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FF: Holding Your Hands Forever.. Ch16, Pg38 (Page 12)

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Posted: 31 December 2011 at 9:52am | IP Logged
I guess i m again too late to comment...but again an awsome update bidzii...it trully touched my heart...uv ur ff n luv u too my dear for giving such beutiful n cute n luving luv story...update asap yaara...

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Posted: 31 December 2011 at 10:13pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by premeeristry

you are kidding bidzy LOL Confused kastur got married aur 5 yrs b ho gaye ..yeh moke qabar nahi thi ...aur to aur she is pregnant...Ouch
isn't it soo cute of mohan to accept her again after these many yrs...well this much happend in 1 update wasn't expecting it...kuch excitment hojaye next update mei..Smile

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I'm not kidding sweetie LOL Didn't you read the first chapter? Five years leap was clearly mentioned there. Tongue Yea she's pregnant. Actually the problem is that I love bringing twists in my stories. Wink No worries.. Her pregnancy will bring lots of cute moments btwn MohUr. Embarrassed Haha.. my stories are always unexpected. ROFL I don't write my stories like the CVs .. in slow motion. LOL Thanks anyways. Hug
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Originally posted by payalHarshiya

I guess i m again too late to comment...but again an awsome update bidzii...it trully touched my heart...uv ur ff n luv u too my dear for giving such beutiful n cute n luving luv story...update asap yaara...

Aaww Siddhi Hug I'm glad that you loved it. Big smile Thanks a lot yaara. Hug Will update as soon as all the other readers will comment. Smile

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Posted: 31 December 2011 at 11:38pm | IP Logged
OMG... Kastur is Pregnant and Mohan still wanna marry her that was so sweet of him but isn't it a little quick. I love the pace of your story with a lot of twist and turns. I am looking forward to the next chapter. Keep it comingBig smile

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Originally posted by Mohur

OMG... Kastur is Pregnant and Mohan still wanna marry her that was so sweet of him but isn't it a little quick. I love the pace of your story with a lot of twist and turns. I am looking forward to the next chapter. Keep it comingBig smile

As I said, I love twists. LOL Real story is coming.. I'm glad you loved the chapter and the pace of the story! Thank you so muchHug

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Posted: 01 January 2012 at 5:27pm | IP Logged
Chapter #5
We Are Best Friends...


Kastur felt an urge to hug the one who loved her selflessly. She was grateful to him for loving her so much. Yet she had a guilt because she couldn't love him back. Overwhelmed, Kastur hugged Mohan, who hugged her back. After they broke their hug, Kastur lowered her eyes and remained silent for sometime.

"I'm sorry.", Mohan guiltily said.

Kastur looked up, confused. "Why?", she asked.

"I shan't have proposed you at this moment. I should have understood what you are going through. But Kastur, don't get me wrong. I was just--"

"Mohan, you don't need to give me any explanation. I know you care for me. I know you love me and I respect your feelings a lot. But.."

After gathering courage, Kastur said with a gloomy face, "I can't love anyone again. You love me but I can't give you anything except my sadness and a responsibility which will be burden for you for all your life."

Saying that, Kastur went inside a room and closed the door behind her.

Mohan sighed. "Kastur, love is the name of giving and my love for you is enough for us to live together happily. I hope you'll come over your past. I just need to see you happy.", he thought with utmost love reflecting in his eyes.

Kastur opened the door. Mohan faced to the other side to hide his feelings. He stood up from the couch, motionless and expressionless. Kastur walked close to him and before she could say anything, he gave a huge smile and said, "We won't talk about the matter we talked few moments ago. Don't worry."

Kastur was shocked and amazed. "Mohan, how could you smile so effortlessly whereas I refused your proposal again?", she asked.

"Forget whatever I said few moments ago. Lets stay like before. Lets be best friends again and this time, just best friends." Mohan said and grinned. Yet Kastur could find the emptiness behind his grin.

"Can you give me some time? I promise I'll try my best to come over my past and think about our relationship."

Mohan's grin faded. Kastur repeated her question emotionally, "Can I get some time?" Mohan's lips curved in a little and beautiful smile. "We won't think about it until you are completely ready. Take as much time as you want. I'll wait.", he said affectionately.

