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IPKKND SS: Holding On and Letting Go, Parts 1-5 :) (Page 39)

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Posted: 28 December 2011 at 12:03pm | IP Logged
So depressive as u said
just completed reading prev. Parts this is just superb one.
Oh man she has cancer poor girl
love arhi scene very much.

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Posted: 28 December 2011 at 12:30pm | IP Logged
Hayley,

Once again you have captured the pain and the agony of both cancer patients who try to hide their disease from loved ones as much as possible and the loved ones who get to know anyway. Cancer is like that you can't hide it no matter how hard you try. Eventually it comes out rearing it's ugly head for all to see even if they don't want to see it or show it.

You understand your characters very well and the pathos and despair they suffer through is clearly conveyed in your writing that is both poignant and gripping. You are a good writer who knows how to capture sadness and set the mood and prepare the reader for what is to come good or bad. Very real and very beautifully written. Love the plot and story. A gifted writer.

Regards,

KF

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Posted: 28 December 2011 at 12:33pm | IP Logged
sad but beautifully written

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Posted: 28 December 2011 at 12:46pm | IP Logged
damn  that made me cry and i hate to cry love it is was so damn sad she is trying to  be strong for everyone love it and hate so sad and heartbreaking yet so perfectly written so emotionally felt awesome update 

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Posted: 28 December 2011 at 12:58pm | IP Logged
Nooo please don't kill her. I cried when I read it. I remember naddiyas os was Khushi and Arnav get married, she lives a few months, died of tumor and Arnav lives in her memories and died in pain a year later! And she went around saying sorry for like 3 days! So please don't kill her

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Posted: 28 December 2011 at 1:23pm | IP Logged
heart-wrenching update Cry felt like crying reading this... u have to cure khushi  and make them unitedCry

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Posted: 28 December 2011 at 1:37pm | IP Logged
Oh Hailey that was so beautifully written..that scene b/w ArHi...so heart breaking..i could feel all the emotions so well..the way she breaks down the news to him..his disbelief..denial..n finally acceptance n the pain coming in..trying to deal with it..trying to find a way to salvage it..do anything to have her a moment more in his life...
n then her need for him..just him n nothing from him...she needed him to be the one to know..the only one she wanted to share her pain with..the way she wants to comfort him to ease his pain at having told it...oh i had tears when i read it all..
just so beautifully written..u have outdone urself once again!!a perfect update..loved it.
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Posted: 28 December 2011 at 2:19pm | IP Logged
Hayles Cry
 
That was depressing and yeah emo-ish fo sure.
I had a feeling something like this was going to happen, but cancer?!?! Ahhh! The word itself sends shivers down anyones spine, and though this is fictional, I could feel the pain and agony that both Khushi and Arnav are going through. But you'll fix this up and give us a happy ending right? I hope soo...
 
Truly a heartbreaking part...but loved it! Especially, Arnav and Khushi <3
 
Do continue sooner this time :)

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