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IPKKND SS: Holding On and Letting Go, Parts 1-5 :) (Page 61)

Chimpsy Goldie

Joined: 04 October 2011
Posts: 1097

Posted: 09 January 2012 at 7:32am | IP Logged

What can I say? Holding On and Letting Go is a beautiful story... and you're a fantasic writer, Hayley Thumbs Up

Every writer has her own style and yours is not only unique, but it stands out brilliantly!
It's obvious that you put a lot of effort into it, and you really love and cheerish what you write... one really has to fully appreciate their own work of art before anyone else does! Big smile
A word is not the same with one writer as with another.  One tears it from his guts.  The other pulls it out of his overcoat pocket. 
~Charles Peguy
You're remarkable in the way you put extra effort in setting the right mood for each part, and I must say that your choice of songs are always fantastic...Clap
And now for my tribute to Holding On and Letting Go, hope you like it:
( Both parts from Arnav to Kushi)
If the rain was my love and the sky my heart,
I'd drench you to your skin and never let you part,
You thought I'd leave you, that I won't care?
But, losing you, darling, I just could not bear...
I'll pledge eternal love to you, my dear,
Let there be no sadness, not even a tear,
I love you truly, but this you should already know,
I'll always, always hold on, and never, ever let you go...
I've kept my word, my dear... so you have to keep yours and write more and more and more beautiful FFs (I'm always hoping for a mini serial LOL) in 2012...

Edited by Chimpsy - 09 January 2012 at 7:33am

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FAYKHAN29 IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 20 October 2011
Posts: 10774

Posted: 10 January 2012 at 7:16pm | IP Logged
Hayley it is sooo beautifully writtenl loved evry single word really touching  Emotional i actually cried chap 4 & last part hping khushi wil make it, loved it plz add mexxx

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-.Pearl.- IF-Dazzler

Joined: 12 November 2011
Posts: 2849

Posted: 11 January 2012 at 12:37am | IP Logged

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invalid Goldie

Joined: 26 June 2007
Posts: 1432

Posted: 13 January 2012 at 5:34am | IP Logged

Hi Everyone, i just realised that I had never really commented seperately to thank everyone, and so I just wanted to drop a short message by and let you all know that I am so very grateful for all the support and encouraging words you have left behind.

They make me confident in my own work and keep me going, this story wouldnt be here - along with all my other works, if you all of you great people were'nt there, every step of the way, to offer your kind words.
It really means alot to me, so thank you very much.
Love Hayley

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sapphire_gyal38 Newbie

Joined: 14 December 2011
Posts: 11

Posted: 13 January 2012 at 2:47pm | IP Logged
Sorry for the REALLY, REALLY late comment Confused 
I don't normally comment as I don't always have time...
But I had 2 comment for dis... It was such an emotional piece, I was crying so much... Your work has always touched me and I'm totally hooked onto your work... Whenever I see that you have uploaded, I drop everything I'm doing and read your post. (Normally a bit late though- like a week late) 
But I think your doing an awesome job and keep it up Thumbs Up 

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princezsafa Senior Member

Joined: 07 December 2011
Posts: 412

Posted: 14 January 2012 at 10:33pm | IP Logged
I'm sorry I've been busy with loads, rather bucket-loads of work and things going on at uni. So I haven't logged on to the forum for the whole month now :(

Anyway, forgot the story so read it from the start, made the ending all the more better to read and feel at the same time =)

I'm amazed, flabbergasted at this sensuous, thoughtful, highly creative and beautiful piece of writing =)

That's the most sensible thing I've written on this forum just for you :)

Most of the time I end up blabbering, going all-high about ArHi on the forum but I was truly awed by your writing!

Keep writing more! xoxo

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meenaluma IF-Rockerz

Joined: 10 August 2011
Posts: 7067

Posted: 15 January 2012 at 1:31am | IP Logged
pls continue soon and pls pm me

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kaira101 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 09 October 2010
Posts: 4133

Posted: 17 January 2012 at 5:36pm | IP Logged
awesome story srsly made me cry, u wrote so beautifully <3

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