FF: Holding Your Hands Forever.. Ch16, Pg38 (Page 25)

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Chapter #10

After a lot of thinking, Kastur finally asked Saroj hesitantly, "Maa.. do.. you know about.. my pregnancy?" She was finding hard to believe what was going on.

Saroj nodded plainly, and after a moment, she said sweetly, "Mohan has told me everything and don't worry, I don't have any problem because my son loves you."

At that moment, Mohan said looking at Kastur in a pleading tone, "Don't do anything against your wish."

Kastur faced him and smilingly slightly, she said, "Mohan, I won't do anything against my wish. I promise." Then she turned back to Saroj and determinedly said, "Maa, I'll marry Mohan. I'm telling it from my heart. I'll marry him."

Stunned, Mohan kept on staring her.

Saroj grinned and said, "That's what I expected from you, beta. Thank you so much." Saying that, she stood up.

Kastur stood up, too and said with teary eyes, "Maa, don't make me feel small by thanking me. In fact, I'm thankful to you for accepting me despite of my past and.. and a burden." She lowered her eyes sadly as she said that.

Saroj tilted her chin up, wiped off her tears and said in a motherly voice, "The life inside you isn't a burden, beta. It is a blessing and I'm grateful to God for it." Kastur gratefully smiled and then they had an affectionate hug.

Mohan was still in shock. Saroj and Kastur broke their hug and looked at him.

"Mohan, why are you looking at us like that? Believe it, my son." Saroj said smilingly.

"Maa.. Kastur.. I mean.. Kastur.. What is.." Mohan fumbled with his words which made Saroj laugh. "Kastur, make him believe and then get freshen up. I'll warm up our dinner.", she said. Kastur nodded. Saroj walked to kitchen.

Kastur sat next to Mohan and said teasingly, "Come out of shock and talk to me."

"Kastur, you.. I mean.." Mohan was at a loss of words. Kastur touched his cheek and said lovingly looking deeply in his eyes, "I didn't say yes for you. I did it because of my own selfish reasons. I want to marry you because I need you and can't think my life without you."

A dream since 5 years was turning a reality for Mohan. He wondered if it was really true and if it was a dream, he feared if it'd break when he'd open his eyes.

Kastur knew what he was going through. She was aware of his feelings and the confusion in his heart and also knew how she would clear it. Her face became mischievous and just immediately, she pinched him in his wrist.

"Ouch!" Mohan screamed out.

Kastur laughed out loud. Automatically, a huge smile appeared on Mohan's face. He felt as if he got his bubbly Kastur back. He gazed her and admired her whole-hearten laugh after such a long time.

"You won't change naa?" Mohan asked in disbelief.

"Never." Kastur said smilingly and pulled him in a hug. Mohan wrapped her in his secure arms and said, "Thank you!"

Kastur smiled and broke the hug. "Thanks to you too." she said sweetly. Just then, Saroj called them to come to the dinning table.

"Go and freshen up.", Mohan normally said. Kastur sweetly nodded and then they went to their rooms.


Closing the door, Kastur's smile faded. She remembered her marriage with Aditya. Frustrated, she gripped her fist and said in a painful voice, "I'm trying to move on, then why are you making it hard for me? Why, Krishna?"

She went to the washroom and threw water on her face. After that, she came out and was startled for a moment to see Mohan. "Gosh you scared me!", she said.

"I've a--"

Mohan froze his lips as he saw his beautiful would-be wife. The water droplets on her face and the strands of her wet hairs made her divine. He started walking to her. Kastur could see the passion in his eyes. She looked at him nervously and stood firm. He came closer to her and simply smiled a little.

"Don't worry. I won't touch you until you are comfortable.", Mohan said as he understood Kastur's hesitation.

Kastur stood numb for a moment. How well Mohan knew her, she thought.

Mohan stepped back and casually said, "There's a good news for you."

"What?" Kastur asked slowly.

