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i had book marked this story long back ...and opened the thread few.. times to read but didn't read..now got time to read this..Smile
as i started reading i thought i will comment at the end...after finishing the story
but
as i completed reading 5 parts...i am fida over your writings...ClapClap
and decided to write comment for every part...and started to write comment after finishing each part..
 wanted to post all in one comment as surprise from your new reader...hope u read all this when i post it...
i know this will get long...but i really want to comment on this wonderful story..and if i comment at the end...then i can't put all my words at once..
so better i save my comments for each part now only...
hope i get enogh patience to put comment on each part...
hope u don't get annoyed seeing my comments...i am really feared of ur reaction...because the comments are of updates wise...
but i have stopped at part 50...bcoz its getting to long..and i will defiantely comment after  finishing the story...

prologue...
loved the introduction...
so raj n rishab are best freinds come brothers...or say uss sey bhi zyada...
loved how u told their story without complicating...

part1...
loved geet and her family's introduction...
she is so different in this...cute..bubbly..prankster...yet too professional...attitude wali...
loved the name "beautiful robot"...loved rahul too..and all..

part2..
OMG!!!i have never imagined maan will be like this in this ff...
he has whole class girls in his list of girl friends...shocking...
and that simran...she fooled maan ...bechara..hate that simran...
and now maan is a surgeon..
he has not touched guitar since then ...means from when...Confused

part3 and 4..
so rahul is marrying with his love pari...
OMG!!geet is spitting blood...ye kya hogaya...Shocked
and she is bearing this from 2 months...
i loved the most is how all are attached to their family...
love they have for every one...u described it so well..
geet talked like a parent just like a parent withMR.malhotra...OMG!!really a bussiness woman..
how much she loves her family...

ha ha ha only this geet can write the runaway letter like this...i was laughing when i read that letter..
hate that Chayyiji...but i know no one even hears her baseless talks..

part 5..
maan has changed his thoughts towards girls...
Aww his attitude loved it..
so geet come to rishab for help...
hayee first meeting mai hi maan can't see geet like this..
me running to read further


part6...
loved his concern...and how he politly asked geet that she is ready r not..
Aww geet already named him "dust danav"...
loved her attitude wala reply...and also she understood his concern...and his being personal with her case
she is too strong...
loved the maturity in the characters...


loved maan  too...he is trying to behave professional...but also can't give up his personal concern..

part 7...
OMG!!its too painfull...she is thinking about his family's happiness...
i know if any one of her family members were in this place..they would also did this...
maan requsted het to talk with her parents...ho god loved her answer..her selfless love..
its too painfull now onlt aage kya hoga..
maan went to temple , to pray for geet...NO words...
hope nothing happens to geet...forgot to mention...loved RISHAB a lot...
Aww not to forget their first hug...i loved ur writiing throuh out

part8..
OMG!!!maan crying...firstly thank u for giving this maan n geet...stong personalties..yet emotional when comes to closed ones
down to earth ones..
he is again crying seeing her pale..
OHH...he named her mishty...loved his support...geet really needs a supporting hand now...
and maan is changing...

part 9...
so the surprise is  "geet's b'day"
ye maan n rishab bhu kohi mouka nahi chodthe geet ko kush karne keliye..
pari is angry at geet...she don't no geet is the one who talked with her mamaji...
and also she is far away from her family because of their marriage...i know she don't no geet's condition..i don't blame her..but felt bad with her comment towards geet
loved geet rahul talks...Aww maaneet's another hug...
OMG!!ME THUD...
maan gifted her a saree...he lifted her in his arms...OMG!!!shocking...

part 10..
i loved the surprise dear...maan n rishab are such a sweet hearts..
maan played his guitar after 4 long years...omg!!itna change...
loved their cute bonding...how he let her drench in rain...and how he took care of her after that...
i know they were feeling something within...and he kissed her on cheeks...haiyee..

