IPKKND SS: Holding On and Letting Go, Parts 1-5 :) - Page 44

plsss don't kill her...

love ya 🤗

fnx 4 z pm

the fact that u left it open ended does justice to this wonderful story..good job lovely ss!

THIS WAS THE BEST TO END THIS SS

i really can't handle if she died thanku so much for leaving it here 

👏 thankx for pm

thank you so much for the pms

keep writting:)

closing my eyes to prevent flooding my tears out of my eyes!!😭

and i really do mean it!! i'm just not saying it like that.

So so so so nice... nah nice would be an understatement...

god!! not even 1000 words would justify how beautiful this SS was Hayley!! u made me speechless!! i had a lump in my throat while reading this whole chapter!! god!! u r so so expressive with ur words!!

i have read ur other work too and i must say this SS was really somehow so so close to my heart❤️ this gotta one of the best stories i ever read on this forum!!

and u did a good thing leaving the end open!! 

i think i wouldn't have been so emotional and would've had the same effect if u wrote more and let khushi 'cure' completely. it would've been the normal filmy drama then. 

and if u would have let her die... oh god don't even go there, i think i would've stopped reading the moment i got a hint that she was about to die! hhihih it would've been too much for me!!

So at the end i want to say that this SS was perfect!!! So so beautiful and emotional that it made me speechless.

u r such a fabulous writer Hayley!! god i wanna hug u for writing such fantastic stuff *hugz* hihihi🤗

oh god!! i think this is the longest comment i've written so far for any OS, SS or FF!