"You are really amazing." Kastur said. Mohan changed his expression and mischievously looked at her. "I know that." He said in an obvious tone. Both burst in a laugh.

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"Don't open your eyes and don't you dare cheat." Kastur said in a loud tone. Sitting in the dining room, Mohan made an annoyed expression. "What are you doing, Kastur?", he asked impatiently.

"Shut up and stay there." Kastur shouted and Mohan was startled. "She will never change.", he said with a disbelieving smile.

"Now you can open your eyes." Kastur said. Mohan opened his eyes and smiled broadly seeing a chocolate cake in front of him on the table.

"Happy Birthday, stupid.", Kastur said with a glittering smile.

"I thought you wouldn't remember." Mohan said, shocked.

"Whatever happens in my life, I will never forget my best friend's birthday. Even when you weren't here, I tried sending mails to you but they never reached because apart from changing your number, you deactivated your mail ids."

"Actually..."

"Leave all that. Lets cut the cake. I'm damn hungry.", Kastur said childishly and rolled her tongue inside her mouth.

Mohan laughed out loud. "You still love chocolate cakes?"

"As if you don't?" Kastur asked in an obvious tone.

"Naa I still love it but I've left eating them long ago. I didn't felt like to eat it without my best friend and you know who she is." Mohan said sweetly.

Kastur frowned. "You suffered a lot for--"

"We won't talk all that. Remember I said naa? Anyways lets cut the cake." Mohan said with an ocean-sized smile. Kastur smilingly nodded.

They stood behind the cake. Mohan bended to blow off the candle.

"So Mr. Gala, make a wish.", Kastur said excitedly.

Mohan closed his eyes and prayed with a loving smile, "I want Kastur's happiness to be back. I want my old and bubbly Kastur back." He opened his eyes and blew off the candle, while Kastur sang the birthday song for him.

Cutting the cake, Mohan fed a piece to Kastur, while Kastur did the same.

"Happy Birthday, Mohan."

"Thank you."

They exchanged smiles and hugged each other. 

Mohan's phone rang up. Breaking the hug, he picked up the call.

"Hey Mohan, how's Kastur now?", Akash asked him.

"She's absolutely fine now.", Mohan said casually.

"That's good. Anyways take care of her, yaar. My best wishes are with you guys."

Mohan smiled. "Thanks yaar. Bye." Saying that, he disconnected the call.

"Who was it?", Kastur asked curiously.

"My friend. He was asking about your health." Mohan informed.

While listening to him, suddenly Kastur remembered how he introduced her as his wife in front of his friends. She had a little smile on her face. She knew how her best friend was and why he did it. She felt the luckiest girl to have Mohan beside her.

"You are really nice." Kastur said to Mohan, looking deeply in his eyes.

Mohan intensely gazed her and in a second, he realized that his feelings were overwhelming him again. To control them, he jokingly laughed and said, "Don't you have anything new to say?"

Kastur laughed and shook her head. Mohan couldn't take his eyes off from her joyful smile. He felt as if his world was completed.

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Precap: Kastur is talking to a saleswoman in a mall .. Mohan smilingly stares at her, while carrying her bags .. Suddenly Kastur's smile fades .. She turns to her side and sees Aditya .. Mohan looked worried ..


Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 03 January 2012 at 8:48pm

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Posted: 01 January 2012 at 5:43pm | IP Logged
Mohan's such a goner for Kastur. LOL

All Mohan Kastur interaction for this chapter.  And you added in the friends, too.  Good job in portraying Mohan the great friend and the guy who loves this girl like anything despite everything.  And good in showing how easily the were able interact --or at least pretend to interact--as the friends they were when they were five years younger, and in school. 
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Posted: 01 January 2012 at 5:54pm | IP Logged
Mohan is all crazy for Kastur and you are laughing on it? Shocked LOL

Anyways, thank you so much. Hug Hope you liked the interactions. I made the update really simple without any drama. LOL Actually I just need to include some MohUr moments in my story as we hardly watch any in the show. Ouch

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