User
Logout
Login Register
CONTEST : IPL 2024 Prediction Game
You are here :
  1. Home
  2. Forums
  3. Fan Fictions
  4. IPKKND SS: Holding On and Letting Go, Parts 1-5 :)
  5. Page 29
Watch
Fan Fictions Forum

IPKKND SS: Holding On and Letting Go, Parts 1-5 :) - Page 29

share facebook twitter
-Garima-
-Garima- @-Garima- IF-Rockerz Inactive
Anniversary 15 Group Promotion 5 + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
Awww, I almost cried. This was so so soo beautifully written!

Hayley you are a perfectionist, you always manage to bring out all the emotions in your writing and I love it! (: The way they both broke down for each other was so sad but extremely beautiful, I could imagine everything in my head. I can't wait for the next update! Continue soon! (:

--Garima
pencil REPLY QUOTE
nj123
nj123 @nj123 Senior Member Inactive
Anniversary 12 Group Promotion 2 + 5
Posted: 12 years ago
That was heart wrenching 😭😭. You are an AMAZING writer!👏
Is she gonna be alright??

pencil REPLY QUOTE
desisweetheart9
desisweetheart9 @desisweetheart9 IF-Rockerz Inactive
Anniversary 15 Group Promotion 5 + 5
Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for the PM. So sad. You wrote the scene so beautifully.
pencil REPLY QUOTE
catalyst
catalyst @catalyst IF-Dazzler
Anniversary 12 Group Promotion 3 Fascinator 1
Posted: 12 years ago
really u r a  terrific writer... m feelng bad 4 khusi ... now arnav ll realise the importance of khusi in his lyf ... no more hide and seek thng !!!!!!!❤️
pencil REPLY QUOTE
Aanya.
Aanya @Aanya. IF-Rockerz
Anniversary 13 Group Promotion 5 + 5
Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update Hayley <3

The way you write is beautiful :)

I sort of expected Cancer with what the bleeding and stuff, but it was heartbreaking just the same :|

The interaction between Arnav and Khushi was so well written! Very subtle yet so intense :)

Great job <3

xoxo
Aanya
pencil REPLY QUOTE
.Sandal.
.Sandal. @.Sandal. IF-Rockerz
Anniversary 12 Group Promotion 5 + 5
Posted: 12 years ago
itx really depressing but lovely update

hope arnav help her and she accept his help.

update soon plz
pencil REPLY QUOTE
Addie07
Addie07 @Addie07 IF-Dazzler Inactive
Anniversary 12 Engager 4 + 8
Posted: 12 years ago
i had tears in my eyes reading this... god hayley... it was amazing... now i knw wat y mean by ore stories r almost similar ( reason i breathe) but this thing is wayy too heart breaking... awesome.. loved itEdited by Lyraa99 - 12 years ago
pencil REPLY QUOTE
AquaBluez17
AquaBluez17 @AquaBluez17 IF-Rockerz Inactive
Anniversary 12 Group Promotion 5 + 6
Posted: 12 years ago
that was amazing Hayley! So depressing but yet so perfectly described. It was stunning. You really have outdone yourself this time hun. It was awesome
pencil REPLY QUOTE
zaniax
Zania @zaniax IF-Sizzlerz Inactive
Anniversary 12 Group Promotion 6 Networker 1
Posted: 12 years ago
OMG!! Wat an update...so emotional😭 but BEAUTFULLY written
The way u expressed their pain in every sentence  was just WOW!
I Reallyyy loved it. PM me the nxt part thnx😊
pencil REPLY QUOTE
dazzling_glory
Nisha @dazzling_glory IF-Rockerz Inactive
Anniversary 18 Group Promotion 5 Networker 2
Posted: 12 years ago
nice update...very emotional.
Its good that khushi finally shared her problem with Arnav. she tried to be strong and happy for him knowing that the truth will be very hard for him. Arnav will not let anything happen to her, he will fight for her till the end taking care of her with all his heart and soul.
please continue soon
thanks for the PM
pencil REPLY QUOTE
left-big Previous 1 ... 27 28 29 30 31 ... 50 Next right-big
KK
KK

Related Topics

No Related topics found

Topic Info

210 Participants 499 Replies 79553Views

Topic started by invalid

Last replied by amandadsouza95

loader
loader
up-open TOP