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.sariminoz. thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg wat a dream ...u r going to finish it 😔
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Posted: 12 years ago
sry couldnt comment on previous parts...
omg she fainted??????
n dat was dream...😆 though it was actually happ...😆
u r ending in 4 or 5 update ...?????😕 y?????
dnt do dis...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Niki wow 2 updates😃how lovely😊
OMG wat a weird dream😳awww poor khanak she must have been relly shocked😆😆 aha so Shaan is gonna open up😃😃finally im waiting to hear the truth...both updates were awesome i enjoyed reading it😃

Hey Niki i think i didn't hear something right😔u ending this????😭 oh come on u cant do that...plzzz yaar ...at the least write another story plzzz il really miss this😔plzzz don't stop writing...

Waiting for the next update😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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khanak:looked up at him with confused look

shaan:last night u fainted...khusbhoo bhabi changed u into...(with a smile)

khanak was relaxed a little...she was about to getup shaan stopped her...

shaan:wait...what do u need...

khanak:nothing...going to sofa...

shaan:no need...

khanak:wat...(with angry look)

shaan:dont think wrongly...(with a smile)

shaan:u sleep in bed ...i will sleep in sofa...

khanak:no...its okay...i will...

shaan:no u sleep...

he turned off the light and went to sleep in sofa...

khanak just laid down in bed...she could not sleep...she was thinking about party

aryan dressed and came to the hall...his school friends and many family friends 

have come...aryan was standing before the cake ...khusboo and akshay r standing 

either side of aryan...khanak was standing besides khusbhoo and behind her shaan 

was standing besides akshay madhavi and rajiv r standing...aryan cut the cake and gave to 

everyone..while he was giving to khanak shaan pushed khanak a little 

unknowingly...(kids r moving to aryan)..so little cream was in khanaks 

cheeks...khanak moved aside from the group to get tissue...suddenly she was 

pulled...khanak back was resting on pillar...shaan was standing front... his hands 

r on wall on either side of khanaks face...

khanak:wat..r...

shaan:sh...(he kept his index finger on her lips)

shaan and khanak r starring at each other...shaan slowly moved near her cheeks and 

with his mouth he removed the cream...

khanak closed the eyes...

khanak opened the eyes shaan was not there...she touched her cheeks ...she can 

feel his lips...her cheeks turned red...drinks r arranged outside so that kids 

will not come...madhavi asked khanak to call shaan...so she went to look for 

him...she came out and standing near a table where drinks r placed...shaan was talking 

with young teen girls ..they r flirting with shaan...khanak looked at them with 

anger...she looked at the table there was a glass ..she thought it was water to 

control anger she thought of drinking it...she drank it...but it was alcohol ...drink was to strong for 

her and she fainted...

khanak:omg...i have drunk...because of him...

khanak heart ...u r jealous ...khanak :...for wat...khanak mind u can not tolerate 

girls talking to shaan...

khanak:no..that can't be...

khanak heart u have feelings for him...

khanak mind no ...i hate him...i have to do something ...ah...thats it...

next day morning 

shaan and khanak r coming for breakfast

aryan:bye chachu...chachi...(left to school)

shaan and khanak started eating with others

khanak:mom... dad

they looked up..

khanak:i am going to moms house for two days...

shaan stopped eating and looked up...

khanak:shantanu said ok...(she didnot even talked to him about this)

khanak and shaan looked each other...shaan started eating again...

madhavi:ok beta...shaan is dropping u ?

khanak:no mom...sanjay bhaiya is coming...

madhavi:why beta...shaan can drop u...

khanak:shantanu is having work out mom  and shantanu only said to call bhaiya to take 

me to house...

shaan:s mom (without looking at anyone continuing his breakfast)







 

















 










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Posted: 12 years ago
Ahhh😊 Niki u updated🤗
She got drunk🤣
Oh she is going home ...gud decision  Shann is jus too much,why cant he jus tell her the truth...wowww waiting to see his reaction...
lovely update...waiting for the next😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
niki
thanks i got the answer why khanak fainted.i am very happy khanak jealous ..and took drink by mistek...
And also the birthaday scene omg! with his mouth he removed the
cream...from her cheek...thats one realy cute..khanak feelings for him...but
khanak mind no ...she pretend to hate him...she will
have to do something ...
I think she keep distance between shaan and her...she allready started...waiting for how the react shaan?
Please dont end this ff soon please.
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Posted: 12 years ago
y is khanak running like this??
torturing herself..
this is too bad she announcing her going to her maika in dining table n announcing it like she discussed with shaan that too with him by his side..
now i feel shaan is going to do something while she is there in her mom's house that would be beyond her control..
i'm waiting for that..
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Posted: 12 years ago
khank getting jealous  wow soon she will realise her feelings fr shaan cant wait fr that to happen
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Posted: 12 years ago
just caught up with last few updates...WOW!!!!!.👏...nice updates
Shaan never leaves a chance to kiss her...😳
the dream part was hot...☺️
Khanak got drunk as she was jealous...😉😆
now, she is going 2 her parents' place & announced it as if she had already discussed it with Shaan...thats not good
now, waiting 2 c wht he is going 2 do next...😉


what?? u r going 2 finish it????😲!!!!😭... but, then plz, do write one more...its a request...plzzz😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ch :42





khanak:shantanu is having work out moma and shantanu only said call bhaiya to take 

me to house...