PS:yaar i am feeling that this is too much i mean still there are so many parts...hope u will not get bored of my comments...
but already written cmnts for 10 parts..now i don't want to stop...

part 11..
so they have feeling for each other..
loved their monologues..
both thinking the same...and trying to control their feeilngs...
loved the way how he explained her every thing about her health..and check ups..
me exited about the precap...she is returning back..

part 12..
"Bigdi sehzadi nahin'..bigdi bachi ho tum"
"Sadu akdu ho tum"
loved their cute fights...they always give shocks with their acts with each other...
mee thinking why maan's family still in raj's house..
k...maan is feeling low to depart from geeet..
loved the way u described such a emotional part...
no words...loved all of them...loved how maan made the situation lighter..i love him...

part 13..
aww..maan is such a cutie pie...bilkul laddoo..
loved his menu list...i am falling for this time ...
beautiful part...i was happy seeing their bonding...
finally they are leaving...
loved thier talkings while parting...i mean theyare somewhat accepting their feelings...

part 14..
omg!!geet dreaming about maan...
me laughing like hell with her thoughts..that...maan knows her from when she  was born...
seen her without dress too...and showering togeather..OMG!!geet is not herself any more...
she is too strong dear...also such a cutie pie...loved how she dealt with dev...


part 15..
Omg ye maan geet sey bhi zyada aage hai,...i mean he dreaming all x rated...
OMG!!imagining geet in bathrobe...but felt cute...
and he thinking he didn't opened robe in dream too...he has gone really mad...
maan baba sudar jaa..abhi aise hai tho..don't know aage kya hoga..
i am happy that maan realized his feelings...not as geet...i think she is confused...and not putting herself to think too much about that way..
loved his determination...wonderful update..

part 16...
OMG..maan has already planned every thing...
he is very good dear...brilliant ..i mean he is good in turning the situations to completly his side...
how he talked with annie about his plan...
so finally all are happy...
i found it so cute..when he prayed babaji...to help him..
geet ab chinta mat karo...maan aake sab kuch teek kardega..i mean her confusions..

part 17..
beautifull update dear..
ha ha loved maan's day dream about geet..pouring jucie on omlet...he has totally gone mad..
so they are settling their life in delhi..
loved the way geet deals with every thing..she didn't asked or orderd dean for annie's results...she just requested it be earlier..loved it..
so maan also settled now...now exited about further parts

part 18...
OMG!!!yaar ye kya tha...geet is really a surprise package for us...totally a bussiness woman...who gives her life too for her family...
loved it ..loved her surprise a lot for maan's family...
omg...she planed so much...her way of talking..any one goes fida...i  mean u r behind that so i am sure all are fida over ur writing..
and not forgettting..loved maaneet phone converstaion...

part 19..
fianlly all landed in delhi...
both are in their dream lands...
loved your comparision of geet's blush to pomogranate..u r unique..i mean sab apple sey compare karthe hai...
but i loved it ...and not forget their morning dreams...
so maan is making baby steps to get his love...
will how all reacts about geet's surprise..
and a big thanks to u dear..i have never seen this strong geet...and also jalli..

part 20..
yaar i am falling a big time for ur writing...i had a tears of happiness at the end of the update...
and i had liked so many geet's in so many ff's...but this geet i have not read...i am in love with this geet...and for ur writing...
i can't even put my words to describe her love n respect towards her family...
maan's reaction...omg!!!he is flattered now...
beautiful dear...

part 21...
maan ka gussa bilkul teek hai...he had seen her in worst case...loved his concern..
yaar when they mentioned horror movie...mujhe patha the geet bilkul darrne wala sey nahi..
but was confused because she is always cutie pie for their family..but got answers at the end..
so 1 more love story added...adi -pink..and is in fast phase..
loved maan's dailogue "Despo hoon to lagoonga hi"...

part 22...
maaneet dance loved it..
maan is pouring his insecurities indirectly to geet while talking about adi n pinky...
happy that geet understood and consoled him...now he is out from his confusion and insecurities...
aww..loved maan's little act of kissing geet's hands..

part 23...
geet avoiding maan...loved maan's idea of spending time with geet...
loved maan's way of saying what is in his heart...and he saw changes in geet too...i mean he felt he i saffecting her..
hope she to understands him...i mean how can she not once noticed his behaviour towards her...
i know maan mumbai mai bhi was so close wiht her so she ignored all...but i think she never ignored but not thought in htose lines..

part 24..
ha ha geet's mom teasing her..and maan n rahul also included..
loved their emotions when they were so close to each other..while geet was falling...loved it..

part 25..
nitya is drooling over maan...
ha ha maan accha kiya...how he showed her his attitude...gussa...OMG!!..she needs to now she is nothing to him...
"disaster zone"loved the name...
geetis such a sweet heart kitna sochti hai...

