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FF: Holding Your Hands Forever.. Ch16, Pg38 (Page 11)

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Posted: 30 December 2011 at 7:35pm | IP Logged
Bidzy, this much anticipation for moi?  LOL

Rani is right, it's OTT and filmi drama I don't like.  A bunch of twists, you put in there.  Second Marriage, pregnancy. I had no doubt Mohan would accept pregnant Kastur. But another twist was his marriage proposal, wasn't expecting that so quickly either. That's not a criticism, but a positive statement.

I was going to say something else, but now I forget...  Maybe it will come to me later.

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Posted: 30 December 2011 at 7:38pm | IP Logged
Am I missing a chapter?  What happened when his friends came and he introduced her as his wife, but she screams Aditya's name?
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Posted: 30 December 2011 at 7:42pm | IP Logged
I don't know what to say, I seriously don't know. LOL

Thanks for the honest comment, Lik. I really appreciate it. Clap Secondly, it's really hard to impress you. LOL

Oh well, like I told Rani, I've grown up watching OTT Balaji serials, so my imagination is nothing less than that. ROFL I've tried my best to make it subtle, simple and not OTT. LOL

Don't worry. We didn't hear Kastur's answer yet. And Mohan will give his reasons, he will. Embarrassed

Thank  you so much for your comment, Lik. Thanks a lot. Hug Btw thinking of you, I didn't put "something" in this chapter. LOL
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Posted: 30 December 2011 at 7:44pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by likarsh

Am I missing a chapter?  What happened when his friends came and he introduced her as his wife, but she screams Aditya's name?

Just assume that they went back home. LOL You didn't miss any chapter. I wasn't getting as to how to shoo off his friends. LOL But I'll def put an explanation behind it in my next chapter. Big smile


Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 30 December 2011 at 7:44pm

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Posted: 30 December 2011 at 7:50pm | IP Logged
Bidzy, I didn't say I wasn't impressed. I was agreeing with Rani that it wasn't OTT.  There was something else I wanted to specifically mention and comment on, but I forgot as I was typing up the first part.

It was very good, Bidzy.  Especially since the story seems to be after the reunion (or so we thing, maybe it's not a reunion yet.)  I shall wait.

Thank you for not adding those three words, that are said too much. LOL  I don't hate it all the time, though.  Many times it's well done and I have no problems with it.  And if you feel it should be put in there, go ahead and put it.  Don't leave it out on my account. Perhaps it will be one of those times I like those three words. LOL
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Posted: 30 December 2011 at 7:56pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by likarsh

Bidzy, I didn't say I wasn't impressed. I was agreeing with Rani that it wasn't OTT.  There was something else I wanted to specifically mention and comment on, but I forgot as I was typing up the first part.

It was very good, Bidzy.  Especially since the story seems to be after the reunion (or so we thing, maybe it's not a reunion yet.)  I shall wait.

Thank you for not adding those three words, that are said too much. LOL  I don't hate it all the time, though.  Many times it's well done and I have no problems with it.  And if you feel it should be put in there, go ahead and put it.  Don't leave it out on my account. Perhaps it will be one of those times I like those three words. LOL

Kastur knows that Mohan loves her. Mohan knows that Kastur still loves Aditya. So there's no chance of those three words to appear in the scenery at present. LOL I was actually thinking of Mohan kissing on Kastur's tears. Typical Balaji!!!!! ROFL But the next moment, I thought that this is not the right time. They will have their big night .. we'll see many kisses between them at that time. Wink I'm crazy. LOL

Reunion will be when Kastur will come out of her past, which is not yet. Embarrassed Kastur's answer won't be expected. Just wait and read. Big smile Btw I'm glad that you liked the chapter!!! Big smile

Think of what you wanted to say .. I wanna listen Embarrassed


Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 30 December 2011 at 7:57pm

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Posted: 30 December 2011 at 8:11pm | IP Logged
Bidzy I just want to say thank you for thinking of me. LOL Thank you, so much.  I'll try to think of it, but I don't know if it's going to come. I even read it again.  Shouldn't have said it, because now it's going to bother you more than it bothers me.  

Actually I think this is what I wanted to say.  I'm responding to the reunion part, but I think it might have been tied to what I'm about to say.

When I say reunion, obviously it's not fully a true union, but I do think it makes sense for Mohan to ask, and Kastur to eventually agree even if they both know of the issues and lack of proper mutual romantic love/emotions.  Because she's pregnant, and. it's not easy in society.  

Anyway, I'm looking forward to how you're going to take this.

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Posted: 31 December 2011 at 8:59am | IP Logged
you are kidding bidzy LOL Confused kastur got married aur 5 yrs b ho gaye ..yeh moke qabar nahi thi ...aur to aur she is pregnant...Ouch
isn't it soo cute of mohan to accept her again after these many yrs...well this much happend in 1 update wasn't expecting it...kuch excitment hojaye next update mei..Smile

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