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IPKKND SS: Holding On and Letting Go, Parts 1-5 :) (Page 33)

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Posted: 24 December 2011 at 1:31am | IP Logged
oh Gosh hayles this is too good..lovely SS
had been busy so had to catch up with all three chapters..and i must say its so freakin good...
ur writing never fails to impress me and u know that right...
just love the way u write and express emotions through it...
i wonder wat is wrong with Khushi hope she shares it with Arnav if not anyone else...
Do update soon..!!

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Posted: 24 December 2011 at 2:34am | IP Logged
very nice hally, and many happy returns of the day, and hope you have many more,TongueClapClap
really what is wrong with her, i hope she is not sickShocked. poor thing.
what ever it is he will make it better. if not it will still be a beautiful story

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Posted: 24 December 2011 at 2:55am | IP Logged
You have written this so well, i could feel what the characters must be going through. What happened to khushi, oh how i hope she will hold on and not let go.

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Posted: 24 December 2011 at 4:12am | IP Logged
Plz yaar dont make her ill with some serious disease. No yaar. I ve only 1 complaint. The update was short. Plz make it longer next time Embarrassed

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Posted: 24 December 2011 at 5:18am | IP Logged
it was a very emotional and depressing update lol
 
wats wrng wid khushi...why isnt she telling arnav?1 
she got some serious illness hasnt she???
 
plzzz make this a happy ending not a sad one...pweety pweeez!
 
HAPPY BIRTHDAY...!!!!!!!!! May u celebrate many many more and keep writing wonderful stories/fics and oneshots on ArHi!!!
 
have a beautiful day !!!

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Posted: 24 December 2011 at 6:31am | IP Logged
lovely   update...n wat is wrong wiz khushi??...
niwez happy b'day dr...njoy urself
 

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Posted: 24 December 2011 at 7:36am | IP Logged
nice depressing update!!Unhappy and a very very happy birthday!!!!PartyPartyhope this year be filled with loads and loads of fanfics for us!Tongue

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Posted: 24 December 2011 at 9:05am | IP Logged
Hey what a fabulous update it was
On birthday we are supposed to give you a gift and you well being different girl cute and sweet angel you are giving us an update!!!!!

And man what touching update it was i loved so many aspects of your update the best was the last part it just broke my heart while reading...

Why was it that when everything was perfect, she always found an excuse to get in the way. And now, when it was all falling apart, like a puzzle with a thousand missing pieces, she realised she would give anything in the world to go back to before, back to those little imperfections that had made the world feel so safe. It was all gone, ripped out from under her.

She wanted him, and she knew she could never have him, but at the same time, she felt another feeling clawing away at her insides, the feeling of wanting to share her life with him, and she didn't know which side would win


I just broke down to tears in these line...Hey is Khushi issue really life threatening and can't anything be done baout it...It killing my insides and chewing away like anything!!!!!!!


I feel like just going into you SS and telling Arnav everything...so that I want to see if he can do anything to help!!!!!                                                                                                                                                                                


Your description of ARnav's thoughts on seeing Khushi and the way she was sitting by the poolside...and well her feelings of vulnerability...reminded me so much of Arnav and how he became angry when he felt himself becoming weak during the diwali missed kiss

These two really made for each other and I am praying to Khushi's Devi Maiyaa to make things all right soon!!!!

But I must say I finding her quiteness endearing and unbearable at the same time!!!!



Now Star...Dear Hayley...


Wishing you lots of happiness and praying that your creative brain just overflow with stories and fictions with which you can keep us busy and happy...

Also hoping you become a great writer one day and i proudly boast to my friends..."You know i knew this girl before hand and I have read so many works of her!!!!!"

Hmmm so girl buck up and write totally impressed with you 

Wishing you a fun filled joy filled day!!!! Why day...a joy filled year!!!!! Oh why only a year wishes for joy filled life ahead of you my dear!!!!



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