Rang Badalti Odhani

LOVE STORY ch 45 END pg 32 - Page 25

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Posted: 12 years ago
hi friends...


ch :45   END



they made love...khanak tried to getup...but she cannot...shaan has hugged her 

very tight ...as if she belongs to him alone...possesive hug...khanak eyes r full of tears...

khanak:how can u...lose selfcontrol...(crying silently)

khanak:he ...  womenizer...(crying)

khanak:he loves kamini...not u...(this thought made her cry a lot)

khanak crying increased...shaan waked up on hearing the crying

shaan:khanak...(he lifted his head and saw)

shaan:khanak...khanak...

he got up from bed and weared his shorts...meanwhile...khanak got shaans 

shirt...and  she weared it...shaan switched on the light... sat besides khanak...

shaan:why r u crying...(touching her face)

shaan:did i hurt u...

khanak pushed his hand...

shaan:what happend...

khanak did not stop crying

khanak:i will give divorce...u can marry kamini...(crying ...sobing)

shaan:wat...r u mad...

khanak:s i am mad...u love kamini and ...(shaan cut her in the middle)

shaan:wat...u thought i love kamini...

shaan started to laugh...khanak became angry on seeing him laughing...

khanak:now u laugh...

shaan:wat made u think that i love her...(laughing)

khanak did not answered...

shaan:khanak answer me...

khanak:khusbhoo bhabi told me ..u both were close and marriage talk was going and ...

shaan:and(looking at her)

khanak:i saw u both kissing in the sofa before u entered the room...

there was silence...

khanak looked up at him...he was looking at her...suddenly shaan started to laugh...

shaan:my sweet idiot...

khanak:how dare u...calling me idiot...

shaan:look khanak ...kamini and me r close friends thats it...kiss..u saw it 

wrongly...in kaminis eyes there was dust ...i was just blowing air...

khanak:ah...does not believe look...

shaan:wait...

shaan went towards his wardrobe...inside it there is a small locker he opened it 

and took a beautifull gold color dairy... 

shaan gave that dairy to khanak...

shaan:open it...

khanak slowly opened it...

khanak was shocked...front page it was her picture done in pencil...below it 

written I LOVE U in hair ...

khanak does not know wat to do...she turned next page...a date was written and 

shaan has written a beautifull angel fall in my hands...drawn another picture of 

khanak...in another page thank u was written with date...her birthday 

date...farewell party dancing pictures r there...

khanak looked up at shaan...

shaan was smiling at her...his eyes r sparking...

shaan took the album and showed the page...a beautifull angel fall in my hands...

shaan:khanak ...on that day u bumped into me...on that day itself i was fallen to u...

khanak looked at him with surprise...

shaan:this one ...thank u...that was on ur birthday first word u spoke to 

me...on that day i was late...ranveer only said about ur birthday...

khanak:ranveer ..

shaan:s he knows...i said to him...i want to wish u...so he said to meera...

khanak:ahhh...

shaan:after u said thank u...i was happy...i brought a big cake and gave to 

my family... saying i have won the match...

i always used to come to amans house ...to see u only...during our farewell 

party ...meera said ur color of dress to ranveer and so i also same white... 

ranveer was the one who set that game for me...so that i can dance with u...

khanak:u all planed it...

shaan:sorry...that was the day i enjoyed each and every moment...wat tell me...

khanak:i had strange happiness on dancing with u ...but on seeing kamini...

shaan:u created a new story...

khanak:umm...(bit her tongue)

shaan:kamini is a nice friend i told her about u...she came to see u...later taht evening

 i searched u ...to tell my feelings...but u have gone...i have to go to 

US...after coming i thought of saying...when i came ur family changed house no information...

shaan:now wat...

khanak:umm...ram...

shaan:ummm...when i saw u in office...i was surprised...i asked ur name...u 

said khanak ...

khanak told him about suraj asked her ...

shaan:i dont want to leave u ...i want to see always..so i made u my PA ...

shaan:that day u talked with surajs mom...i was broken ...

shaan face was frowned and was very sad...

khanak slowly touched his hand...

shaan:i thought girls r cheaters...u know ranveer and meera loved...meeras 

parents didnot accept it and they brainwashed her and she got married to another 

...ranveer ...suicide...tears fell from shaans eyes...khanak pressed his 

hands for comfort...in anger i took u there...there my mind changed...i saved u...

shaan:khanak i am really sorry...he took her hands in his...

khanak:sh...shaan...

shaan:u forgave me...

