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FF: Holding Your Hands Forever.. Ch16, Pg38 - Page 14

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Posted: 12 years ago
bidz..it is actuallly dreamy😍
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: silky_harshad

Love is in the air 🥳 hmmm...😉 amazing bidzy


Aaww dhanyavaad Silkyben🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: harshu.sundas

bidz..it is actuallly dreamy😍


Yesss it is😍 I actually imagined it while typing and I was just☺️ Thanks yaar for your comment🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great Job, Bidzy.  👏 👏  I really have nothing more to say except...

ummm

they should go for it. 🤣 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG bidzzz wowowowo hats off to u 👏 seriouslyyy WELL WRITTEN and amazing chapter 6 wowowwo i read it infinite times bcuz i loved each and every line of this... its truly a treat to read and visualize mohan and kastur as u portray them to be.THE FB was sooo adorable, I wish SAROJ was like this in the REEL epi's like seriously i was shocked reading her name and all but u just made her the opposite of what she is..and this is what i like... I loved how mohan chose kastur's salwar suit fr her and then shocked at seeing her beauty and so divine... awww shopping?? i cud just imagine mohur in mall mohan having soo many bags in his hand while kastur's busy selecting different types of accessories/clothes for herself😍.. oh no that aditya!!! how dare he..arghh he needs a ti8 slap and yeaH!!!!!!🤗😎 Kastur did give him what he deserves... what a cheap idiot🤢.. wow kastur wants to become lecturer??? awww...the way mohan held the pen and guide her..seriously I love this to the max.. I will read chapter7 and comment ...once again bidz keep up the EXCELLENCY in writing ur FF parts👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
😲 FIRST and foremost bidz I CANNOT WAIT for the other chapter thats totally unfair!!!😡.. u got me reading on and on and now i want moreee😔

n e way moving to the FF>. ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT.. omg i cant believe my eyes for how saroj is being portrayed in ur FF's😆 keep it coming i'm liking this less hateful saroj... awww MOHUR got to spend the ni8 with each other?? how sweeet... so mohan was LITERALLY gone after seeing kastur making her way out of bathroom??? 😍 tumhari adao pe main vari vari☺️... OMG he's scanning her entire face?? poor boy cudnt even gulp properly😃.. somehow he did manage nah?? awww mohan insisting on kastur sleeping on bed..end of discussion, and last but not least..he ran in time to catch her in his protective arms..eyelock, love, her wet lips and the fire within both being awaken without their realization😍😍☺️

👏 Bravooo bidzzz keep it coming... wowowowo love ur FF's they are just amazing, a true remedy away from the REEL pain we get from watching DP
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice bidz awsumee lovely thanxx for the messages  🥳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Phew I caught up on the update 😆

The chapter gets better each time you update and am loving it. The slap Kastur give aditya was fantastic and should've kept slapping him till his face fell off.

What can I say about chapter 7 besides dreamy, amazing and droolicious 😍 . You teaser not fair at all no precap 😭

BTW I see you kept one quality of Saroj her habits of interupting and not allowing one to complete there statement 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
😍

I enjoy their Convo and love it when there is no awkwardness between them. Saroj is divine in your story 😊. I hate the cliff hanger😭  that too when the next update will take lot more time. 
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Posted: 12 years ago
what an intresting update bidzy 😊... seriously can saroj be sweet to this extent 😕 ...
see bidzy what have u done 😆 ab Lik k hopes badh gaye hain
umm...ummm 😳 nothing to say about precap...but at this time of story you have got be so studious bidzy 😕 😆...obviously want the update soon .

love
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