FF: Holding Your Hands Forever.. Ch16, Pg38 - Page 6

Whether DP moves forward or not yours certainly does. Its lot more entertaining too.👏 Edited by Mohur - 12 years ago

sorry didn't comment last time!! but anyways.. your doing an awesome job great story love it!!! pls update soon 😊

wow bidzy nice turn enjoying reading it...
but i hope un mohan frndz mei se woh lizaed na hooo...sory cant find a better name for sia ...
poor mohan na us par itna taras kabhi nahi aya
par ab jab he is adressng her as his wife 😆...waitng till next weekend.

love
saba

Bidzben 🤗 tussi gr8 ho 👍🏼 It was amazing...haiii mera Mohan the eternal lover 😍 kya kru i can see Mohan all set to break the records of deewanapan 😍 just love the chirpy n bubbly kastur...CVs ko tutions dena shuru kr de tu,hm sb ka bhala ho jaega 🤣 waiting 4 the next chap...haii mera Mohan confronting dat evil 😡 i wish mera uski haddi pasli tod dale 😍

I'm hooked so far, please continue writing 😊

Originally posted by: Mohur

Whether DP moves forward or not yours certainly does. Its lot more entertaining too.👏

Flashback deserves a special mention😃. I love this chirpy bubbly Kastur a lot😛 it reminds me the besharam Kastur😭.

Thanks for the PM😊

That's what I wanna show.. how Kastur was in the past and how she's now.. and then how Mohan will bring her chirpiness back is the story all about 😳
I'm glad that you loved it. Thank you sooo much 🤗

Originally posted by: sreyap92

sorry didn't comment last time!! but anyways.. your doing an awesome job great story love it!!! pls update soon 😊

It's absolutely okay. I understand. Thanks a ton. Will update once everyone comments. 😳

Originally posted by: premeeristry

wow bidzy nice turn enjoying reading it...
but i hope un mohan frndz mei se woh lizaed na hooo...sory cant find a better name for sia ...
poor mohan na us par itna taras kabhi nahi aya
par ab jab he is adressng her as his wife 😆...waitng till next weekend.

love
saba

Nonsense ko mere story mein include karna, yeh mujhe pasand nahi 😡 🤣
Hehe thank you so much 🤗 I can't help but make Mohan a true lover in my story because I love imagining HC like that 😍
Will update once I'll get enough comments 😳

Originally posted by: silky_harshad

Bidzben 🤗 tussi gr8 ho 👍🏼 It was amazing...haiii mera Mohan the eternal lover 😍 kya kru i can see Mohan all set to break the records of deewanapan 😍 just love the chirpy n bubbly kastur...CVs ko tutions dena shuru kr de tu,hm sb ka bhala ho jaega 🤣 waiting 4 the next chap...haii mera Mohan confronting dat evil 😡 i wish mera uski haddi pasli tod dale 😍

Mujhe pata hai ki main kitni gr8 hoon 😆😆 mujhe bhi Mohan ko eternal lover ke rup mein dekhna bohot pasand hai 😍 Sahi kehe rahi hai yaar...i wish if i cud give some not-so-nonsense lessons to those good-for-nothing CVs 😡 anyways thank u so much and just wait and watch oops i mean read 😆😆 mohan deewanepan ki hadh par karega 😍😍

Originally posted by: 786786

I'm hooked so far, please continue writing 😊

Glad that I could make u hooked 😃 thank u so much!!! will update once i'll get the comments of all the readers 😳