khanak:umm...(with a smile)

shaan hugged her and kissed her face every where...he kissed her lips...neck...

shaan and khanak are hugging each other and laid in the bed...

shaan:in the hotel only i came to know...so i thoght i should not miss u this 

time...but u were angry at me for that incident...so i always come with my family 

so that i can see u and try to make u understand...

my parents also thought kamini and me.r in love...kamini told my mom about u...my mom came 

to room and she saw this dairy...she was happy...that day ur father was unwell...u 

were still angry...so i planned ...and got married to u...

khanak:wat...u planned ..i thought u married me on ur parents compelstion..(her eyes widened)

shaan:u should become a story writter...(he pulled her nose)

shaan:next day u came and said u can live ur happy life in happy resort ...then u 

said only for outside world...idea struck...

khanak:kissing me before everyone...(with small anger)

shaan:this time u thinked correctly...my sweet heart(kissed her cheeks)

shaan:on that day swimming...u were in  white sari...i was not able to control myself...and on 

aryans birthday party...

khanak blushed a lot...(closed shaans mouth)

shaan:i want to thank khusbhoo bhabi and aryan...(with a smile)

khanak:shantanu...

they kissed ...

shaan :next day y did u go to ur moms house...

khanak:ur close proxmity made me...(she blushed)

shaan:on that day i spent 25,000 rupees for aryan alone...

khanak:wat ...

shaan:to convince aryan to come and call u...but spending that much amount was worth...

khanak:how...

shaan:that day ...we slept in same bed in ur moms house...

khanak blushed and  hided her face in shaans chest...

khanak told him about their child sleeping...her thought on that day...

kamini came on that day...i told her everything so she came here to help me in...

khanak:oh ho...i thought her so bad...

shaan:all ur doubts cleared...

khanak :um...

shaan:many days r wasted and those has to be compensated so...

khanak:so...(confused look )

shaan:oh no... i have to teach u from begining...

khanak understood ...

khanak:i am a good student... i will learn anything quickly...if u know to teach 

properly(her eyes r sparking...her face full of joy..her cheeks turned red)

shaan with a smile ...he bend down and kissed her lips.they hugged and kissed each 

other passionately and with love...




dear friends thanks for all ur comments and liking my story...if any idea strikes i will write another story...
love u all
Nikita



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Posted: 12 years ago
kya????
the end..
will be back after reading..
*edited*
u completed the story on a good note..
do come up with another story nikita..
Edited by RB81 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG u ended it...nooo😭😭😭😭
plzzz do come wid another ff...if time permits u...
n shaan loved her fm beging i knw it...
thnk god everything sorted out...
n hayee loved deir romance...😳
will miss ur ff niki...🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
It ended😭😭😭 I jus cant believe this😔
The end was beautiful😊the truth wow😃
Ranveer committed suicide????😭 omg...that was shocking...😲
OMG Shaan loved her from day one...wow wow she is jus so lucky😃 he spent 25,000 bucks...OMG...and was stalking her all along😃what a romeo😳
and the diary wow he actaully was so happy jus hearing a thank you from her😊 wow so blissful...
Why did u end it???????no this is not fair😭
Plz Niki atleast give us another FF plzzz on similar lines plz plz plz...il miss ur writing and updates till then😭
Ur story was truly fabulous👏
Waiting for ur next😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
WHAT!?!?! it CANNOT ENDDD!!! :'( 

please come with another FF if not continuing this one!! :) 
but you ended it beautifully! :) loved it! and shaan is always a sweet heart! was fun reading your FF! hope you make another one soon.. waiting for that :) 


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Posted: 12 years ago
what???it ended!!!!i love this 'love story'❤️❤️nikki plz come with another FF..hope u make it soon😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
i luved u r FF...plz come back with another.

            i'm egarly waiting for u r new story.
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg!
this is  last part...😭
niki why?
but Your END is so powerful...and good end...all the truth revel...
Shaan loved her from day one... i knw it...the shaan diary wow ...
he wrote all this about the khanak so nice yaar...shaan so happy jus hearing a thank you from her😊
all this planning of shaan...
kushboo babhi and aryan also include this plan?is very surprise for me...
aryan...?
niki i asked u what it the if of aryan?...and i got the answer   he spent 25,000 bucks...to aryan for spend time with khanak... that's so nice yaar...
really wonderful part...😊
but u end here...
niki please come with another FF
is request 
love u niki ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi friends...
thanks for ur comments...
regards 
Nikita
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Posted: 12 years ago
it was a good end but why did u ended it