she felt someone holding her hand in the most affectionate manner. She knew that it was him.

"Kastur, you've spend 5 years of your life with him. So I know that its not easy. Don't just stress yourself too much. Don't force please.", Mohan told her softly.

Kastur turned her face to her side and saw Mohan sitting on his knees and holding her hand to give her strength and courage to face her horrible past. She just looked at him, amazed of how much to an extent he loved her. A slight smile arrived on her face. "Thanks for being my strength."

She held the pen determinedly in her hand and turned to see the papers. She froze for a second and then finally signed on the papers with a silent promise of flushing out the memories of her haunting past from her mind and heart for the lifetime.


Mohur marriage and few months leap..Embarrassed

Edited by -Bidzie- - 04 March 2012 at 2:40am

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Posted: 04 March 2012 at 12:55am | IP Logged
nice update and thanksThumbs Up

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Posted: 04 March 2012 at 4:24am | IP Logged
awesomeee bidzie... 

the way u show Mohan & Kastur's silent love the way is amazing i m loving this Mohan & Kastur more then the show but why leap ...

Edited by leena04 - 05 March 2012 at 3:30am

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Posted: 04 March 2012 at 6:41am | IP Logged
Love grows in such tender moments.. How sweet of Mohan to be so understanding.. Such undying love will melt anyone.. It's like doing everything one could do to make someone happy.. Though she is finding it difficult to cope up with the past i am sure she will move on without regrets Big smile

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Fatima_Q IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 04 March 2012 at 11:28am | IP Logged

That was just beautiful. Tongue

I just watched Vandy's Mohur Vm on Main Vari Jawan (Piya O Re Piya) prior to reading your update, and the song kept running through my mind while I was reading this chapterLOL
Ufff!!! Mohan in this FF is to die for...Day Dreaming...I mean I was like Kastur why are you hesitating?  I felt like picking up the pen and shoving her out of the way...here I'll sign those divorce papers for you!!! LOL 
Eeekk!!  Mohur wedding coming up!!! Embarrassed   Can't wait!
Thanks for livening up my day Hug

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