IPKKND SS: Holding On and Letting Go, Parts 1-5 :) - Page 22

Very amazing update but a depressing one :( :D and i want more updates! Go back to your home and give us long and fast updates! Hehehe :D :D
And Happy Birthday in advance!! Hope you have an amazing one! :D

LOVELY!
entertainment factor? THERE!
but as u said, SADNESS washed over me. everyones so miserable! whyyy
tell us what she has!

What Is Wrong With Khushi ?! She Is Bleeding SOOO Much :( 🥺 Hope Arnav Founds Out . I Want Him To Help Her 😳 Do Update Soon 🤗

Hi Hayley,

Firstly Happy Birthday to you in advance. I hope you have a great birthday with many more happy days to come.

Holding On and Letting Go is so well written as are all your works. You have captured the desperation and sadness and pathos of Khushi so well. You've created such a tragic character that her every feeling and thought is so beautifully laid out for the reader to connect with.

I love the way you write. There is so much emotion to your writing. The grief and emptiness she feels is beautifully portrayed. A work of art to say the least. Wonderful writing. I also love how you have captured Arnav's fear and desperation for her. Very well constructed plot as always.

Take care and have a fantastic birthday.

Best Wishes to you on your special day:)

KF

😃Awesome update, very teary 😭😭but still great. Thanks fro the pm as always.😊

Absolutely loved this! So excited for the next part! :D

oh man!! still dont know whats wrong with khushi. poor khushi suffering alone. loved arnav's concern :(

I'm impossibly restless now.. if you don't update the next part soon, then I dont know if the weird heat I'm feeling in my chest and head will ever go away..! Please update soon.. I 'need' to know what's wrong with Khushi..!!!!!

Beautifully worded amazing update..

Continue soon..

HAPPY BIRTHDAY HAYLES! Hope you have a great one hun <3

that was devastating and in all the good ways! im so torn up inside after reading this! you are amazing!