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Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain

Os. Manvi kidnapped virmaan

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Posted: 17 December 2011 at 1:04pm | IP Logged
Maanvi ka kuch pata nahi tears ran out of jeevikas eyes as her mind repeated the words spoke by beeji.
Viren held her hand tightelynto calm her down.

The whole vadhera family arrived to rishikesh as they had found out maanvi was missing.

As they entered the house was filled with cries.

Jeevika broke down as she hugged beeji.

Mujhe Maaf kerde na main uska sahi tarreeke SE hayal nahi rakh payi.

Nahi beeji. Jeevika cried

Swamini was not pleased she wasn't worried about the missing girl.

Unlike the other family members

Bhabi don't worry hum maanvi ko dhoondle gey. Akhir gayi kahan hogi

The room had been filled with soft sobs as the men of vadhera family sorted things out with the cops.

Virens phone rang and be excuses himself to pick it up. Je came back after a while and looked as if someone had just punched a hole in his chest.

Everyone looked at him.. Before swamini could say don't worry to
Him he spoke

...maanvi ka pata chal Gaya hai...
He whispered

Those words rang in jeevikas ears and she went to him just like everyone else

Kahan hai Mannu bataye na jeevika cried

Bolo viren kahan hai maanvi dada Ji asked

Bhai bolo na virat asked

Maan..vi...ko...kidnapp ker liya Gaya hai

WHAT multiple cries broke out in the house

Aur yeh Sab Meri wajah SE

Viren yeh app Kia keh rahein hai you don't worry ab cops Sambhal Lange

Badi ma why don't you understand Manvi has been kidnapped cz of me cz I took the jaiswal case. Jaiswal kidnapped maanvi.

Everyone looked shocked as they heard who kidnapped maanvi but swamini was shocked the way viren spoke to her just for the girl.

Hume jaldhi kuch kerna parega yeh jaiswal ka case Haath SE nikla jaa raha hai

The phone rang again and this times the cops made viren put it on loud speaker. They could hear the noise in the back

Kutto kamino saro ge jail mein Narq ki agg mein jal ke maron ge

Though it was a phone and maanvi was who knows where her voice was as usual loud and everyone covered their ears but smiled at hearing her voice

Arrey isse chup karwao koi a guy cried

Nahi chup karungi Tere Baap ke maal hun. Aur ab tujhe pata chalega ke maanvi choudhry ko kidnapp Kerne ka anjaam kaminooo

Mummmyyy the guy on the phone yelled

Kia mummy Teri ma na Tujhe iss dharti pe bhoj bana ke chor diya

Aaahhh main pagal ho Jaunga issey koi to chup ker wao jabse pakra hai isski tape hatam nahi hoti.

Saaalo yehi Mili thi kidnapp Kerne ke liye

Viren grinned a little at his crazy saali

But it soon stopped when the guy said

US ki Biwi ko kyun nahi pakra woh to itni suljhi hai pata nahi isse kaise Sambhala puri zindagi. woh to ek teacher hai mazaa Aja ta

Oyyyeee Meri di k bare mein kuch mat Bol warna Tera bheja fry lar dungi

To itne time SE aur Kia ker rahi ti, mera dhimaak already haraab ho Gaya hai.

Ha ha ha yehi anjaam hota hai maanvi ko kidnap Kerne ka Meri jaan.

Hello viren said

Hello a guy was crying on the phone

Hamme app ki saali ko kidnap Kiya hua hai

Jijuuu maanvi yelled

Don't worry jiju main theek hun pashtana tho inhe parega Inko nahi pata kiss SE pala PEra hai

Teri to a guy yelled

The families in rishikesh along with the cops heard plates and all kitchen materials being thrown metal pots and all.

Nahi chorungi Tum logon ko
Chuppp they heard jaiswal

Oh toh tu hai jisne mujhe kidnapp let waya

Mere jiju na tujhe choren ge nahi
Main usse mar dalunga

Oyee pehle apnay joothey bandhna to seekhle to Phir ham Jiju k bare mein baat Karenge Darpok buzhdil Asli mardh Hota na to case fight Kerta.

