Rang Badalti Odhani

LOVE STORY ch 45 END pg 32 - Page 24

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next day night...at 2 o clock...khanak was crying silently...shaan was hugging 

khanak...khanak bare back was resting on shaans bare chest...they were only 

covered with bed sheet...no clothes...

khanak:how do u lose control...he is a womenizer...he is bad..(scolding herself)

khanak recalled what happened earlier that day...


previous day night

khanak:it was a dream...ufff..

khanak slowly got up and went near shaan...he was sleeping peacefully...hugging a 

pillow...khanak thought ...in that place of pillow...she blushed...

for long time khanak was starring at shaan...when did she slept she does not 

know...in the morning(sunday) khanak waked up late...she turned towards 

bed...shaan was not there...khanak went to get ready...khanak opened her room...a 

loud laughing sound was heard...from the opposite room laughing sound was 

heard...it was shaan and kamini laughing...shaan and kamini came out ...kamini was 

wearing a sleveless shirt and a mini skirt...holding shaans hand and walked 

towards dinning table...shaan didnot notice khanak...because he was busy talking 

and laughing with kamini...khanak stood there as a doll...she was thinking how 

they were holding hands and shaan was looking very happy with kamini...

aryan:chachi...chachi...lets go eat...

khanak and aryan walked towards dinning...khanak was stopped in her way...kamini 

was sitting in khanaks place...aryan pulled khanak made her sit near him...that is 

opposite to shaan and kamini...khanak did not eat she was just stirring the 

spoon...kamini took some from shaans plate and ate...

shaan:harilal...

harilal brought cup with gulab jamun...placed infront of each one...

kamini:oh...jamun...my favorite...oh shaan how sweet of u..(kissed his cheeks)

khanak anger was rising...khanak did not ate that jamun...instead she smashed it into paste... 

kamini:shaan..

shaan:umm...

kamini:lets swim yar...its been long time...

they went to swimming pool...

madhavi and rajiv went to talk in cell as they had a call..khusbhoo aryan and 

akshay went to their rooms to do homework for aryan

khanak was the one who was sitting alone in dinning starring opposite chairs...

when harilal called only she came to reality...khanak spent most of the time in 

kitchen  or with aryan helping him with work...not with full heart...

shaan and kamini went out in the afternoon...khanak skipped her lunch...in the 

evening she went to temple...because lot of questions going in her heart...she 

entered the house at 8'oclock...in the hall there was no one...rajiv and madhavi 

gone for party...akshay family in there room...khanak slowly walked towards her 

room...khanak stood still with shock...kaminis door was opened...kamini was 

sitting in the sofa and shaan was sitting in front...hands r holding kaminis 

face...(shaans back was seen by khanak)standing from khanaks place it was like 

shaan is kissing kamini...

kamini:ah...

khanak quickly went to her room...tears were flowing ..khanak was broken.. 

khanak:shantanu...how can u...(crying a lot)

khanak mind..why r u crying khanak...he married u because of his parents 

compelstion...

khanak:no...i love him...

khanak mind...u r a fool...khusboo bhabhi told u...they were close...marriage 

talk was also going...khanak was broken a lot...khanak mind...its all ur fault...

khanak:s...my fault...

she wiped her face...she took a paper and started to write...then she took the bag 

and stuffed her things...she was holding the paper...she saw the big pic...there 

wedding pic that was taken in hospital...

door opened...she turned to look ...it was shaan...he closed the door and stood 

before her with a raised eyebrows...

khanak:oh u came...correct time only u have come...

khanak:take it...(holding the paper before him)

shaan:what is this(he did not get the paper)

khanak:my divorce paper..u can marry kamini...ah...

khanak cheeks turned red her eyes blinked black her ears did not hear 

anything...then only she realised shaan has slapped her on cheeks...

khanak was holding her cheeks and standing there like a child...shaan went 

close...cupped her face and kissed her on lips...it may lasted seconds or minute 

or more...then shaan looked at her face she was still standing like the 

same...shaan hugged her and kissed her again...khanak now came to reality and 

that kiss made her lose her control..she kissed him back...kiss turned to be more 

passionate...it is there first kiss...and there emotions were like flood..they 

were out of control...they both kissed each other...during their kiss they moved 

towards the wall..now khanak back reasting on wall..shaan was so close...his hands 

were in her face...hands slowly moved towards her shoulder...he pressed 

it...khanak hands were back of shaans head and pulling him more closer...his hands 

removed the pins...and her saree top fell down...khanak moaned...shaans hand 

slowly moved towards her blouse...it touched her...khanak moaned in his 

mouth...shaan bend his head towards her blouse ...khanak breathed heavily...

khanaks hand moving around shaans head and careesing his face...shaan unbuttoned 

her blouse hooks and kissing her from neck and moving down...khanak whispered 

shantanu...khanak pulled him up and kissed him in his lips...khanak started to 

unbutton his shirt...while shaans hand undoing her inskirt...while they were 

kissing...shaan lifted her holding his hands  at back of her(he didnot carry)her 

face little up...she bent and kissed his face...they both fall on bed and shaan 

removed the remaining bareer between them...shaan was top of khanak...his hands 

touching every place of khanak...shaan kissed her neck...her earlobe...moved down 

from neck to...his hands touched and his lips kissed every place...khanaks hand 

r around shaans back and her nails dug his back...she moaned...his hands and 

khanaks hand intersected...their body moved against each other...khanak moaned in pain
 
small tear fell from her eyes...shaan kissed her on lips...they made love...







 

















 










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Posted: 12 years ago
omg! dont stop hereee!! continue please! i wanna know what khanak will do!! oh god! and why did shaan slap her??? :'( 
CONTINUE PLEASE! ASAP! :) haha 
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Posted: 12 years ago
hotty hot niki..
no ne can hold their emotions for too long..when dams burst..same happened here..
but i didnt expect shaan to slap her..thats not fair..
rest i liked it..
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG OMG OMG OMG
😳😳😳 WHAT A BLUSHY UPDATE...IM YET TO CATCH MY BREATH😳
WOAH Niki...
Ur really back with a bang...I dunno wat else to say😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG NIKI...
m blushing lke anything...☺️☺️☺️
dis was hawt...btw y shaan slapped her😕
waiting fr deir morn scene hw will dey face each other...so update soon😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
its amazing  niki...what the update yaar...fully hot 
i blush every time...☺️
shaan slap her... i totally imagine the reaction of khanak face  and after this... i am speechless...they made love...how react khanak?...u already  mention in your previous update...
she was crying in midnight... 
waiting for the next update...please niki update soon cant wait now...
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Posted: 12 years ago
omggg!!!!!!!
loved the update...
cnt wait fr d nxt part... 
update sooon
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg nikki what a hot updateloved it..😃waiting for more..plz update soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow!!! so hottt update😉...m blushing r8 now☺️...loved it
but, why did Shaan slap her???...😕
waiting for the next update😍
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Posted: 12 years ago
waiting 4 ur update...R u updating today???