shaan:s mom (without looking at anyone continuing his breakfast)

madhavi:shall i come and drop u beta...

shaan:no...sanjay bhaiya will come...(he got up  and went to office)

khanak was little frowned...khanak heart...y do u frown...khanak mind i feel a 

loss...khanak heart u feel sad ...he didnot  kiss u ...khanak mind...no...

khanak heart...s thats the truth...khanak  ...no...

sanjay came and took her to house...

she talked with her parents and anjali ...she spent some time with satvika ...in 

the evening she went to temple...there she was thinking wat to do...she came to 

her house...she entered her fathers room

khanak:i have to talk to u papppa...(she stood shocked like a statue)

sharma:i am happy beta ..u have come here..(talking to shaan anjali was also talking)

aryan:chachi...(went and hugged her)

sharma:came from temple...

khanak:ji pappa...

khanak:when did u came...

aryan:now only chachi...wait i will bring ...(he left)

shaan:pappa take rest...

they all came out to hall...in the hall there r lots of new dolls and toys and fruits bag...

anjali:all toys r nice shaan...

shaan:bhabhi...wat did doctor said about pappas health...(looking at khanak)

anjali:doctor said to take rest...no tension to be given...

aryan:chachi...this is for u...chachu brought it...

it is a chocolate icecream cake...

anjali:special for wife alone...(with a smile)shaan smiled at her..

aryan took a piece and gave to khanak...

chachi come here i will show u...he pulled her and went to car...

khanak saw lots of toys in back seat...

khanak:when did u buy these aryan...

aryan:chachu got me these toys...in the evening only..he said he will buy ..if ...

shaan:arayn ur mom is on phone...

aryan went running in...

khanak went in...

aryan:chachi ...tomorrow leave for me...we can swim tomorrow

aryan:chachi come lets go to our home...

khanak:aryan...i will be here for 2 days ...then...

aryan:no chachi...then me and chachu will stay here with u...

shaan:no aryan...i am going home...

anjali:come shaan ...u have never stayed here u have to stay...

vidhya and sharma requested him and shaan accepted to stay

khanak was shocked ...aryan called his mother and asked permission...

khanak was really worried...in her bedroom no sofa and bed is not that big...

at night khanak  and aryan went to room

one side of bed is close to the wall..

aryan:chachi ...i will sleep that corner...(went to lay down other side of him is wall)

aryan:come chachi...sleep next to me...

khanak moved next to him...khanak was telling him a story

shaan entered the room...khanaks heart beat fast...she was about to getup ...

aryan did not leave her...and he asked shaan sleep next to khanak...

shaan removed his shirt...khanak saw his bare chest...she felt a shiver...khanak 

quickly turned to aryan side and kept one hand on aryan...

shaan switch offed the light and laid down near khanak...

khanaks felt a shiver when his body brushing hers...heart beat increased...

aryan:chachu put ur hand on me...

khanak:y ...aryan...(with tense)

aryan:in our room mom dad and me will be sleeping like this...then only i can sleep.

khanak thought oh no...i should not have come here...

shaan turned ...khanaks back is resting on shaans chest and he slowly put his hand 

over...his hand is touching khanak waist and finally shaans finger touching 

khanaks finger on aryan...khanak moved her fingers...but aryan holded both the 

hands together and slept...khanak cheeks turned red and she doesnot know when she slept...

morning khanak opened her eyes and she was shocked...

her head is resting on shaans chest and she is hugging him around his waist...his 

one hand is around her shoulders and another one was holding aryan...aryan came to 

shaan side during night...she tried to getup but she could not...khanak looked 

up at him...he was sleeping peacefully and she thought he is holding a son of his 

and hers ...that thought made her blush khanak mind...wat ...ur son...have u 

forgotten happy...khanak:ah...he went there with girls...that thought made her 

angry and tears formed in her eyes...she slowly managed to got up and went to get ready...

in the dinning table...

pappa we r going now...shantanu is having important work...

sharma:u can stay ma...

khanak:no pappa...i will come and stay next time...

shaan left khanak and aryan at house and went to office...

in the evening aryan took khanak to basketball court to play...that was made for 

shaan...khanak and aryan were playing ...shaan came there with shorts and 

vest...khanak was wearing saree...

aryan:chachu come play with us...

shaan:no ...i am tired...

khanak smiled a little...

shaan :ummm...ok one match(looking at khanak)

they started to play...shaan was around khanak (like kuch kuch kota hai...think 

it guys)...shaans hand brushing hers and ...they were close...khanak jumped and 

put the ball ..ball went out of that hall aryan went to take it and she missed her 

balance and she was about to fall...shaan holded her..shaans hand resting on her 

waist...her hands over his...they were breathing heavyly...khanak could feel 

shaans breath around her neck...khanak closed her eyes...shaan slowly bend and 

kissed her neck...khanak shivered on his lips touch...he placed soft kisses on her 

neck...khanak tilted her head ...so that shaan can have full access...shaan was 

placing soft kisses and his hand on her bare waist tightened and it careesed 

it...there is no gap between them...


a girl voice called shaan...shaan from outside...




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