They heard a slap and everyone gasped

Ha ha ha mujhe markey Bohat pashtao ge

Bhando iss ko

The family members agin heard loud noises and then

Jiju maanvi spoken the phone

Manvi Manvi Tum theek to ho
Arrey jiju yeh ham kyun ke saas bhi kabhi Bahu ti badh mein Karenge main yahan SE bhaag ne wali hun domt worry

Maanvi Tum kahan ho

Pata nahi jiju main koi nazdhika pco SE appko call kerungi ok bye

Scene shift
Maanvi had called and virat and viren had gone to the address she had told them

Viren had hugged her and virat had just stared. He had been sick with worry but showed no emotions to anyone

Maanvi had seen that and planned to talk to him later

Scene shift
Maamvi entered and sneaked up behind her sister

Dii she hugged her from the back

Manvi jeevika cried tujhe pata hai k...
Haan haan app kitni pareshan ti sorry she touched her earlobes

The family hugged her and soon the house was filled with her loudness.

Oh haan jiju main app ke liye kuch le ker ayi as everyone had looked away and were bz In their own world now they looked at her curious

Maanvi handed viren a cd

Yeh mujhe jaiswal ki pocket SE Mili

Wah Kia zamaana agaya hai kidnap
Ho gayi un kidnappers se lar ker bhagi aye atte waqt unki hi jeb marri

Ayy chep chup ker

The two laughed

Maanvi yeh Kia hai
Jiju yeh cd shahid app ko case mein madat kere jaiswal aur Uske admi iske bare mein baat ker rahe te kuch building ke contract ki recording hai

Kia oh god maanvi u just made the case so easy viren hugged his brave but crazy saali who had beaten up the kidnappers.

Everyone smiled at the exchange.

Scene shift
Maanvi went to her room to freshen up.
But she wanted some alone time too. She had been scared to hell when she had been kidnapped but when the guys called her jiju and she had acted all brave.
Tears ran down her eyes, she had never been so scared.

Someone entered the room quietly and had locked it they touched Maanvis shoulder.

Maanvi quickly wiped the tears and looked at the person. She didn't know why but she knew she can let out her feelings to him and so she started crying and he pulled her close.

Tumhe Kia Lagta hai k tum sabse chupa lo gi. Theek socha Lekin virat Singh vadhera SE nahi. Jitna time tumne chandhigarh aur mussorie mein spend Kiya hai ab tak to jaan chukka hu tumhe.

She cried and started to shake in fear.

He just sat her down and hugged her the two held eachother close.

He kissed her hair and pulled back the hair on her face.

Everything's gonna be okay main Hun na

Maanvi smiled. It was dark outside and the vadheras decided to take maanvi with them for safety reasons and for her to be a witness in the court. Though virat wanted to deny the idea as he knew maanvi would be scared. But he couldn't say anything.

Scene shift
Maanvi was sleeping in her new room. She was scared as the room was in a corner away from every other room and it was dark. Her sister had left and everyone was asleep now. She had screamed awake as she had a nightmare.

Virat woke up not because the scream was loud but because he felt something was wrong with maanvi and he hurried towards. No one else had heard the scream as Maanvis room was far.

Virat entered and saw her and ran to her and hugged her. He wrapped the blanket around them silently and she put her head on his chest and he just held her.

She finally whispered virat
He looked at her and realized what she was thinking.

He kissed her and she kissed him back. The two slept in eachothers arms the whole night and just held on to eachothers support.




Hey guys enjoy this
I kno it's kind of torture like but I had an idea on this and just wrote what entered my brain.
Also check out my other os virat jealous

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Posted: 17 December 2011 at 1:13pm | IP Logged
nice oneshot
loved it to the core
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Posted: 17 December 2011 at 1:21pm | IP Logged
Oh i loved it..so like manvi..scared n in pain bt 2 keep evry1 happy she hides it..n so like virat, he always comes 2 know abt it..gr8 work!!Clap
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Posted: 17 December 2011 at 4:59pm | IP Logged
Man it was perfect... LOL the way manvi treated those kidnappers I was like ROFL ROFL ROFL... And the other half was equally sweet... Big smile 
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Posted: 17 December 2011 at 5:50pm | IP Logged
looovedd it Smile pm me.. you never fail to surprise me .. in a good way Tongue
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Posted: 17 December 2011 at 8:47pm | IP Logged
Totally loved it... I was laughing away throughout the kidnap scene, you brought some much of laughter in the midst of a highly tension scene. Manvi was so scared despite portraying as a tough cookie in front of everyone and how Virat sensed it was so sweet. Please PM me when you update yaar.Smile
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Posted: 17 December 2011 at 9:24pm | IP Logged
Plz cont soon...it. Was lovely!!!
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Posted: 17 December 2011 at 9:46pm | IP Logged
LOL LOL Manvi and her craziness was hillarious...and the Virman moments were so sweet...Loved the way Virat is concered about her
thanks for the PM

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