Decided to write a short story on MohUr as Christmas Break is on the way and also to save all of us from Baapji melodrama in the show. 😆
This is purely a fiction of my imagination. It has nothing to do with the story or the concept of the show. I hope you'll like it. :)
This is a tale of Mohan, a cute, simple and an ambitious young guy who is in love with Kastur. It tells about his struggle to bring his love back from the world of darkness. Will he succeed? Will he get his love?
Chapter One
Meeting You... Decision By Fate
"I love you Aditya"
"But I hate you, Kastur"
Her dreams shattered in a moment. She felt numb; tears flowed from her eyes. Without saying anything, she walked away.
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"Mohan, I'm sorry but Kastur's condition is very critical."
Mohan broke into tears, just after the doctor informed him. He collapsed and cried his heart out. Closing his eyes, he remembered the day when his Kastur went away before his eyes.
"Kastur, I love you very much."
"Mohan, I respect your love but.."
"But what, Kastur?"
"But I love someone else who is my everything. Sorry Mohan. I can't accept your love. Try to understand."
Saying that, Kastur turned back and walked away. Mohan stood there, watching her until she disappeared. Smiling, he said softly, "Will always pray to Almighty for your happiness."
Since that day, he never met Kastur till the day when he found her on the middle of the road, injured badly. He never thought to meet her in this manner after a long period of five years.
Mohan opened his eyes which were filled with tears. He stood up and walked near the window of the ICU. "My life is in you, so you have to be alright. You have to come back for me and our old friendship.", he said looking at Kastur's pale face.
The doctor came out of the ICU. "Doctor, my Kastur is absolutely fine, right? Speak up doctor.. Please!" Mohan said in desperateness. "Kastur is fine and she's conscious too, but..", the doctor stopped.
"But what, doctor?", Mohan asked in horror. "She's in a trauma which made her unresponsive. Neither she speaks nor she reacts to anything.", the doctor informed sadly.
Mohan went in a shock for a moment. He was silent, but soon after few minutes, he spoke up, "I'll bring back my old Kastur." He looked up and thought, "I know God that you are testing my love and I promise that I'll pass this test. I surely will." With a determined look, he made his face straight, wiped off his tears and walked in the ICU with a smile.
If you liked the first part, please comment. Your comments will decide if I'll continue with it or not. Also like the post if you like it and want to be PMed for further updates on this story. 😳
Index
Chapter #1 - Pg #1
Chapter #2 - Pg #4
Chapter #3 - Pg #7
Chapter #4 - Pg #9
Chapter #5 - Pg #12
Chapter #6 - Pg #15
Chapter #7 - Pg #17
Chapter #8 - Pg #20
Chapter #9 - Pg #23
Chapter #10 - Pg #25
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