Ooeehhh nice! I love the way you built the tension beteen these two! It was palpable! Greaaat work!
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Okay, I just read all 4 parts and I adore it! The hiccups, the what the's and Arnav, I feel like slapping him and hugging him at the same time! Loveee it!Edited by SankaDevi20 - 12 years ago
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