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IPKKND SS: Holding On and Letting Go, Parts 1-5 :) (Page 44)

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Posted: 29 December 2011 at 3:22am | IP Logged
It was sad..but it was a grt update dr...
N u r an amazing writer. :) 

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.Sandal. IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 29 December 2011 at 4:47am | IP Logged
awww poor khushi i hope she accepts his help

plz update soon

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Ipkkndworld Senior Member
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Posted: 29 December 2011 at 5:03am | IP Logged
Very well written..update soon

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Chimpsy Goldie
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Posted: 29 December 2011 at 5:27am | IP Logged
Hayley, you're a fantastic writer Clapand I love sad stories, stirred my emotions and made me cry Cry
But then again, I'm special becos I have taps behind my eyes, so- Embarrassed

Anyway, loved, loved your update... And I'm really sad I missed your birthday Party
Pease accept my belated birthday wishes, all the best of the best to you always, my dear... 

And here's a special gift for you and your HOLG FF:

(to Arnav)
My heart beats on when it should not,
I keep breathing when I should stop,
This pain inside, it just won't cease,
Just hold me tight, won't you please?

(to Kushi)
I cry all night just thinking of you,
Imagining just what you're going through,
There is no life for me with you gone,
I can't let you go, no, I must hold on...


Pretty sad, huh? Should suit the mood...
Can't wait for the last part, I'll just go and get the buckets ready as I can foresee a real tear-jerker? 
Or maybe not? You're just full of surprises!


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zobsheh Goldie
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Posted: 29 December 2011 at 5:28am | IP Logged
I am a silent reader of your work Hayley ..i have even read "tearing ourselves apart" and it was beautiful but this update of yours forced me to write a comment...A wonderfully written update Hayley...you are a fabulous writer but please it is an earnest request please don't make the ending sad...please update soon and give us a new year present with a happy ending Smile

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Richie-Rich Goldie
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Posted: 29 December 2011 at 5:55am | IP Logged
That was heartbreaking! 
All the parts are so stunning! Clap
But the last chapter...you left me dumbfounded!!
I could very well imagine the pain that both of them were going through...
And to see them like that...Arnav first being totally stupefied and then falling to pieces...it made my entire being ache for them!! Cry
The way Khushi said that she didn't want to strain her family by letting them know and Arnav's reaction to it - All so beautifully written!!
And then finally the 'I could never hate you' - so much of truth in it...I smiled meekly through my tears at that line!! 
And I'm not exaggerating Hayles...your writing had the power to take me through an emotional roller coaster!! :P

P.S - I knew I said I wouldn't be able to read and all. But I had taken a half an hour break...and this sure as hell proved to be worth it!! :)

Continue soon Smile

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ipkkndank IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 29 December 2011 at 6:04am | IP Logged
AWww dear fantastic =)
 
Superb dear
 
have no words to say how wonderful your update coz all the above feel ordinary to me when describing your talent =)
 
Anyways sad coz this will end soon but do continue this story as soon as you can and hope you'll do it before 2011 ends and start a new long story like your previous FF in 2012 =) =) =)
 
Well continue sooonnn =) waiting

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raii Senior Member
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Posted: 29 December 2011 at 7:06am | IP Logged
plz update fast!!!Smile

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