part 26..
geet is really deadly when it comes to work...loved it
ha i didn't liked it when she shouted on maan...glad that she understood soon that they were concerned about her...
rahul n maan sitting like boadygaurds while geet eating...MAST Scene...loved it a lot..
and msk cute...ha ha..

part 27..
loved their dedication to practice session for band...
maan openly drooling on geet...maan kuch sabar kar.aise chalega tho sab shak karenge tuje...
maan na bilkul bigad gaya hai...he is thinking that if geet was there with him in college,they would have had childs...OMG!!..
adi pinky tho bahut fast hai yaar..loved their explanation

part 28..
ha yiepee...maan fired nitya...i am happy..
how dare she choose geet's meeting with another Dr...OMG!!!she don't know her limits...
loved it...geet also being hyper...
finally shanti...loved when maan observes n understands her every move..her nervous ness...

part 29..
so finally adi -pinky parents agreed with rishta...
pinky's father thinking MSK is interested in pinky..ha ha ha..
dear..mai kehrahi hoon..maan ko day dreaming ka bimari hogaya hai...
kisi mouka nahi chodte maan...

part 30..
geet angry with maan...
agree that he had emmergecy,..but inform krarna chayihe tha...
geet is hell angry...she bit maan's hand...omg hai geet bhi na mouka nahi chodthe office work karne keliye...
felt bad when geet din't informed maan that she will be late..
kitna pareshan ho gaya tha maan...
loved his concern and his dailogues...
final geet madam ko akal aaya...will how she maki it up to him

part 31..
happy that raj n rishad talked about geet n maan's rishta..
agar maan baba ko patha chale tho..he will be in cloud nine...
shai kaha maan ne "geet ko sab kuch patha chal jaathi hai maan ke baare mai...eccept his love"...
loved the gift by geet to maan..and their silent conversation between the,...and loved maan's talks in shopping..

part 32..
pinky - adi married...nice..
its much needed seperation for them ...otherwise..maan will only day dreaming..and geet chodo she is buddu..
geet is thinking waht if maan don't love her...yaar how can she not see his love in his eyes...
loved how they poured their insecurities...and decided to tell each other...
glad that geet found out that she loves him...
exited to read next part...

part 33..
maan planning to propose geet...good move maan...otherwise he will have to spend his life in dreaming only...
omg ye kya geet is also planning surprise party...ab maan ka kya hoga...birthday guy with cake on his face..loved it..
loved the celebration...hope he wil propose to her...

part 34..
dahmakedar update dear..i was not expecting maan's accident...
omg all are in panic state...
hope he is fine...

part 35...
yaar hats of to maan...and u too...
it was really painful...happy that he saved all the kids...
heartwrenching to see maan in so much pain..still he did surgery...i don't  even have proper words to salute u...
i am loving this story to the core...

part 36...
yaar maan is such a sweet heart..he knows geet will be in pain...
instead of his pain too...he tried to console geet..loved geet's talks and cares...
happy wala update...

part 37...
yeipee fianlly they confessed...
but hey kya geet proposed him first...unexpected ..but she is so mature n sherni too...i think she has shaken after maan's accident..
happy that maan told her he was going to propose her on his birthday...
hai maan bhi control nahi kartha...the kiss was too fast...i mean instead of answering her he...k k he waited a lot..phir haq tho banta hai..
loved the update dear..

part 38..
loved their sweet cute talkings...
Aww...madam wants enjoy with her boyfriend...
loved every thing...

part 39...
omg..they are behaving like teenagers...chupke chuke romance...maan teasing around geet...
geet checking out maan and caught...loved the update very much dear...loved the way maan controlled his desires..
you always amazing me with their maturity...

part 40...
yaar really love is in the air..
ye dono kya se kya bann gaya...they are acting as love sick puppies...
happy to see maaneet like this..
geet deserves every teasing from maan...bcoz...bechara he gone through a lot in the starting days...crushing the pillow n all..
oye oye..maan is jelous..possesive and hell angry on dev...yaar i am imagining dev face in punch bag.
loved how geet understood everything..
and not to forget...the desert eating romance...

part 41..
yaar i will surely kill dev ...how dare he force geet...
i didn't liked that part...y geet went with dev...she is matured enough to know the intensions...
its not right to refuse...but common yaar...who is dev to think about him...
loved maan's concern...i think he was sensing some danger...so he got that dream...
me praying for next update...

