IPKKND SS: Holding On and Letting Go, Parts 1-5 :) - Page 36

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IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 12 years ago

Noo i had guessed it right. Blood Cancer? Damn!!!!!

I feel terrified. Ahh that was very..very...VERY emotional Hayley.

Just one update remaining? Uhh please don't let her die. Reading her telling him was so heart wrenching. I can't imagine her perishing. Pleasee

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Zeba

@FebruaryFlower

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

Hayley!

Beautifully written but so emotional.

It pained me to read Arnav and Khushi's grief and sorrow.

A fab job hun.

Thanks for the PM.

⭐️

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fareeha

@pinkpearlz

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Posted: 12 years ago

Thanks for the long update.
It was depressing to read their pain, fear, desperation. Beautifully written. Am anxious to read what next.

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deepa

@deeps_92

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Posted: 12 years ago

u know what...i tried to read this part twice but i always closed it when she tells him that she has cancer...

actually i didnt want to see him broken...

now i finally read it fully...

u r a fab writter...

i loved the way u showed his reaction...

pls continue soon

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@Chocoangel

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Posted: 12 years ago

woww...amazingly written..bt awww..poor arnav...hez cumpletely shattered..waitin eagerly to knw wat happen nxt..😍

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lara3110

@lara3110

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 12 years ago

lovely update.

HAPPY NEW YEAR.

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Sona

@sparikh

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

They better have mixed up the results! It happens all the time in Hindi shows...so can happen in fictions! 😭

can't wait to read next part...pls update soon...don't wanna start new year with sad story...😊

-Sona

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580755

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Posted: 12 years ago

u are a fab writer..omg i was imagining the scene i could see barun standing in rain with pain in his eyes...oh...it was so emotional😭

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Jasleen

@Jasleen

Goldie

Posted: 12 years ago

Wow that was amazing! Very well written, so much emotion and passion. Great job!!!!!

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667300

Posted: 12 years ago

Such a touching update! Also yes it was depressing!

Hopefully it can be treated though!! Looking forward to the next update :)

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