Mohan smilingly said, "My friend, Inspector Verma, was chasing Aditya secretly since 2 days and finally he has been caught red-handed with his second wife. Now he's sure to get a 7 years imprisonment."

Kastur was astounded. She didn't know what to say. Mohan came close to her and cupping her face, he said, "You are already free from him and within a week, you'll be free legally as well."

After being silent for few minutes, Kastur said with a glow in her eyes, "Really?"

"Yes!" Mohan said smilingly and hugged her. Kastur closed her eyes and embraced him back. She chose to be silent and enjoy her heaven.


At midnight 3am, Mohan rubbed his eyes, sat on his bed, looked to his side and finding an empty jug on the table, he got up from his bed and went to the kitchen, where, surprisingly, he saw Kastur searching something.

"Kastur!" Mohan said in a sleepy voice.

Kastur turned back, startled. "Yaar, why do you need to scare me always?", she asked irritatedly.

"Sorry for that but what are you searching?" he asked curiously. His eyelids were closing every time even though he tried to keep them open.

"Got it!" Kastur said in joy.

"What?" Mohan asked.

Kastur smiled like a kid. "Sour pickles. I was craving for these, you know."

Mohan opened his mouth to say something but stopped when he saw a childishness in her while eating. He smiled seeing her joyful, happy and bubbly like before. "I was missing you.", he lovingly said.

"What?" Kastur looked at him, confused, while eating.

"I was missing my bubbly Kastur." Mohan said slowly.

Kastur smiled beautifully. "I was missing myself too, but not anymore. I promise." Her past was appearing before her eyes every now and then but she didn't let it affect her. She decided to be strong and face everything with a smile, for her and the one whom she respected, with whom she was going to spend her whole life, Mohan.

Edited by -Bidzie- - 03 February 2012 at 11:43pm

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-Nakshatra- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 03 February 2012 at 11:27pm | IP Logged
Mohan is missing bubbly Kastur like we miss our Besharam KasturWink. Kastur is trying her best to put the past behind( Past is one ghost which never leaves unless you make peace with it)Ouch. Its really hard to move on when its repercussions are still haunting you. Mohan being sensible around her is understandable. I adore this couple no matter whatBig smile

This is a most important phase in MohUr life. I will understand if Mohan's wait is gonna make him desperate. Once Kastur submits herself to this decision of hers it will be pure bliss. Next chapter will be funWinkLOL

Edited by Mohur - 04 February 2012 at 2:16am

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-Siddhi- Goldie

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Posted: 04 February 2012 at 5:53am | IP Logged
so so nice yaar bidzii...mohan is as usual too cute n understanding n kastur too is so naughty n cutie...luved this part...awsomeClap...now waiting ford shahnai n band baaja baarat of mohurs wedding...Partyupdate asap 

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TeAmo_Messi IF-Addictz

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Posted: 04 February 2012 at 6:09am | IP Logged
aweee bidz, i sud imagine each nd every line of it Day Dreaming...
d story is so selfless nd hearttouching...Cry

i wish i really cud see HARSHAD in such type of luv story..Day Dreaming

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leena04 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 05 February 2012 at 7:06am | IP Logged
awesome update once again -Bidzi- loved the way u showed all the emotions of Kastur n Mohan with brilliancy loved the way u gets back Bubbly Kastur... looking forwards to see new challenges of their life... Clap Star Thumbs Up

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KhatamKahani IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 05 February 2012 at 2:10pm | IP Logged
Awesome update, Bidzy.  It was a great chapter.  I thoroughly enjoyed it.  I'm really loving how this story has/is shaping up.

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Posted: 05 February 2012 at 2:20pm | IP Logged
I will read soon lol, but i dont want to read, its just going to make m miss them more Unhappy

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pyar-ishk IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 05 February 2012 at 3:38pm | IP Logged
Awesome chapter Bidz really enjoying reading it.

Now I seen that side of Mohan on the show it helps me relate to him in your story. There is a huge void that needs to be filled and with DP off air your story helps.

Thanks Bidz

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