part 42..
Aww there comes the saviour...
dev deserves much more for forcing geet...
maan i s the one who can console geet...i know geet will teach dev a lesson...
loved the way he made the situation lighter and made her smile..
ho ye kya typical maan didn't stopped car near dabba...

part 43...
so this was maan's plan...a dinner date with geet..
loved it...loved geet nakra's...
maan is right...maan clearly expresses his love but geet can't but loves him a lot...
i love it when they undersatnd each others thought so nicely..

part 44..
loved their dance...they are so romantic nowadays...
maan was romantic from starting...but geet i never seen geet like this...geet is drowing in maan's love...
loved maan's dailogue "he is her personal blanket" and geet's remark on maan 'tum danger ho female specis ke liye"...
was missing rahul from long...loved how she poured her pain to him..
i am not having +ve vibes for naintara...will see further..

part 45..
omg!!!i hate this naintara...she don't have mannerr's to how to talk..
well geet was silent through out..i understand...she is matured enough and don't considers naintara's talks as serious..
i know that maan can't control when any one tells bad about geet...
loved kitchen romance...
uff maan is stick with naintara now...and loved pari's answer...all are such a sweet heart..
i know no one cares about naintara talks...and also they also don't tell bad to naintara..bcoz all are hai hi itna sweet..
loved maan's answer to naintara...

part 46..
dear i didn't liked when rishab thought to force maan to this marriage...
agree that chhaygi made proposal...but what has happened to rishab n raj..
they were talking so big big...about love that day...how can they even think of forcing maan...
and they knows naintara's behaviour...maan ka decision jaan ne mai koi problem nahi hai...
but i disliked the idea of forcing maan...
and geet...ya she really needs to undersatnd people...
i was wondering...she every much undersatnds people so much...then what is wrong with her now...

part 47..
so maan ghar aagaya apni GF ko dekne keliye..
loved his dreamy dreamy words and romantic songs...
hate that naintara as always...
i don't like what all are having in their mind ...maan-naintara...don't no what happened to all...
loved his teasings to geet...and maan sahi kar raha hai...

part 48..
so geet is making up to maan for his missed date by making his fav dinner and desert...
yaar hai naintara kya samajthi hai apne aap ko..
i am not liking how every one is acting normal for naina's advances...
she really needs a jatka...
maan sach much geet keliye gift laya..so sweet...

part 49..
loved how maan expressed his respect n love to geet..
its true geet does so many things for all ...she deserves it...
sab kuch acha cahl raha tha..but what i think they r getting serious about maan -naina...
i was really not expecting this type of behaviours from all...i was dissopointed...
i mean they didn't even talked with maan...but making naina to think +ve..

part 50..
i was loving their kitchen romance..which has become common to them now a days..ha ha ha
and as i have already said i am not liking this proposal issue..
i am not angry that all are thinking about maan's marriage...
but all are considering naina as a best bride for maan...so all are hell bent on that issue...
common yaar he is MSK...can't they think he deserves someone best ..who is good at heart..
and not like naina..who throughs herselg\f...and talks all bad...
sorry dear i am not liking all family members considering this proposal...

PS:its 50 parts now so thought i will post now...
and i am dropping the idea to comment on each part...
hey extra long ho raha hai..
and i am sure u will get tired reading all this...
ye teek hoga if i comment at the end when i finish reading the story...
sorry...but i will comment a long one at the end...i am also getting tired commenting..
k now i am scared of ur reaction seeing my this comment...hope u will like it...
but i will make sure u will definately like my comment which i will comment at the end...

really loved the journey of the story...but came to know there are 100+ parts...so dropping the idea of commenting on each parts...
as i don't wanted to delete the already written comments..so i am posting here...
bahut pyar se lika hai...pad lena...Embarrassed

PSS: u have used the name simran in some updates..and sameera in some other updates...ConfusedConfused

PSSS: sorry once again as i realized this was not the good idea...
when i once saw this comment..i was shocked...and i am thinking hw will u read this my crap...
sorry but my other cmnt will be not be like this...i will not write update wise


Edited by maaneetmaahi - 02 November 2012 at 9:21am

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OMG!!!Finally completed reading the story...
loved the journey of maaneet...and their love...

yaar actually before reading the story...i was thinking it is some sad story...but after reading few parts i  come to know about the story n concept...
and a big thank you for u for making geet n maan's characters and also all the characters strong ..
and i am frankly telling you trough out the story i loved all the family members...sometimes in some other story(no offence)...i get annoyed when there is lot of family members...but i loved here bcoz...the way you binded maaneet charater with them...loved it...
this is the first story i loved very much instead of having  family drama...
u r very good at balancing every thing...u didnot went too overboard with anything...i just loved it...u rocked ...
few months back i tried to read this story..but seeing CS, i stopped(sorry)...bcoz some writers makes big mistakes when handling family with maaneet...but now i came to know that i judged u wrong...
i didn't get bored any where ...loved all the characters (except naina ,sameera DR.juneja)LOL

the way u have described geet's character through out the story...wonderful...
strong bussiness woman, handles every one's problem...angel of their family..maan's misti ..loved it...
i really loved ur geet...i have read many strong geet's in many ff's...but she has forced to become strong from some past...not like urs story...

i really appreciate u for this idea...i loved all the geet's character of muskan's and tellyme's ff...and u r the next writer ...i loved ur geet very much...

and not to forget MAAN...
OMG!!!My heart was screaming that "he didn't do anything" when naintara accused him...
how can a girl do like this...i just hated her...and u didn't mentioned well that what happened to naintara,after everyone came to know the truth...and in her marriage i came to know...she simply shifted to her home...i mean i missed every one's action n reaction to naina after truth came out...well i know she is a part of family so they didnt do any thing...

loved the karwachauth celebrations...Clap
how geet engraved maan's name in urdu  in her hand ...and maan's gift ..waist chain...i loved adi - pinky who had helped them in this...

and family trip to gao after naina fiasco...loved it...sweet family..no words...

OMG!!!that robbers tried to force geet and knifed her...it was so painful...Cry
geet even then though about aniee while she was going unconsious...amazing...hats of to u...handled very wellClap
Loved how every one supported her...took care of her...
maan finally spilled the beans then without anymore waiting ...seeing his love is craving for his embrace...
loved the after romance ..their teasing...and caught by family member's...loved those updates..

and engagement and marriage cermony...loved how u described each n every rasam...
and SR...HM..loved it...Embarrassed

ha i hated when Dr.juneja confused geet...and pointed on maan for his negligence...
and loved the way maan handled every situation..Clap
u are very different in writing complicated situations...Clap

new year party before marriage was superb...and how geet came to maan roomLOL

AWW..i just hated samira through out...i loved how u handled everything...
but i hated when maan helped her...actually i get hyper in reading such situations...i mean helping her (her act) already knowing her intentions...he had gone through with nainatara fiasco...so thought he would hv learnt from that...k i know the situation was like that to help her...
but i still hated it...and just loved how geet supported him...and family members too..
i just love u more in this situations dear...u don't create any such scences where the family losses trust in maan and all...i have scene many ff's where they create seperations...lot of fuss in these phases...and i love it when a writer write like this...turst is the important thing in love dear...i loved that,..no family member never losed trust in any one...they just got hyper for sometime..but it is accepted...love u more for this...as i won't belive in MU happened by third person...
AWW...geet gave birrth to twins...superb end dear...
i may have missed mentioning some part...
but all i n all i only say u that...this is the best concept...story...charaterisation...flow...every thing..
and i loved ur writing...very much...
now i am eager to read ur other story VIVAH ...
thank u for the wonderful story
love u,...

keep writing




Edited by maaneetmaahi - 03 November 2012 at 6:55am

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Woow... I jst read it di & i dont hv words to describe my feeling 4 dis ff its marvellous jst 1 que arises cn sumbdy realy luv lyk d maaneet in dis ff trust, luv, care & wat nt... Amazing di u r an outstndng writer... Waitng 4 d nxt part of winter sonata & epi of vivaah... :)

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Posted: 18 November 2012 at 9:09am | IP Logged
loved all the part 

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Posted: 19 November 2012 at 2:01am | IP Logged
beautiful ff
nice ff
cont soon

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Posted: 07 December 2012 at 9:10am | IP Logged
@ritzy09: Awesum n fantastic!!!!Smile

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read all the chapters
just loved it
<3

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thouroughly enjoyed the family drama. N what i appreciated the most was that no traumatic moments wr stretched for long. Happy stories Are my thing!! Gr8 work.

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